ikalawa : resto bar exterior only

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nice design sir!comment ko lang sa glass sir.. just add some refraction, then listen the reflection para ma balance ang dalawa (refractio - reflection).. also try to kill the horizon on left part sir..

mg cocomment then ako sa kotse.. i think bawal mg park sa harap ng fire hydrant.. hehehe..

umo-ok na ah. yung glass mat siguro tweak lang.

cloud20 wrote:o, magcomment ku eka mabaya ne... render lacks clear definition facing the camera, maybe because the light source is behind the subject?... your streetcurb nearest the camera, biglang naputol ata? so much so the fire hydrant seems to be siting on the road?... a bit more work sa entourage...
o, bumawi nakuman ne... great design, classmate mo ba si ice-+?... you seem to have the same influences... lighting is there, tweak na lang... nice grass mat... good effort... i'll wait for your next post...

Salamat Master cloud keng comment. den talaga deng dapat habangan. ahehe
ill try to fixed everything you mention sir 1,camera tabalu sir nannyamba kasi ako e kya siguro tsumura
street curb wapin sir Tabalu aklingwan ke yan tuluy Mebangal ya ing buysit
fire hydrant. dana now kulang nlaman ang tawag pala don oo nga sir violation yta ako ng human rughts dpat yta nsa rampo sa road gutter o san kaya?

entourage ,, dapat 3d pipol po no , n try ko pero d patok sa paningin ko ngmu2khang claydoe e salamat sa bngay niyong tips

Ice (alt-123721s72w ewan basta) ahh wah .klasm8 ke yta ing bingut ayta yay..binye mune yta kaya ing spiritual na lakas mu
ayus paturu ku keka.
Salamat po

nomeradona wrote:umo-ok na ah. yung glass mat siguro tweak lang.

salamat po Sirmaster Nomera .sa pagdahan

pok.. pota maka tisud ya itng fire hydrant mu..... tu keng dalan di ko napancin! hehehe

abl_langs wrote:nice design sir!comment ko lang sa glass sir.. just add some refraction, then listen the reflection para ma balance ang dalawa (refractio - reflection).. also try to kill the horizon on left part sir..

mg cocomment then ako sa kotse.. i think bawal mg park sa harap ng fire hydrant.. hehehe..

ill listen to reflection sir ,,oo nga ung refraction medyo mababa sir tenkyu ulit .

ahh so bawal pala o pangit pala ung effects ng horizon.pag lumitaw. nice tips dagdag itong kaalaman sir
fire hydrant oo nga e bat kopa linagay kasi sa daan un e di kc ako marunong magdrive at mga batas sa trapiko
salamat sir

ice † wrote:pok.. pota maka tisud ya itng fire hydrant mu..... tu keng dalan di ko napancin! hehehe

wapin ayduna dko nakita to ah eku kc byasa mgdrive pok e ..salamat mastah ,, mamangan kung Munsanas keng kasalukuyan

Noel_Diaz wrote:

Jay2x wrote:

Noel_Diaz wrote:iba kana jay,,, i like ur materials, color scheme, render output,,, ayos na ayos lalo na ung sky at road,,,, master na tawag ko sayo,,, hehehehehe,,, masyal ka ofis turu me ing glass itang sa2byan ng pambynaby kako,,,, panayan daka bukas,,,,, anyaran ke ing road mat mu neh heheheh

SAlanat Sir noel at ngustuhan niyo. sige puntalan daka bukas nebiye ke keka itang pinicture kung road eheheh
thx kareng shinare mung 3d templates ne.

