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Post by jhayarsamson Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:55 pm

Sir long time since i post here sana may improvement na sa work ko.
Here is my current render, wala pa pong roof material kasi di pa binibigay ng client un specs. update ko pagnabigay na un roof material. For the mean while ato po muna pa C&C para maimprove works ko thanks

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Post by celes Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:35 pm

nice render! a few suggestions though:

1. the grass would look better with a better texture, plus some displacement.
2. too much green and light bounces in the scene.. try lowering your secondary bounce.
3. green wall behind needs a bit more texture/displacement, looks too edgy.
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Post by cloud20 Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:39 pm

To add; your "kalat leaves" are on a straight line, which would be quite normal if the wind blew them against a straight object... Work on the entourage; it makes or breaks the scene...
Nice lighting...
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Post by lowellflores Thu Mar 04, 2010 11:19 pm

sir lagyan mu ng materials ang roof parang flat lang siya, ok yung design ng house. post more sir
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Post by qcksilver Thu Mar 04, 2010 11:33 pm

ok na bro galing,ask ko lang san nakalagay ung downspout?minsan kasi sa actual un ung nakakasira ng design if di maganda pagkakalagay
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Post by arkibons Thu Mar 04, 2010 11:38 pm

nice mood bro..
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Post by nickel Fri Mar 05, 2010 2:25 am

nasabi na lahat bro! pero panalo parin, ayos na to buttrock
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Post by MR. HOCK Fri Mar 05, 2010 2:37 am

malinis...
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Post by deosrock Fri Mar 05, 2010 3:00 am

-nice post sir.. sundin mo nalang mga comment ng mga masters..
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Post by jhayarsamson Mon Mar 08, 2010 2:09 am

Just post my edited version

C&C po ulit
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