Day and Night Perspective Fetching for Suggestions and Comments

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This is a proposed beach villa that I did using Sketchup for Modelling and 3DS Max + Vray for Rendering.. fetching for comments po.. this is my second try to render a night perspective..im still on the learning process..suggestions and comments for improvement are highly appreciated..first post ko rin po dito sa cgpinoy ng aking works
Day:


Night:


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Thanks!

Nice set of render's. Just try to follow comments from our cgp master's.

ganda naman maam sa akin focus cguro ang building sa isang shot....ang texturing lang the rest panalo

wow galing maam,welcome din sa cgp,,bago lang din ako,,nice render,,galing maam

kieko wrote:i like your composition maam very simple..
unfortunately dun sa sidewalk ung black and white agaw attention parang race circuit..imho lang po.
Godbless

thanks po sa comment.. yung black and white po kasi sa curb kaya po ganyan kasi ganyan po dito sa UAE lahat ng sidewalk.. black and white pag pwede parkingan and yellow and black pag hindi pwede parkingan nasanay po siguro ako sa renderings na ginagawa ko dito pero thanks po sa comments.. really appreciate it

arkibons wrote:ganda naman maam sa akin focus cguro ang building sa isang shot....ang texturing lang the rest panalo

salamat sir!

Ernest wrote:Nice set of render's. Just try to follow comments from our cgp master's.

will do! thanks po!

one9dew wrote:wow galing maam,welcome din sa cgp,,bago lang din ako,,nice render,,galing maam

thanks po!!

nice one sis ....aprub

bartsimpson wrote:nice one sis ....aprub

salamat sir!

Nice renders carmie..I like the day scene better than the night scene..The night scene gives other ambient light to the building like what jarul said..You can use either hdri or you can use hi res image sa envi slot then use your cam the lit the scene..its like image base lighting,fake nga lang.But works for me sometimes..Anyway keep posting here in cgp to learn more..

You got my PM?I sent you one this morning..

ARCHITHEKTHURA wrote:Nice renders carmie..I like the day scene better than the night scene..The night scene gives other ambient light to the building like what jarul said..You can use either hdri or you can use hi res image sa envi slot then use your cam the lit the scene..its like image base lighting,fake nga lang.But works for me sometimes..Anyway keep posting here in cgp to learn more..

You got my PM?I sent you one this morning..

wow!! Im honored to have my idol drop some comments on my work.. salamat sir jeff! Will take note of everything you said.
Second trial ko po yan ng night Inaaral ko pa sir.. hanap ako ng pointers dito to improve my work. Thanks again for introducing me here.

Got your PM sir Sana wag ka magsawa sumagot sa queries ko. Salamat and God Bless!

Ang galing lalo na ung night scene. Post pa...

effreymm wrote:Ang galing lalo na ung night scene. Post pa...

salamat sir!

nasabi na nila ang comments ma'am carmie....
galeng ng design at rendering.

cubi_o: wrote:nasabi na nila ang comments ma'am carmie....
galeng ng design at rendering.

uy sir!! salamat!

mam galing po....tanong ko lang po kung ano gamit nyo sa light dun sa night scene...TIA

galing po mam...astig..galing ng design and render...

wow,galing ng output...tamang tama lang sa mata...ganda sana kung nakaaangat ang grass gamit vray displ

ganda ng lighting ng pool