2 STOREY RESIDENCE-My 1st Vray for SU render (Update 1)

Hello to everyone!
Post kulang po unang render ko using Vray for SU.Hope you'll like it.
Practice lang po sa lighting (Vray Sun and Physical Camera) nothing more.
Need your valuable comments....

SU model courtesy of sir AFTERDARK! (thank u kuya)


My own version (I modified the original SU Model finishing (materials)



Slightly modified,ginawa kong isang klase nalang yung bricks,


Updates: for your comments please...

Not bad for a first time render. Comment ko lang sa paglagay mo ng entourage, laruin mo pa ng kaunit sa PS, pati yung grass pede mo pa improve

tingin focus k muna sa modeling bago rendering... yung path-walk mo mataas yata, para san pa yung ehh sementado nman lahat... ok skin yung 2nd image , yung 3rd para color ni bayani Fernan do (joke lang)... post more maam and sana model nu n rin... keep up..

Not bad at all!

Render wise... shadows are a bit sharp and the contrast is a bit much, unless it was intentional...

The first and second renders I like, the third image is a bit gloomy though, ironic since it was the most colorful... hehe maybe it has something to do with environment lighting and time of day...

Overall, I like....

mas gusto ko yung 1st image.....pero ayos mo lang yung camera mo medyo nawala yung right side mo.....kunti pang adjust makukuha mo rin yan!!!! lagay mo ng sky para mabuhay yung 3d tpos adjust mo sa PS yung image para di matingkad na matingkad....lapit na yan bro!!!

yaug_03 wrote:Not bad for a first time render. Comment ko lang sa paglagay mo ng entourage, laruin mo pa ng kaunit sa PS, pati yung grass pede mo pa improve

thank u po...

jefferson01 wrote:tingin focus k muna sa modeling bago rendering... yung path-walk mo mataas yata, para san pa yung ehh sementado nman lahat... ok skin yung 2nd image , yung 3rd para color ni bayani Fernan do (joke lang)... post more maam and sana model nu n rin... keep up..

hindi po ako ang nag model kaya I cant answer your questions!salamat po sa pag comment!

grappy wrote:Not bad at all!

Render wise... shadows are a bit sharp and the contrast is a bit much, unless it was intentional...

The first and second renders I like, the third image is a bit gloomy though, ironic since it was the most colorful... hehe maybe it has something to do with environment lighting and time of day...

Overall, I like....

thank you po!

f-fortyone wrote:mas gusto ko yung 1st image.....pero ayos mo lang yung camera mo medyo nawala yung right side mo.....kunti pang adjust makukuha mo rin yan!!!! lagay mo ng sky para mabuhay yung 3d tpos adjust mo sa PS yung image para di matingkad na matingkad....lapit na yan bro!!!

noted po mga comments..salamat po!

nice job maam... tweak sa glass lang po..

good job maam. background, reflection sa glass and bumps sa materials... keep posting para mas madami po tayong tatotonan.

nice one sis...tambay ka lng d2.marami ka matutunan sa mga masters.keep it up...constant practice.

nice render very feminine ang kulay i like the second image suggest lang dark haspe for the door and window frame and change the bricks to ledgestone or slate cguro sa grills din subukan mo lang....

-nice render for a first timer... ganyan lang tlaga sa una,,,
--pag palagi na ang praktis, makukuha mo rin..
---work also on glass reflections,(dito rin ako nahihirapan)

Good start. Tambay ka lang d2 dami ka matutunan... Post more

pahingi naman ng tress at saka kotse pwede?...

comments has been said .... for your improvement nice practice

Nice start..kaunting praktis pa madam, Oks na ito

paki check nalang po yung lighting ko kung ok na sya...forget po yung model at materials...sa lighting (Environment) muna po ako....thanks

nice first post sis... i like the 1st 2 images!

Mis ganda, para sakin okay ung modelling, maybe sa texture lng cguro and add reflections sa glass , but okay naman, konting pihit pa. post more......

jefferson01 wrote:tingin focus k muna sa modeling bago rendering... yung path-walk mo mataas yata, para san pa yung ehh sementado nman lahat... ok skin yung 2nd image , yung 3rd para color ni bayani Fernan do (joke lang)... post more maam and sana model nu n rin... keep up..

Sloping ung pavement ng garage sir, ung porch 300mm ang taas from sidewalk, ung steps, 150mm from sidewalk, just to clarify

ganda maam...ok na sa akin ang lighting siguro try to look for better BG save in PNG then add Layer for the background....

http://www.cgpinoy.org/architectural-f3/npr-non-photo-realistic-rendering-2-storey-residence-t10041.htm

wow.astig,,,,ikaw na ikaw ang dating,ganda po..keep posting