Day and Night Perspective Fetching for Suggestions and Comments

This is a proposed beach villa that I did using Sketchup for Modelling and 3DS Max + Vray for Rendering.. fetching for comments po.. this is my second try to render a night perspective..im still on the learning process..suggestions and comments for improvement are highly appreciated..first post ko rin po dito sa cgpinoy ng aking works
Day:


Night:


Another View:


Thanks!

nice work sis..

simplykate wrote:nice work sis..

thanks sis!!

wow...maganda ang tirada mo....comment ko lang

- camera correction
- tiling ng road po
- kunti pang abubot sa side ng building like cars people and foliage kung kailangan mo pa tlga ipakita kung hindi crop mo nalang
- yung grass lagyan mo ng bump para umangat dami tyo tutorial sa baul po man

rendering panalo la ako ma-say pati modelling!!! ayos na ayos po!!!! and welcome din sa CGP!!!!

like the day scene mam..galing

f-fortyone wrote:wow...maganda ang tirada mo....comment ko lang

- camera correction
- tiling ng road po
- kunti pang abubot sa side ng building like cars people and foliage kung kailangan mo pa tlga ipakita kung hindi crop mo nalang
- yung grass lagyan mo ng bump para umangat dami tyo tutorial sa baul po man

rendering panalo la ako ma-say pati modelling!!! ayos na ayos po!!!! and welcome din sa CGP!!!!

thanks po sir! nakita ko nga po yung mga tutorials dito and i cant wait na ma-try sila pag may time na po ako..
thanks po talaga really appreciate it!

srm852002 wrote:like the day scene mam..galing

thanks po sir! will try to improve more pa

day scene ganda ng lighting for me..add ka maam ng displacement sa grass imho lang..

tiling ng sidewalk.pathway mapping,grass displacement,lagyan curtain sa bintana,road mapping,matigas ata ung chair pillow d ko alam tawag hehe IMHO lng maam wait mo mga masters

galing simply lang pero okey pati lighting

thanks po sa comments.. you all rock!

thanks po sa comments.. you all rock!

Very nice design & renders Mam, Keep it Up & post more

love it sis... nice try! keep on rockin..

galing

- sa night scene...hndi naapektohan environment ung bldg (bluish ung bg so more or less may pagkabluish din ung bldg)

brilliant work...

find best cam angle, pra mas malufet
mapping issue, practice pa natin.
add displacement sa grass use mo vray dispalcement
(hanap lng dito ng tutorial)

i love the design

makikicomment lang po

1. for image 1-2 mas maganda kung vertical na lang ung verticals - you can do this by applying a camera correction modifer if you're using a vray physical camera. kung standard lang, just make sure the camera source and target are on the same z axis.
2. i think the shaders need more work, try mo lagyan ng konting glossiness ang mga materials, or bumps sa textures.
3. the glass shader also needs some work. isa sa mga "daya" ng mga scenes is they place elements where the reflections might occur (usually behind the camera) and this could either be a row of trees or even just a plane with a bitmap scene.
4. night scene can be more convincing with the use of HDRI. follow this tutorial which i got fr sir bokkins: http://www.cgpinoy.org/vray-for-3d-studio-max-tutorials-f35/making-of-a-night-scene-with-hdri-or-a-sky-bitmap-t9384.htm
5. image 3 is better - again glass material issues, plus the grass needs a vray displacement map. you may also want to source for a better night sky.

just my two cents

sa inyo po lahat... THANK YOU!!! this is my first post dito sa CGPINOY at natutuwa po ako makakuha ng maraming feedbacks sa inyo.. will definitely post more of my works.. and looking forward to your comments and suggestions.. SALAMAT MGA BRO AND SIS!

hanep ung render mam. mas maganda kung naka focus malapit sa bldg ung first image malawak kc maxado tapos empty ung nasa side.. pero over nice.

sa akin po tweak lang sa cam.. ganda ng design at rendering maam..

whoa!!!!!!!!!!astig naman!!!!!!!!!

galing

i like your composition maam very simple..
unfortunately dun sa sidewalk ung black and white agaw attention parang race circuit..imho lang po.
Godbless

Nice set of render's. Just try to follow comments from our cgp master's.