j a p a n e s e (update no. 1)

Sers and masters pa comment and crit ulit. matagal ako hindi nakapag post.
I've tried modern zen concept dito, ewan lang kung nakuha ko??!?....
Master's i also need your help with this one. This is also my first try using HDRimage based lighting, hindi ko lang alam kung tama at kung ano pa mga kulang??

salamat and more power CGP!!!

Revisions on BG and brightness;


Mag try ako ng night scene if given a time...m o n d a y n a b u k a s . . . .

di ako master bro ha...pro sa tingin ko taasan mo pa yung value ng HDRI mo...palitan mo na rin ng HDRI parang makulimlim e.rendering ayos na ayos pre...malinis...saka texturing...yung ilaw ng poste mo di ba parang masyadong modern ata....kakaiba e...yung blue na bahay sa second image palitan mo kulay lutang na lutang..gawin mong darker....anything else...panalo bro!!!

f-fortyone wrote:di ako master bro ha...pro sa tingin ko taasan mo pa yung value ng HDRI mo...palitan mo na rin ng HDRI parang makulimlim e.rendering ayos na ayos pre...malinis...saka texturing...yung ilaw ng poste mo di ba parang masyadong modern ata....kakaiba e...yung blue na bahay sa second image palitan mo kulay lutang na lutang..gawin mong darker....anything else...panalo bro!!!

ser F noted lahat. salamat sa pagdaan, improve ko pa to.

camera view rock n roll s akin... lighting masyado madilim o malabo na mata ko... mas maganda siguro ko pailawin mo yung interior light pati yung light s labas para makita yung detail nito.. the rest ok me... rock n roll bro...

too sharp for me..
yun lang po sir..

nice render...keep posting sir

cgil wrote:camera view rock n roll s akin... lighting masyado madilim o malabo na mata ko... mas maganda siguro ko pailawin mo yung interior light pati yung light s labas para makita yung detail nito.. the rest ok me... rock n roll bro...

Salamat sir CGIL...madilim nga ata!!??

LadiesMan217 wrote:too sharp for me..
yun lang po sir..

nice render...keep posting sir

Salamat sir. Try ko ayusen next time.

wow sir galing ganda design.. sundin mo lang sinabi nla sir perfect na to...

i dont quite get the zen concept in this design, but it certainly looks japanese. (almost) if you are aiming for minimalism then this is not minimalist enough - remove the unnecessary elements (texture changes in the windows, walls, etc) and you might achieve the look.

good luck!

galing ng render mo medyo dilim nga lang,wala ba talaga ceiling ang terrece mo kasi nagmukha shadow ba or mali ako.

arki_lynx wrote:wow sir galing ganda design.. sundin mo lang sinabi nla sir perfect na to...

thanks ser sa pagdaan.

celes wrote:i dont quite get the zen concept in this design, but it certainly looks japanese. (almost) if you are aiming for minimalism then this is not minimalist enough - remove the unnecessary elements (texture changes in the windows, walls, etc) and you might achieve the look.

good luck!

Noted ser. thank you.

zdesign wrote:galing ng render mo medyo dilim nga lang,wala ba talaga ceiling ang terrece mo kasi nagmukha shadow ba or mali ako.

may ceiling naman yan..medyo nilaparan ko lang yung header na tama ka, nagmukang shadow. BTW salamat sa pagdaan master.

nice bro...
-get rid of the building at the right side...
-bit dark adjust your HRDI overall intensity and HDRI image intensity
- im not quite sure with the black frame & header maybe because the image is dark...
- drop wall at the first image is thin would be better if its thicker..
other than that its nice bro...

The shots look really nice... Very clean/neat model... Rendering skills are there...
If you had gone outright for a night scene lulutang pa lalo ito; I say this cause your BG is so ready for a night scene... Right now clashing ang direct light mo with your hdri...
Keep hammerin that nail...

Light up those ies. Magandang night scene ito.

Medyo madilim nga image bro, pero overall ok sya. Tama maganda nga sa night scene to.

parang malapit na umulan.nice work dude.konting liwanag imho.the rest is superb.keep it up.

Sir very Nice!

Same comment as others, medyo madilim tingnan...

arkibons wrote:nice bro...
-get rid of the building at the right side...
-bit dark adjust your HRDI overall intensity and HDRI image intensity
- im not quite sure with the black frame & header maybe because the image is dark...
- drop wall at the first image is thin would be better if its thicker..
other than that its nice bro...

Salamat sir, noted lahat ng sinabe mo

cloud20 wrote:The shots look really nice... Very clean/neat model... Rendering skills are there...
If you had gone outright for a night scene lulutang pa lalo ito; I say this cause your BG is so ready for a night scene... Right now clashing ang direct light mo with your hdri...
Keep hammerin that nail...

Thanks man.

yaug_03 wrote:Light up those ies. Magandang night scene ito.

Thanks. i'll try those.

Ernest wrote:Medyo madilim nga image bro, pero overall ok sya. Tama maganda nga sa night scene to.

Thanks man, I'll try an update of this.

balongeisler wrote:parang malapit na umulan.nice work dude.konting liwanag imho.the rest is superb.keep it up.

Thanks for viewing

grappy wrote:Sir very Nice!

Same comment as others, medyo madilim tingnan...

Thank you.