Practice Exterior (Update Sa Lighting)

Sensya na po sa mga kulang practice exterior lng po, mga master pa cnc nalang alam ko dami pa kailangan improved pero sa ngayon i2 lng muna kaya ko share sa inyo. yung model na bahay napulot ko lng sa internet. the rest ginawa ko na.


Mga Master update lng po sa practice Exterior ko, Salamat nga pala kila Sir Chobs, Arkiemund and Render Master sa kanilang mga tips sana marami pa po kayo matulungan sa mga katulad kung baguhan..thanks and more power to all the members of CGPinoy. C&C are most welcome for more improvement.

That's a good start. My suggestions:

-Try mo babaan camera height mo. About 1.6m or less then orbit a bit towards right to avoid seeing the blank bakot sa left side.

-Since you are using i2 use size multiplier in the vraysun as zero pare walang bluring ang shadow, this way you can speed up your render time.

-Scale you brick texture a little bit din.

I think that's it for now. It will be helpful if you also post your render settings so that we can optimize your render time. Good luck!

Wow salamat po sa mga tips sige sir post ko po setting ko para mkita ng mga master at para ma improved lahat ng mali...salamat po ulit sa pagdaan sir chobs

A perfect example of that goshdarned TEXTSPEAK; the thread starter use "i2" meaning "ito". Master chobs thought the TS meant he was USING an "i2", maybe thinking its an i2 core rig or something?...
Hay naku...

sensya na po master cloud hindi na po mauulit.

Uhuh... Ic. Your render setting is fine. It's the Composition, Texture and Lighting that can be improved more.

Composition:
- I mentioned it already on the above. You can also use less than 40mm lens here like 30-35mm but not below 24mm that's going to give you a lot of distortion.

Texture:
- If you can afford to look for better quality maps that'll be better. Also try putting your blur setting sa map mo into 0.01 para massharp ang textures mo. Bump maps are essential on the roof and stones.

Lighting:
- Usually in this kind of composition, I would love to see shadow casted by a tree in the foreground or infront para mafill mo ung space and picture mo.
- The sun in high afternoon and your scene is not cloudy so usually sharp ang shadows nyan, walang blur sa edges.

That's it for now. I'll wait for the progress.

nice sir. ok malaki na yun inimprove mula nun sa first image:D

Salamat sir lightfoot sa pagsilip mo!!!

nice update...

some comments:
- yung gate mo sa caprort hindi mabubuksan, kasi nakafix sa columns.
- walang texture yung roll up door
- use vertical shift
- mapping sa roof,medyo maliit and add bump also.
- move mo pa siguro camera to the right, kasi wala naman makikita sa left side masyado. (IMHO)

Yan namannn... Huge level up... Maganda maganda... A notch down sa radius ng AO maybe?... Very nice... Try to practice modelling too para controlado mo lahat ng aspect ng rendering mo...

phranq wrote:nice update...

some comments:
- yung gate mo sa caprort hindi mabubuksan, kasi nakafix sa columns.
- walang texture yung roll up door
- use vertical shift
- mapping sa roof,medyo maliit and add bump also.
- move mo pa siguro camera to the right, kasi wala naman makikita sa left side masyado. (IMHO)

Noted po yan sensya na sir nagmamadali lng po kasing i-post update ko ulit ito sir...thanks sa pag-silip

cloud20 wrote:Yan namannn... Huge level up... Maganda maganda... A notch down sa radius ng AO maybe?... Very nice... Try to practice modelling too para controlado mo lahat ng aspect ng rendering mo...

Master cloud salamat sa pagsilip mo ok pagaralan ko rin modeling sa ngayon nandyan na nga ako....sana hindi ako mahirapan.

nice updates, things to work on.
- sa roofing, medyo maliliit pa rin ang tiles
- sa front column brick tile, medyo maliliit pa rin
- tanggalan ng reflection ang sidewalk

render master wrote:nice updates, things to work on.
- sa roofing, medyo maliliit pa rin ang tiles
- sa front column brick tile, medyo maliliit pa rin
- tanggalan ng reflection ang sidewalk

Noted po yan render master salamat ulit sa mga tips.....

sir ok naman pala tama mga masters gawin mo lang mga comment nila,gagaling na nagcocoment sayo o!practice lang

akoy wrote:sir ok naman pala tama mga masters gawin mo lang mga comment nila,gagaling na nagcocoment sayo o!practice lang

Salamat sir sa pag-silip mo, hehehe hindi ko pa gusto sir eh kaya nagpapaturo pa ako sa mga master para mas ma-improved pa.