2 door apartment

mga bosing share ko lang po my first post, newbi lang po ako..c&c please for more improvments..

using SU, render in 3dsMax vray + PS

good rendering sir...personal opinion lang po sir, medyo angle ka pa sa bandang kaliwa para mabawasan ang view ng firewall...yun lamang po!

mabuhay ka! keep posting sir!

welcome to cgp bro. nice render actually. design naman di ako makacomment pa so far. I will have some pointers para makatulong sa next mo na gagawin.

1. Check on the mood na gusto mong iachieve. pwedeng umaga, hapon o gabi o something artistic/nonrealistic coloring. pwede din un.

2. background should match sa napili mong mood. adjust in photoshop if you desire a certain brightness.

3. camera angle is very important. itago mo nalang ung wall sa left, right now agaw pansin sya, so nawawala ang focus sa design ng facade. eyelevel pa ng konti ang camera, the viewer looks taller than the SUV.

Yun lang muna ang masasabi ko. good luck bro.

Sanodesu wrote:mga bosing share ko lang po my first post, newbi lang po ako..c&c please for more improvments..

using SU, render in 3dsMax vray + PS

welcome po sa CGP sir. . ..nice render and i think some mapping issue on the wall and also the door mukhang jpeg ata nilagay mo sir mas ok kng 3d model. ... post more

Good job bro!.. Galing nman nito sa SU...Pra sakin color combination lang bro, d rest panalo na!.....

Comments have been said...I don't feel comfortable with the fiber glass canopy...

Render is already clean...

although it might be improper to comment on the design aspect, this might be an excemption; it is a mish-mash of designs... i see modern, contempo, medit going on in there... try to use the net, there's tons of references there to help you get what you really want as per design... composition and mats have been taken up by the masters... watch out for the potted plant too, baka mahulog sa may ari yan...
lest you take me for an evil person; lighting is good na... work on the other aspects na lang sir...
don't be put off sir and don't hesitate to post again, this way malalaman natin kung nag iimprove tayo...

color scheme pastel i think...
there's room for improvement and tweaks on material settings..
and could be on best results....


keep updating us

tnx mga master, ganda talaga dto sa cgpinoy, we learn a lot.. lalo na't adito ang mga master..

sir.. on the modeling part.. ang galing nyo na po sir.. siguro my comments would be on the materials nlng.. imho.. maybe try to change the brick... and i see a blue polycarb (ata) try tweaking on the material para ung cast ng shadow nya would also be blue... u can do it by changing your fog color to a light blue tint and adjust your fog mulitplier to .025. that works for me. u can always play a bit. un lang po muna sir.. and oopss.. camer angle... definitely, adjust nyo po sir. nasabi nato actually...

salamat sir vam, noted po yan..

warm welcome sayo bro!! nice output para skin...enjoy your stay bro!!

welcome po d2 sa cgp sir!nice work po 2 sir para sa isang baguhang tulad nyo..yong sa materials din po ang comment ko lalo na po sa mga glass materials...may mga nakita rin po akong tutorials d2 bout sa glass settings for exterior sir...maybe makatulong din po yon...search nyo lng po d2...again,welcome po ulit..

pinkish wrote:welcome po d2 sa cgp sir!nice work po 2 sir para sa isang baguhang tulad nyo..yong sa materials din po ang comment ko lalo na po sa mga glass materials...may mga nakita rin po akong tutorials d2 bout sa glass settings for exterior sir...maybe makatulong din po yon...search nyo lng po d2...again,welcome po ulit..

nasabi na ng mga masters lahat..take note nyo lng po yun,,,kip posting..

material mapping lang sir........rendering is ok! ...post more pa

Gusto ko yung design, pwede mag padesign ng 3 doors apartment, may lote ako sa bulacan, 107sqm ang lot area

maganda na ang lighting