two storey green house...Updated
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two storey green house...Updated
isa pa pahabol mga sir....project nmin sa ofice at ako uli nagdesign...again in vray for sketchup at konting ps....pa cnc uli mga masters for improvement...thanks at God bless...more power CGPinoy!!!!!
Last edited by archki_rain on Tue Apr 27, 2010 11:40 pm; edited 2 times in total
archki_rain- CGP Newbie
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Re: two storey green house...Updated
Gusto ko yung design ng house sir, IMHO lang po...sana reduce mo yung green niya and the rest white or beige (well kung yan ang gusto ng Owner, wala na tayong magagawa...suggestion lang atin)...door knob sir nawawala...yung car, walang kulay...and grass, need ng displacement...yung lang po...keep posting
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Re: two storey green house...Updated
thanks sir 3dzone bilis mo po talga magcomment will update sir my renders....
archki_rain- CGP Newbie
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Re: two storey green house...Updated
nice
- tangaling ang 3d peep
- crop mo ung image
- walang knob
- glas is too reflctive
- ung porch,,ibhin mo lng ng finish...same kac sila sa road & carport,and ibahin mo nlng din ng finish ung carport
- white outlines nung mga trees
- ilapit mo pa ung camera.
- at least change the color of the car,para kasing clay..pro huwag ung shocking na color ha
oks na po ang lighting..
- tangaling ang 3d peep
- crop mo ung image
- walang knob
- glas is too reflctive
- ung porch,,ibhin mo lng ng finish...same kac sila sa road & carport,and ibahin mo nlng din ng finish ung carport
- white outlines nung mga trees
- ilapit mo pa ung camera.
- at least change the color of the car,para kasing clay..pro huwag ung shocking na color ha
oks na po ang lighting..
Re: two storey green house...Updated
wow sir jarul...hehe thanks sir sa pagcomment...matagal tagal nadin ako lagi nagaabang ng mga post mo sir ng mga renders mo kkainspire kahit na vray for sketchup un gamit ko....will try to update sir my render on this one....God bless sir....
archki_rain- CGP Newbie
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Re: two storey green house...Updated
nice design sir..nasabi na po ng mga masters yung comments, sakin cam correction lang sir, pero depende na rin sainyu sir baka pasadya nyo,hehe..post more sir..
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Re: two storey green house...Updated
sir keitz thanks sa pagdaan....nga e dun pa din ako medyo mahina sa kung san un magandang location ng camera....pero ayun nga practice-practice nlang to improve my presentations....God bless sir....
archki_rain- CGP Newbie
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Re: two storey green house...Updated
Nice start sir! Nasabi na lahat ng mga masters mga comments. Good luck!
Re: two storey green house...Updated
kala ko "green" house kulay green pla:D
yung mga comments nasabi na
imho masyado yata na green tone down cguro konti like 3dzone commented, saka add cguro ng ibng materials pr may texture un structure
yung mga comments nasabi na
imho masyado yata na green tone down cguro konti like 3dzone commented, saka add cguro ng ibng materials pr may texture un structure
Re: two storey green house...Updated
sir ito na po yung update ko based sa mga comment po ng mga masters natin....paCnC nalang po ulit....medyo nahihirapan pa ako kapain yung magandang setting for Vray for sketchup...bagal kasi ng hardware na ginagamit ko po...
archki_rain- CGP Newbie
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Re: two storey green house...Updated
hehehe, literal green po pala. design is good, just add more elements on the front/lawn, para d po direct sa road ung entry. anu po pal gamit nyong vegetation?, curios lng po.
Re: two storey green house...Updated
mga sir bago ko uli update sa ginagawa ko na bahay...pa CnC nalang po...thanks and more power sa CGPinoy
archki_rain- CGP Newbie
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Re: two storey green house...Updated
Okay this one's better than the previous ones since na tone down na ang pagka green niya...
Crits;
---there's so much verticality sa scene mo na halata na talaga na hindi sila aligned; although I don't usually comment on this aspect, this time I think you really should consider it...
---uvw map your grass right now masyadong masinsin; look for a grass map that has suble color variations para di monotonous ang grass area...
---i think you've got extra time, use it to tweak your car's mats; or find a better one...
Overall a very good effort; & its always good na you really try to do what's advised.. Hindi yung "noted lahat sir" tapos sa susunod na post ganun pa din...
Crits;
---there's so much verticality sa scene mo na halata na talaga na hindi sila aligned; although I don't usually comment on this aspect, this time I think you really should consider it...
---uvw map your grass right now masyadong masinsin; look for a grass map that has suble color variations para di monotonous ang grass area...
---i think you've got extra time, use it to tweak your car's mats; or find a better one...
