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Post by Nico.Patdu Sun Mar 28, 2010 5:04 am

hi! ulit mga bros and sis share ko lang ulit ito, i did dis noong free time ko sa office, i want to retain the existing vegetation bare soil and tall grass + raw concrete, painted walls are highly appealing but dis raw concrete gives a feeling of naturality, so dats my concept o anyway open ang mga cnc's nyo mga master 2thumbsup

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update lang mga bro, bru and sis habang nagrerelax, i made another version painted concrete+ commercial type landscaping, but both concepts means equal to me paki cnc's ulet mga master 2thumbsup

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Post by Critique1407 Sun Mar 28, 2010 6:59 am

This is nice master nico. hehe Idol ko talaga mga renderings mo. Unique and Cool sila sa mata. Looks real at the left side. Mejo kulang lang dun sa texture sa baba. yung halaman. Dun sa malapit sa road. Pinapractice mo talaga ang UV Unwrap, Hair and Fur and Tadao Ando Style, ah. hehe thumbsup
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Post by mEejan Sun Mar 28, 2010 8:19 am

galing talaga, realistic at superb ang materials.nice one kong nics 2thumbsup 2thumbsup turu na yan.hehe
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Post by jolicoeur030488 Sun Mar 28, 2010 8:31 am

totoong totoo to sir.. galing
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Post by ortzak Sun Mar 28, 2010 8:58 am

Ang ganda naman nito koya hehe..ibang level ka na coy 2thumbsup
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Post by leevanredz Sun Mar 28, 2010 9:23 am

weeeww galing2 hippie
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Post by cloud20 Sun Mar 28, 2010 9:48 am

@leevanredz: wency cornejo ikaw ba yan...
@master nico: napagusapan na natin to, just want to reiterate; your latest works have an "abandoned" feeling to them... Nice "eyr en par" you got going there...
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Post by exodus Mon Mar 29, 2010 12:54 am

realistic sir....perfect lighting....
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Post by SPHERE Mon Mar 29, 2010 1:31 am

nice render nics...,batak!
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Post by effreymm Mon Mar 29, 2010 3:45 am

Realistic bro ang galing. POst more.
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Post by Critique1407 Mon Mar 29, 2010 3:48 am

And master nico. More on your own design naman po mixed with Tadao's. Nakakamiss din mga designs mo. Hehe
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Post by sebastianeeron Mon Mar 29, 2010 4:17 am

nice render sir..... thumbsup

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Post by Nico.Patdu Mon Mar 29, 2010 7:19 am

Critique1407 wrote:This is nice master nico. hehe Idol ko talaga mga renderings mo. Unique and Cool sila sa mata. Looks real at the left side. Mejo kulang lang dun sa texture sa baba. yung halaman. Dun sa malapit sa road. Pinapractice mo talaga ang UV Unwrap, Hair and Fur and Tadao Ando Style, ah. hehe thumbsup


oo pre ganun talaga ang register sa mata ng raw concrete unique na cool kasi bold na bold,salamat sa mga comments pre take note ko yan, text nalang 2thumbsup
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Post by Nico.Patdu Mon Mar 29, 2010 7:22 am

mEejan wrote:galing talaga, realistic at superb ang materials.nice one kong nics 2thumbsup 2thumbsup turu na yan.hehe

thanks wag kang memee jan bawal jan,ano turu ku sayo mas magaling kapa sakin nyan eh, Smile
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Post by Nico.Patdu Mon Mar 29, 2010 7:23 am

jolicoeur030488 wrote:totoong totoo to sir.. galing

salamat po ser glad to know that Smile
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Post by Nico.Patdu Mon Mar 29, 2010 7:24 am

SPHERE wrote:nice render nics...,batak!

batak? , ba kilala yata kita? hehe pakilala kanaman,thanks Smile
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Post by Nico.Patdu Mon Mar 29, 2010 7:25 am

ortzak wrote:Ang ganda naman nito koya hehe..ibang level ka na coy 2thumbsup

hehehe inuunti unti mo na rin ang pagkakpampangan hah ser ed? , salamat mas magaling kapa rin naman sakin Smile
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Post by Nico.Patdu Mon Mar 29, 2010 7:27 am

cloud20 wrote:@leevanredz: wency cornejo ikaw ba yan...
@master nico: napagusapan na natin to, just want to reiterate; your latest works have an "abandoned" feeling to them... Nice "eyr en par" you got going there...

yep master cloud i learned a lot from that conversation, Smile
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Post by rccboinks Mon Mar 29, 2010 7:45 am

galing sir...ang linis gawa mo...like ur atmosphere...very nice rendering!!!more power sir...
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Post by celes Mon Mar 29, 2010 7:50 am

maganda ang renders. pero since these can still be improved to the max, here are some tips:

image 1

1. i like this the most. nice lighting, good use of textures. but enhance the road texture with the curb termination, halatang naka bitmap lang. either dont use a texture that has some grass patches in it, or cover it up with the same grass mesh you have at present.
2. grass mesh - scale them down a bit para mas mukhang totoo.
3. choose a better wood texture, mejo obvious ung tiling.

image 2

1. although image is also good, the trees seem out of scale and the use of the left tree frame (without the leaves) seem a bit off.
2. tiling issues with the rock patterns in the wall and the curb.
3. the plant materials look a bit candy-like hence mejo fake ang dating. the flowers and those happy green patches look artificial - more like paper cutouts.
4. i am not sure why the blinds seem misaligned - were those done in post?

just my two, three, seven cents. Very Happy
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Post by Nico.Patdu Mon Mar 29, 2010 8:12 am

mushroom wrote:maganda ang renders. pero since these can still be improved to the max, here are some tips:

image 1

1. i like this the most. nice lighting, good use of textures. but enhance the road texture with the curb termination, halatang naka bitmap lang. either dont use a texture that has some grass patches in it, or cover it up with the same grass mesh you have at present.
2. grass mesh - scale them down a bit para mas mukhang totoo.
3. choose a better wood texture, mejo obvious ung tiling.

image 2

1. although image is also good, the trees seem out of scale and the use of the left tree frame (without the leaves) seem a bit off.
2. tiling issues with the rock patterns in the wall and the curb.
3. the plant materials look a bit candy-like hence mejo fake ang dating. the flowers and those happy green patches look artificial - more like paper cutouts.
4. i am not sure why the blinds seem misaligned - were those done in post?

just my two, three, seven cents. Very Happy

thanks po ser tago ko tong mga to para gamitin ko next post hehe, yung mga blinds sa 3dsmax ko ginawa yun ser hindi sa post process Smile
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Post by Nico.Patdu Tue Mar 30, 2010 5:20 am

rccboinks wrote:galing sir...ang linis gawa mo...like ur atmosphere...very nice rendering!!!more power sir...

thanks ser malinis talaga pg irradiance ang primary. Smile
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Post by Nico.Patdu Tue Mar 30, 2010 5:23 am

leevanredz wrote:weeeww galing2 hippie

exodus wrote:realistic sir....perfect lighting....

effreymm wrote:Realistic bro ang galing. POst more.

thanks po mga ser glad you liked it
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Post by Butz_Arki Tue Mar 30, 2010 5:26 am

nice done bro...konting tweaks lang sa landscape mo...pero render superb...
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Post by Nico.Patdu Tue Mar 30, 2010 5:30 am

Butz_Arki wrote:nice done bro...konting tweaks lang sa landscape mo...pero render superb...

thanks ser butz,

o.t dun ba kayo sa arch. galardo trabaho, nag aaply din kasi si noel diaz dun. Smile
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