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Post by osibalasi Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:11 pm

Latest design and render po, pa cc po mga sir,
Thanks po sa lahat Smile

SU + 3dsmax+vray

Naiscale ko na po mga sir, salamat po ulit sa lahat Smile
kelangan ko lagyan vertical shift,.malaki pala talaga siya

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Post by aces Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:18 pm

ma una na ako, sir wala akong nakitang shadow sa scene mo, paki tingnan lang tapos may black na spots sa may entrance hantayin nalang natin ang ibang comment nang mga master's.
keep posting sir Very Happy
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Post by osibalasi Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:22 pm

aces wrote:ma una na ako, sir wala akong nakitang shadow sa scene mo, paki tingnan lang tapos may black na spots sa may entrance hantayin nalang natin ang ibang comment nang mga master's.
keep posting sir Very Happy

update ko nalang po sa susunod sir, masyado ko po ata nahinaan yung multiplier ng sun ko, environment light lang kasi ginamit ko sir,thanks po sa pagdaan:)
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Post by ortzak Thu Jul 15, 2010 4:13 pm

design measurements bro check mo lagi..parang di kasya ang tao based sa mga components mo like kotse, furniture, wall lamp...

render is useless if the design process were not followed.
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Post by arki_vhin Thu Jul 15, 2010 5:51 pm

IMO seryosohin mo na ung praktis mo sir,,,para di sayang ang oras mo at mapraktis mo pa ng maayos...

- check scaling
- yung car mo nakalutang ata
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Post by kieko Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:14 pm

kulang ng height bro..
and modern and design mo i think hindi bagay ang wall na may two tone colors (lower half is different on upper)..
siguro gawin mo lahat white tapos ung naka cantilever lang ang dark bro..imho lang naman..

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Post by toy28 Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:25 pm

hi sir! gandang umaga. check mo nalang yung scale sir. tpos ung shadows rin. then displacement po sa stoneworks.

Practice lang ng practice sir.

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Post by third Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:51 pm

sir scale and shadow din

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Post by jhero Thu Jul 15, 2010 9:21 pm

-scale maps tiling
-shadow wala
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Post by arkitrix Fri Jul 16, 2010 12:13 am

nice,,,
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Post by creativemind Fri Jul 16, 2010 11:15 am

sir,
nice rendering po.....pti model ok! 2thumbsup
bago lng dn ako sa SU at vray,ask ko lng po f wer mo nkuha nga trees at halaman,pati n dn texture....pasend nmn po ng link nito....salamat po! 2thumbsup
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Post by adhey_13 Fri Jul 16, 2010 11:43 am

Shadows lang po and yung car parang lumilipad. IMHO lang naman. nice render anyway. ayos!
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Post by arkibons Fri Jul 16, 2010 5:44 pm

This looks like stretch to me but obviously not! rendering in nice and try to add shadow visibility! Basic criteria of architectural design composition, balance, scale, and uniformity!
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Post by Zoro_Architecture Fri Jul 16, 2010 7:25 pm

nice...nasabi na po comments sir... prax lang ng prax sir...
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Post by osibalasi Fri Jul 16, 2010 8:53 pm

ortzak wrote:design measurements bro check mo lagi..parang di kasya ang tao based sa mga components mo like kotse, furniture, wall lamp...

render is useless if the design process were not followed.

kieko wrote:kulang ng height bro..
and modern and design mo i think hindi bagay ang wall na may two tone colors (lower half is different on upper)..
siguro gawin mo lahat white tapos ung naka cantilever lang ang dark bro..imho lang naman..

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third wrote:sir scale and shadow din

jhero wrote:-scale maps tiling
-shadow wala

adhey_13 wrote:Shadows lang po and yung car parang lumilipad. IMHO lang naman. nice render anyway. ayos!

arkibons wrote:This looks like stretch to me but obviously not! rendering in nice and try to add shadow visibility! Basic criteria of architectural design composition, balance, scale, and uniformity!


thanks po sa mga comments sir, iupdate ko nalang po ito,salamat po ng marami,
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Post by osibalasi Fri Jul 16, 2010 8:54 pm

creativemind wrote:sir,
nice rendering po.....pti model ok! 2thumbsup
bago lng dn ako sa SU at vray,ask ko lng po f wer mo nkuha nga trees at halaman,pati n dn texture....pasend nmn po ng link nito....salamat po! 2thumbsup

sir, first of all po. please avoid text speak, nasa rules po yan

thanks po sir, yung trees ko po is evermotion po, you could purchase it on their site evermotion.org thumbsup
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Post by archie.l Sat Jul 17, 2010 12:48 am

brad mayat jay render,, follow mu lang comments nila,, scale ka lang nadali,, becareful next time brad
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Post by osibalasi Sat Jul 17, 2010 11:19 pm

archie.l wrote:brad mayat jay render,, follow mu lang comments nila,, scale ka lang nadali,, becareful next time brad

wun sir, salamat Smile
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Post by Mang Gorio Sun Jul 18, 2010 12:29 am

wait ko nalang po ang update salamat
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Post by phranq Sun Jul 18, 2010 12:52 am

hindi yata ito update sir, additional view lang. kasi hindi pa rin nabago ang scale ayun sa comments nila.

abangan ko update mo sir. nice practice anyway.
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Post by osibalasi Mon Jul 19, 2010 1:06 am

phranq wrote:hindi yata ito update sir, additional view lang. kasi hindi pa rin nabago ang scale ayun sa comments nila.

abangan ko update mo sir. nice practice anyway.

thanks po sir, naupdate ko na po sir Smile ty po uli Smile
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Post by osibalasi Mon Jul 19, 2010 1:06 am

Mang Gorio wrote:wait ko nalang po ang update salamat


thanks po sir
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Post by arki_vhin Mon Jul 19, 2010 6:51 am

updated na po ba ito? parang di parin na scale...be careful sa next mong post ha...para di sayang oras at pagod mo, try to fix all those comments dito sa thread mo then sa next post mo kelangan may pagbabago na at sa susunod mo pang mga gawa,.. goodluck
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Post by scorpion21 Mon Jul 19, 2010 6:59 am

yung mga railings mo bro malaki gap/spacing...pweding lumusot at mahulog mga baTA...
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Post by phranq Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:23 am

sir osibalasi dapat hindi mo inaalis yung mga old images para malaman ng mga bagong titingin kung anong mga sinabi sa previous comments at malaman ang sinabing mong update.
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