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Post by fidel Thu Mar 29, 2012 8:53 pm

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>>>Mga master, this is my 1st post. I need comments on my drawings para i can improve my works thru rendering, i'm using Sketchup + V-Ray. Thank you!

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Post by yaug_03 Thu Mar 29, 2012 9:07 pm

1st, work on the composition, 2nd try to frame your main subject properly (putol siya ngayon).
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Post by fidel Thu Mar 29, 2012 9:30 pm

okay po. yung pagrender ko ba sir okay lang atsaka yung mga textures?

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Post by JVT_Ltd Fri Mar 30, 2012 5:10 am

saan dadaan yan papunta sa taas? plus may nabangga ata yun vehicle mo?... additional view plus basa basa ka sa mga tut dito for sure mapapaganda pa yan...
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Post by badongrodrigs Fri Mar 30, 2012 5:35 am

Hey bro your car and leaves are flying! Smile
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Post by fidel Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:04 am

thank you po sa mga comments ninyo. :-)

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Post by hotarubi Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:39 am

Get the subject centered.
Scale problem, higante yung mga tao.
Floating car and fallen leaves.
Lighter sky.
Use high quality car model.
Improve road texture.
Lack of/NO post processing.
good luck! THREE DOOR APARTMENT 290602
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Post by betterman Fri Mar 30, 2012 1:58 pm

since you dont have anything on the side its only a wall, why not show as one point perspectives...

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Post by fidel Fri Mar 30, 2012 9:50 pm

ok po sir betterman thanks po sa comment... update ko po....

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