NoVa (viLLa in Dubai)

hello po mga sirs and masters......
pa-post lng po, massing po ito ng villa project sa dubai, pero nirender ko n rin,
miNimaliSt concept
3dmax+Vray+PS po gnamit
pki c&c nlang po...tnx.



DAYSCENE


NIGHTSCENE

minimalist nga sir..very minimal..mas ok dayscene.

welcome sir.... galing ng mood sir parang sarap mag inum dyan hehehehehe
panalo ang grass mo...repeatition lang ng cactus medyo sablay.galing ng usok mo a...post more view.

Maganda sana kaso corny ang title, siguro architectural section lang pinapasukan nyo sito sa cgp no sir. Sira ba keyboard nyo at may SmAll tapos maY cApitaL lEtterS sa text nyo?...

Walls...ang ganda ng pagkakaputi, kaunting texture+bump pa sana... Too sharp edges din?...

For me, this is one instance where that "standard" cam correction fails miserably... No need to explain just look at the images...

BG sky on morning shot is horrible. Lose it.

Repeating cacti on left wall; kaunting effort lang resize rotate voila nice entourage; not monotonous...

Nag night scene ka na rin lang dimo pa tinanggal yung barbecue; para may continuity sana ang viewer from day to night...

Overall okay naman eh; kung simpleng kliyente lang ako... Kaso youre showing these to studied eyes...

PS; had to edit my post ilagay ko lang ito "POST MORE!"... parang lahat na lang nagcocomment ganito ending eh... ang tanong, nagcomment nga ba...

nice. ung white walls maxado lang flat tignan, mejo may burns din. sa night scene mas maganda cguro kung me bluish tint. light from the inside prang kulang sa intensity. what is the area between the car and the entry?

yun ang comment kay sir cloud saken na di magaleng

cloud20 wrote:Maganda sana kaso corny ang title, siguro architectural section lang pinapasukan nyo sito sa cgp no sir. Sira ba keyboard nyo at may SmAll tapos maY cApitaL lEtterS sa text nyo?...

Walls...ang ganda ng pagkakaputi, kaunting texture+bump pa sana... Too sharp edges din?...

For me, this is one instance where that "standard" cam correction fails miserably... No need to explain just look at the images...

BG sky on morning shot is horrible. Lose it.

Repeating cacti on left wall; kaunting effort lang resize rotate voila nice entourage; not monotonous...

Nag night scene ka na rin lang dimo pa tinanggal yung barbecue; para may continuity sana ang viewer from day to night...

Overall okay naman eh; kung simpleng kliyente lang ako... Kaso youre showing these to studied eyes...

PS; had to edit my post ilagay ko lang ito "POST MORE!"... parang lahat na lang nagcocomment ganito ending eh... ang tanong, nagcomment nga ba...

salamat po ng mrami, noted po lahat ng comments, ito po tlga kailangan ko, guidance ninyo, censya na po s mga sablay, tnx again

nice render plus point yung chix hehehe

nice render sir....keep posting..

zdesign wrote:welcome sir.... galing ng mood sir parang sarap mag inum dyan hehehehehe
panalo ang grass mo...repeatition lang ng cactus medyo sablay.galing ng usok mo a...post more view.

mraming slamat po master Z... smoke? dun nga ng cra-crash ang pc ko eh, hhehehe

archjun wrote:

zdesign wrote:welcome sir.... galing ng mood sir parang sarap mag inum dyan hehehehehe
panalo ang grass mo...repeatition lang ng cactus medyo sablay.galing ng usok mo a...post more view.

mraming slamat po master Z... smoke? dun nga ng cra-crash ang pc ko eh, hhehehe

ganun ba,buti ka pa nga e kahit ganun nakakabuo ka ng usok sa kin never ako makagawa ng usok...shut down din pc ko pag minsan kasi mababang version lang kasi.

