j a p a n e s e (update no. 1)

First topic message reminder :

Sers and masters pa comment and crit ulit. matagal ako hindi nakapag post.
I've tried modern zen concept dito, ewan lang kung nakuha ko??!?....
Master's i also need your help with this one. This is also my first try using HDRimage based lighting, hindi ko lang alam kung tama at kung ano pa mga kulang??

salamat and more power CGP!!!

Revisions on BG and brightness;


Mag try ako ng night scene if given a time...m o n d a y n a b u k a s . . . .

grappy wrote:Sir very Nice!

Same comment as others, medyo madilim tingnan...

Thank you.

superb design bossing...ung comments nasabi n ng mga masters. post more sir.

nice render...

guess you already have a very good crits.. just follow all of them... specially on the lighting tips... though i must credit this one.. very nice visuals... overall..

Tiagoh28 wrote:superb design bossing...ung comments nasabi n ng mga masters. post more sir.

Thanks man

zildian_nico wrote:nice render...

Thank you boss

vamp_lestat wrote:guess you already have a very good crits.. just follow all of them... specially on the lighting tips... though i must credit this one.. very nice visuals... overall..

Thank you, i'll do an update for this.

for me its very very nice,,, i like the camera angles

nice done!..comments been said...so good luck!

Muggz wrote:for me its very very nice,,, i like the camera angles

Thanks boss

Butz_Arki wrote:nice done!..comments been said...so good luck!

Thanks boss!!

bro san to itatayo?sa Japan ba?pag sa Japan check mo yong BLDG laws nila...mukhang may tatabasahin yan sa harapan ng bahay bro,,,wala kasi akung makitang slope ng bubong eh...Pero pag sa Pinas itatayo yan ayos nayan....nice design bro...