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Post by iqbal.ai Fri May 21, 2010 3:16 pm

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Post by rangalua Fri May 21, 2010 3:25 pm

Welcome here in CGP sir
Nice modeling skills & AO.
IMHO:
- a post processing in photoshop for:
Entourage, background & lightings
- or simply put some 3D entourage & background with the use of your modeling & rendering software.
- put some side wallk
- exterior lamps
- adjusting parameters like refraction & glossiness in glass materials.

Enjoy & stay here...
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Post by deosrock Fri May 21, 2010 6:10 pm

-nice work..
--update this following sir rangalua's comment..
---i may add, put some displacement on grass
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Post by nomeradona Fri May 21, 2010 6:22 pm

- try to use the sky (sun).. seems to me this is just GI.
- use a much better glass vismat and perhaps use background hdri for reflection
- add now some entourage like plantings, sidewalk and other exterior elements
- introduce bumps and maybe grass dislacement (new vray 1.48.... hasnew displacement per material instead of global displacement.
- add background sky in photoshop...
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Post by corpsegrinder Fri May 21, 2010 7:16 pm

we know that you know what are the "basic" things lack in your scene... just add them up.
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Post by iqbal.ai Fri May 21, 2010 7:42 pm

thank to you all...
actually i'm know what are not enough in mine rendering....but i dont know how to set it .......or sirs, can u give me the tutorial setting or just post in here the setting such as for the bump/displacement, refraction & glossiness and the hdri setting and the sky (sun setting)....

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Post by corpsegrinder Fri May 21, 2010 7:49 pm

iqbal.ai wrote:thank to you all...
actually i'm know what are not enough in mine rendering....but i dont know how to set it .......or sirs, can u give me the tutorial setting or just post in here the setting such as for the bump/displacement, refraction & glossiness and the hdri setting and the sky (sun setting)....

sir, there are lots of tutorials in this site, try browsing the tutorial section.
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Post by Galaites07 Fri May 21, 2010 8:40 pm

sir okey na ung rendering mo, update mo nalang ito using element na nasabi na above.

sa akin konting adjustment sa brightness and contrast sa PS.

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Post by iqbal.ai Fri May 21, 2010 9:12 pm

thankz for you advice and comment....

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Post by iqbal.ai Fri May 21, 2010 10:50 pm

why hdri can't effect my rendering?

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Post by nomeradona Sat May 22, 2010 12:07 am

hdri? turn off the physical camera.

all your questions are in the manual read it..

http://www.cgpinoy.org/vray-for-sketchup-tutorials-f97/vray-manual-t9325.htm
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Post by iqbal.ai Sat May 22, 2010 12:26 am

after sun (sky) , hdr and grass bump.. need comments and advice please.....

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Post by iqbal.ai Sat May 22, 2010 4:01 am

please comments ...........

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Post by silvercrown Sat May 22, 2010 7:05 am

Add:
-Background
-Sidewalk
-Cam Correction
-Trees and plants
-Cars if you want...

If you want settings, browse the tutorial section there's lots of settings there, you can try them all...
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Post by corpsegrinder Sat May 22, 2010 7:11 am

Add trees, plants,etc., to at least have a good scene.(composition)
You can save it as PNG format(.png), then open it in Photoshop and add a background(sky,trees,etc)... Or you can make a plane with texture(background) directly to your scene..

Then, change the textures and mats like the glass ang the road.. There are also glass tutorials in this site by bokkins ang cloud20.. gudluck.
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Post by iqbal.ai Sat May 22, 2010 10:19 pm

I'M VERY APPRECIATE THAT.........TQ

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Post by icefrik19 Sat May 22, 2010 10:33 pm

maybe used other mat on gate and try to used glass by sir bokkins...
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Post by iqbal.ai Tue May 25, 2010 3:25 am

this is the final render... comment please....

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Post by ERICK Tue May 25, 2010 3:32 am

wow.. much better than the previous.. maybe you should remove the tree infront (the opaqued)... or just replace it with a much better model... texture on the road need a much bigger one too...
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Post by kira_01 Tue Jun 01, 2010 8:57 am

Sir very nice modelling....you can add ridge roll...and some elements so that it will reflect on your glass. thumbsup
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