first architectural scene. revision # 1

good day guys. i just want to post the revised exterior scene i made last time. I tried to follow all the comments from the first post.
-light and shadows.> im still working on using vray sun
- entourage > i just added more foliage
- mapping > i minimized the bump on walls and the rattan furniture.
- models > i added height on my wheat grass and changed the green yoda chair to a simple outdoor seating piece


first render


revised render



attempting night time scene


comments are always welcome

http://www.cgpinoy.org/first-5-post-3d-work-in-progress-f15/first-architectural-scene-t11086.htm

nice one!

LadiesMan217 wrote:http://www.cgpinoy.org/first-5-post-3d-work-in-progress-f15/first-architectural-scene-t11086.htm

moved.

i think problem lang sa Design tita, yung direction ng bubong mo, tingin ko magiging problem nyan ay waterproofing, lahat ng tubig daloy nyan papasok sa valley sa gitna pa ng Bldg.. ganun pa man nice rendering

galing ng update,ang nakit ako lang dito yong grass medyo matalim sya,parang nakakatakot apakan,something bermuda sana para mas smooth.imho lang naman pero ganda ng update mo kesa una.wait pa natin mga master....

jhames joe albert infante wrote:i think problem lang sa Design tita, yung direction ng bubong mo, tingin ko magiging problem nyan ay waterproofing, lahat ng tubig daloy nyan papasok sa valley sa gitna pa ng Bldg.. ganun pa man nice rendering

naisip ko din yan sir. the design it's not 100% feasibile. hintayin nlng ntin may makagawa ng solution sa ganitong design problem.buti hindi ito nag-eexist. thanks.

zdesign wrote:galing ng update,ang nakit ako lang dito yong grass medyo matalim sya,parang nakakatakot apakan,something bermuda sana para mas smooth.imho lang naman pero ganda ng update mo kesa una.wait pa natin mga master....

thanks sa comment, ok na kaya if i'll just change the bitmap image,or may other way pa to soften it?

Nice.

kat palmares wrote:

zdesign wrote:galing ng update,ang nakit ako lang dito yong grass medyo matalim sya,parang nakakatakot apakan,something bermuda sana para mas smooth.imho lang naman pero ganda ng update mo kesa una.wait pa natin mga master....

thanks sa comment, ok na kaya if i'll just change the bitmap image,or may other way pa to soften it?

mas maganda change mo sya ng mapping kasi madami naman magaganda grass na soft lang e - http://www.cgtextures.com/
dyan hanap ka na lang madami dyan.

zdesign wrote:

kat palmares wrote:

zdesign wrote:galing ng update,ang nakit ako lang dito yong grass medyo matalim sya,parang nakakatakot apakan,something bermuda sana para mas smooth.imho lang naman pero ganda ng update mo kesa una.wait pa natin mga master....

thanks sa comment, ok na kaya if i'll just change the bitmap image,or may other way pa to soften it?

mas maganda change mo sya ng mapping kasi madami naman magaganda grass na soft lang e - http://www.cgtextures.com/
dyan hanap ka na lang madami dyan.

thanks for the link.

your work is great specially the revised render, about the butterfly roof design, i think that is fine, there is always an structural solution for that.
comment ko lang is about the control of your material/maps tilling, try to do some tricks on that especially the bump maps on your exterior wall.
about the night scene, your light pointing on the wall are to strong, try to adjust the intensity and add some color on light to give dramatic effect, add some spotlight and pin light 3d model,para hindi mag mukhang yung ilaw coming from no where.

keep it up, cheers....