Overall a very good effort; & its always good na you really try to do what's advised.. Hindi yung "noted lahat sir" tapos sa susunod na post ganun pa din...
cloud20- CGP Senior Citizen
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Re: two storey green house...Updated
sir dont know about sketchup but question lang anong gamit mo for those vegetation/trees background. images ba un. meron lang akong i-share na technique for improvement.
plants of my renders
sir yung mga plants ko galing lang din sa sketchup warehouse....sige po sir patulong naman sa 3d plants ko para maimprove pa yung presentation ko...thanks in advance
archki_rain- CGP Newbie
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Re: two storey green house...Updated
sir cloud thanks sir for the comments...i do also appreciate sir yung sa compliments nyo...right now kasi talagang vray for sketchup ang pinipilit ko pagaral but somehow nga iba pa rin pag yung workflow ay sa 3dmax vray...'di pa kasi din ako makagupgrade ng hardware at ayun di ko din alam how to start uli magaral ng panibagong program....question lang sir medyo di ko nagets agad yun sa sinasabi mo na verticality....pahelp na din sir paexplain...thanks sir and more power
archki_rain- CGP Newbie
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Re: two storey green house...Updated
sir suggest ko lang na collect ka ng tree photographs and ito ang ilagay mo for presentation/image background para mas marami kang options for trees.
itong mga images sample lang kung paano kinacut sa photoshop ung mga available tree sa web. Marami ring ready na precut images na like;
http://taira-hobby.blogspot.com/
suggestion lang sir, if you are interested i will make simple tutorial how to do it.
Re: two storey green house...Updated
---ah, sorry if I may have confused you; camera correction lang po kasi madaming straight vertical lines ang structure natin kaya halata na na distorted ito... That's all there is to it sir keep hammerin that nail...archki_rain wrote:sir cloud thanks sir for the comments...i do also appreciate sir yung sa compliments nyo...right now kasi talagang vray for sketchup ang pinipilit ko pagaral but somehow nga iba pa rin pag yung workflow ay sa 3dmax vray...'di pa kasi din ako makagupgrade ng hardware at ayun di ko din alam how to start uli magaral ng panibagong program....question lang sir medyo di ko nagets agad yun sa sinasabi mo na verticality....pahelp na din sir paexplain...thanks sir and more power
cloud20- CGP Senior Citizen
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Re: two storey green house...Updated
sir galaites good day...pasensya na now lang ako nakapagreply dito sa post ko...sige sir it will be a great help to me when you post your tutorial about sa trees for presentation thru photoshop to enhance my renders and as you said para may iba pa ako options para sa trees...thanks in advance sir galaites07....
archki_rain- CGP Newbie
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Re: two storey green house...Updated
mga master dun sa mga may magagandang vegetations at landscapes sa mga renders nila...3d trees din po ba yun ginagamit nyo?suggestion lang po....pede po kaya na mag-render kayo ng mga 3d trees tapos with alpha file para sa mga tulad namin na mga Vray for SU users e maging maganda din ang vegetation namin sa presentations namin....
archki_rain- CGP Newbie
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Re: two storey green house...Updated
http://www.cgdigest.com/free-textures/plants-and-shrubs/
pm mo nalang ako, i will give you some of my private collection.
regards, practice lang ng practice.
pm mo nalang ako, i will give you some of my private collection.
regards, practice lang ng practice.
Re: two storey green house...Updated
eto o add ko din trees http://michalkotek.com/download.html mganda yan kasi di nagcrecreate ng halos around the trees, sana nakatulong
bagong update mga sir medyo nagtagal lang....
mga sir bago ko uli update para dito sa post ko....ipost ko din yung wala pang edit sa photoshop....patulong nalang mga sir sa pagimprove ng presentation ko....
with PS edit...di ko pa lang talaga alam panu eliminate yung may mga white edges sa plants at trees sa background
yun render lang without PS
with PS edit...di ko pa lang talaga alam panu eliminate yung may mga white edges sa plants at trees sa background
yun render lang without PS
archki_rain- CGP Newbie
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Re: two storey green house...Updated
sir ok namn na yong mga plants mo.. i think napasubra ng kaunti ang light mo sir... paki check na rin ang tire ng kotse.. yun lng ayos na ayos na..
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Re: two storey green house...Updated
Galaites07 wrote:
sir suggest ko lang na collect ka ng tree photographs and ito ang ilagay mo for presentation/image background para mas marami kang options for trees.
itong mga images sample lang kung paano kinacut sa photoshop ung mga available tree sa web. Marami ring ready na precut images na like;
http://taira-hobby.blogspot.com/
suggestion lang sir, if you are interested i will make simple tutorial how to do it.
sir may tutorial ka na nito? mahirap kasi mag extract ng mga trees...manual lang kasi ang alam ko, baka may technique kang
mas madali ..TIA
@ topic
nice updates sir! ang laki nung improvements from the first render
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