ika pa dagdagan tala pah ren heheeheeee,,,, magaling nakang bumanat vray nice png neh hindi na blured,,,,

bossing noel, correction namby_pamby ali pambynaby, makanyan ka idol daka panaman, sumbung daka kang swards

pahabol lang po...masmganda cgro kung nyt scene ung ginawa nyo,base sa function ng structure. add some lighting fixtures and other landscp elements.
kip posting sir

wow nice one mun, dagdagan mu nemu tanaman banda keni <<,

Pare. ganda na ng settings mo, ah. Gumagaling! hehe konting laman lng sa scene mo ayos na! Advice lng. ung mga leaves ng halaman mo. lagyan mo lng ng konting refraction para pag tumatama ung araw sa leaves. mas realistic. advice lng naman po sir. Keep Posting. And hoping sa mga masmagaganda pang designs and works.

namby_pamby wrote:wow nice one mun, dagdagan mu nemu tanaman banda keni <<,

ahheh salamat nics namby . medyo magbayu naku tutuki .enku mgpost pag maknini pa ing linwal a output ehehe
salamat at aburyan me.

Critique1407 wrote:Pare. ganda na ng settings mo, ah. Gumagaling! hehe konting laman lng sa scene mo ayos na! Advice lng. ung mga leaves ng halaman mo. lagyan mo lng ng konting refraction para pag tumatama ung araw sa leaves. mas realistic. advice lng naman po sir. Keep Posting. And hoping sa mga masmagaganda pang designs and works.

salamat abe kpmpngan ka?sana kpo? aheh thx sa comment mo at tips n maganda. kasi my copy ryt yta ung mga evertnm na alaman e ,, salamat ill stick it to my brain

nice design po sir. keep posting po

christine wrote:nice design po sir. keep posting po

salamat po sa pgtanggap ng design Mis TiN.. gsto ko mtu2nan ung interior niyo salamat

ok n to..aprub n to..

Butz_Arki wrote:ok n to..aprub n to..

salamat sir butz sa pagdaan
sn kpo s nueva ecija? dun ako originate

comment nasabi na nila..........
add ka na lang cguro ng BG......

good job......

Jay2x wrote:

nomeradona wrote:umo-ok na ah. yung glass mat siguro tweak lang.

salamat po Sirmaster Nomera .sa pagdahan

kampampangan ka talaga ne...ang galing mung mhag juk... hahahaha. indi ku pa nakita yung pangalan mo sa listaan a para sa Decemebr EB sa pampanga.

cabanatuan bro....pero yung present place ko s bongabon..

Jay2x wrote:

Butz_Arki wrote:ok n to..aprub n to..

salamat sir butz sa pagdaan
sn kpo s nueva ecija? dun ako originate

denz_arki2008 wrote:comment nasabi na nila..........
add ka na lang cguro ng BG......

good job......

sir salamat its an honor.. idol .dpat kang tularan sir

Suggestion lng po since resto bar to mas ok syempre kung night effect ginawa nyo sir.... sarap p nmn to gawin kc malalaki ang glass nyo...un lng po

Hi jay..I like the design actually nung building..Rendering is good too..Just bit distracted nung car sa foreground,para lng kseng nakaharang sya sa kalsada.I know you would intend to do that,im sure nasa tama yan na pwesto but sometimes sa perspective minsan talga kailangan din may konting daya..Sabi nga ni dude Vic,it doesnt have to be right,it should be look good.. Yun lng sir..Keep it up po and Goodluck!

ARCHITHEKTHURA wrote:Hi jay..I like the design actually nung building..Rendering is good too..Just bit distracted nung car sa foreground,para lng kseng nakaharang sya sa kalsada.I know you would intend to do that,im sure nasa tama yan na pwesto but sometimes sa perspective minsan talga kailangan din may konting daya..Sabi nga ni dude Vic,it doesnt have to be right,it should be look good.. Yun lng sir..Keep it up po and Goodluck!

salamat po sir idolmaster ngstuhan niyo..tama po ung cars nga po eheh a ,
ganda po ng bnigay niyong words of wisdom. asahan niyo pong mandadaya pa ako ehh biru lng. thanx

comments nasabi na lahat. more tweaks pa bosing..nice post ayway