first architectural scene

i just want to share my first architectural design and rendering. na inspire lang po sa mga members at masters na architects ng cgp.
from interior design to architecture, i really dont know that much about arki standards. pa comment nalang po for my improvement.
thanks

im even not sure if this is the front or back yard.

sa tingin ko back yard yan may pool e....comment ko lang;

- gamit ka ng vray sun para sa shadow at maglaro pa yung mga element mo sa scene e.g. glass and mga canopy.
- yung bump sa wall malalaki masyado
- IMHO yung green chair sa may porch hindi sya bagay.
- yung palm tree sa left side odd ata. mas okey kung full grown tree ang ilagay mo.
- plant mo sa right side sa tabi ng wall na nasa pot mas okey kung mas mataas yung height nya.

f-fortyone wrote:sa tingin ko back yard yan may pool e....comment ko lang;

- gamit ka ng vray sun para sa shadow at maglaro pa yung mga element mo sa scene e.g. glass and mga canopy.
- yung bump sa wall malalaki masyado
- IMHO yung green chair sa may porch hindi sya bagay.
- yung palm tree sa left side odd ata. mas okey kung full grown tree ang ilagay mo.
- plant mo sa right side sa tabi ng wall na nasa pot mas okey kung mas mataas yung height nya.

wow. nice thanks ha. i-rerender ko ulit. i'll try yung vray sun. vray light lng kasi ginagamit ko. sna di sya mahirap timplahin. and the plant din, mas may dating nga cguro kung mas may height.yung bump sa wall i was thinking of prang maalon tlga na wall, parang modern mediterranean something like that. but i'll change it kung mas maganda=) thank you!

-WOW!nice start!
--keep posting!

nice design maam, malalaki lang po yung bump ng wall..
keep posting.

keitzkoy wrote:nice design maam, malalaki lang po yung bump ng wall..
keep posting.

thanks. i'll correct the mapping

ganda po mam... more experiments with sun and shadows din i think ^^

nahumreigh wrote:ganda po mam... more experiments with sun and shadows din i think ^^

yup. i agree, mas mganda nga may play of shadows. im working on it. thanks!

ayos

almost there mam kat..additional comment for me as everybody already pointed suggestions..
1. chaise lounge rattan material kunting adjust, make it smaller as we know its veryhard to bend a 12 mm round core natural rattan pole..mas bagay cguro xa for 6 mm arorog as we call it..

2.YODA chair-natural rattan would be great instead of green.and adjust mo din yung diameter ng rattan make it smaller..

good start mam:D light and shadows n lang

moothe wrote:almost there mam kat..additional comment for me as everybody already pointed suggestions..
1. chaise lounge rattan material kunting adjust, make it smaller as we know its veryhard to bend a 12 mm round core natural rattan pole..mas bagay cguro xa for 6 mm arorog as we call it..

2.YODA chair-natural rattan would be great instead of green.and adjust mo din yung diameter ng rattan make it smaller..

thanks sa comments,pang furniture design. im working on it. i'll just change the mapping of rattan lounge. i kinda replaced nalang yung yoda chair. some find it not appropriate for the entrance,,,thanks!