SunDance wrote:nice. ung white walls maxado lang flat tignan, mejo may burns din. sa night scene mas maganda cguro kung me bluish tint. light from the inside prang kulang sa intensity. what is the area between the car and the entry?

tnx sir sa comment, noted po... ung area b/w car and entry ay water pond, di n lng mlagyan ng anik anik, d n kya pc..hehehe

nice one brow.i agree with sir cloud..before u post sir basa muna tayo ng rules d2 sa forum..anyways...great job sa ung post.keep it up.

i like the night scene great job...

balongeisler wrote:nice one brow.i agree with sir cloud..before u post sir basa muna tayo ng rules d2 sa forum..anyways...great job sa ung post.keep it up.

tnx sir, susunod pong post, noted po mga comments nyo, slmat po ulit

arkibons wrote:i like the night scene great job...

salmat po sir.

balongeisler wrote:nice one brow.i agree with sir cloud..before u post sir basa muna tayo ng rules d2 sa forum..anyways...great job sa ung post.keep it up.

salamat po sir.

archjun wrote:

cloud20 wrote:Maganda sana kaso corny ang title, siguro architectural section lang pinapasukan nyo sito sa cgp no sir. Sira ba keyboard nyo at may SmAll tapos maY cApitaL lEtterS sa text nyo?...

Walls...ang ganda ng pagkakaputi, kaunting texture+bump pa sana... Too sharp edges din?...

For me, this is one instance where that "standard" cam correction fails miserably... No need to explain just look at the images...

BG sky on morning shot is horrible. Lose it.

Repeating cacti on left wall; kaunting effort lang resize rotate voila nice entourage; not monotonous...

Nag night scene ka na rin lang dimo pa tinanggal yung barbecue; para may continuity sana ang viewer from day to night...

Overall okay naman eh; kung simpleng kliyente lang ako... Kaso youre showing these to studied eyes...

PS; had to edit my post ilagay ko lang ito "POST MORE!"... parang lahat na lang nagcocomment ganito ending eh... ang tanong, nagcomment nga ba...

salamat po ng mrami, noted po lahat ng comments, ito po tlga kailangan ko, guidance ninyo, censya na po s mga sablay, tnx again

My comments were made hindi para sabihing "sablay" ka na naman. For all intents & purposes maganda ang render mo sir. My early renders will look like garbage compared to your work. My comments were made with the sole intent of jogging you out of your complacency, to urge you to outdo yourself next time you post... And the next time... And yet again the next time...

nice render sir

cloud20 wrote:

archjun wrote:

cloud20 wrote:Maganda sana kaso corny ang title, siguro architectural section lang pinapasukan nyo sito sa cgp no sir. Sira ba keyboard nyo at may SmAll tapos maY cApitaL lEtterS sa text nyo?...

Walls...ang ganda ng pagkakaputi, kaunting texture+bump pa sana... Too sharp edges din?...

For me, this is one instance where that "standard" cam correction fails miserably... No need to explain just look at the images...

BG sky on morning shot is horrible. Lose it.

Repeating cacti on left wall; kaunting effort lang resize rotate voila nice entourage; not monotonous...

Nag night scene ka na rin lang dimo pa tinanggal yung barbecue; para may continuity sana ang viewer from day to night...

Overall okay naman eh; kung simpleng kliyente lang ako... Kaso youre showing these to studied eyes...

PS; had to edit my post ilagay ko lang ito "POST MORE!"... parang lahat na lang nagcocomment ganito ending eh... ang tanong, nagcomment nga ba...

salamat po ng mrami, noted po lahat ng comments, ito po tlga kailangan ko, guidance ninyo, censya na po s mga sablay, tnx again

My comments were made hindi para sabihing "sablay" ka na naman. For all intents & purposes maganda ang render mo sir. My early renders will look like garbage compared to your work. My comments were made with the sole intent of jogging you out of your complacency, to urge you to outdo yourself next time you post... And the next time... And yet again the next time...

ok po sir cloud, your comments are very meaningful for my improvement, sa next post po noted po lahat, tnx ng mrami.

skyscraper100 wrote:nice render sir

salamat sir

nice start alex.
finally post here in cgp.
comments mentioned.

nuje wrote:nice start alex.
finally post here in cgp.
comments mentioned.

salamat tol, cool nga sa cg hehehe

sir isang drama view naman dyan dun sa area ng grill pataas sa model mo...para makita ang texture ng wall mo at ibang anik anik sa paligid.