PROGRESS - call center revised full image

again... here's the revised of call center reception i made =) comments are welcome for improvement.. tnx so much!

mas ok po sir ung 2nd pic. =)

kulang pa sir ng mga elements or abobots para mabuhay ung scene..
nice rendering

ikl0k wrote:mas ok po sir ung 2nd pic. =)

thanks po =) hehe at least may nagcomment na rin ...

kieko wrote:kulang pa sir ng mga elements or abobots para mabuhay ung scene..
nice rendering

ok po sir mgaadd pa po ko thanks po =)

nice work,kunting tweak pa at dagdag design sa ceiling.keep it up!

di po naka center mga lights sa mga T-runners...

hi sir a few tips:

1. ceiling lights - make sure they are centered sa mga ceiling panels.
2. ceiling panels - not very convincing, try an actual texture or just plain white.
3. some modelling issues.. like the reception desk, if that is curved, seems to have some breaks in the wood portion.
4. in general i think the lighting is "confused" - madaming highlights and yet the whole scene is a bit dark.

pls take these tips as constructive, hope to see some improvements

mushroom wrote:hi sir a few tips:

1. ceiling lights - make sure they are centered sa mga ceiling panels.
2. ceiling panels - not very convincing, try an actual texture or just plain white.
3. some modelling issues.. like the reception desk, if that is curved, seems to have some breaks in the wood portion.
4. in general i think the lighting is "confused" - madaming highlights and yet the whole scene is a bit dark.

pls take these tips as constructive, hope to see some improvements

wow thanks po so much! i'll take note of this =)

frostbite wrote:di po naka center mga lights sa mga T-runners...

thanks po =)

jenaro wrote:nice work,kunting tweak pa at dagdag design sa ceiling.keep it up!

thanks po sa tip =)

nice render and revision sir....

zildian_nico wrote:nice render and revision sir....

naku sir salamat po kso may kulang pa raw po =)

nice render sir..sakin lang...work on cieling sir...post more..

comments has been said....i'm agree with Sir Mashroom. kaunting dagdag comment lang po:

1. Reception Counter - if that is glass, baka walang umupong receptionist dyan.

2. Carpet - doesn't look like carpet.
3. Lighting - the overall lighting looks a bit dull. I would suggest to put some good lighting fixtures also like pendant light etc. Drop ceiling with cove lighting will help.
4. Chairs - should be corporate touch.

yun lamang po...keep posting and never get tired of practising!...Cheers!

uwak wrote:comments has been said....i'm agree with Sir Mashroom. kaunting dagdag comment lang po:

1. Reception Counter - if that is glass, baka walang umupong receptionist dyan.

2. Carpet - doesn't look like carpet.
3. Lighting - the overall lighting looks a bit dull. I would suggest to put some good lighting fixtures also like pendant light etc. Drop ceiling with cove lighting will help.
4. Chairs - should be corporate touch.

yun lamang po...keep posting and never get tired of practising!...Cheers!

thanks po! i'll take note of this too =)

knives seiji kun wrote:nice render sir..sakin lang...work on cieling sir...post more..

thaks po =)

nice render sir.

Zoro_Architecture wrote:nice render sir.

thanks po, i'll revised this as soon as i have free time =)

ellie wrote:

thanks po =)

lagyan mo ng image or texture ang frame sa tabi ng counter...parang masyadong mababa na ang ceiling pag dilagyan mo pa ng drop off ang side ng ceiling.i like the secong image typical sya konte drama lang...okey na .

zdesign wrote:lagyan mo ng image or texture ang frame sa tabi ng counter...parang masyadong mababa na ang ceiling pag dilagyan mo pa ng drop off ang side ng ceiling.i like the secong image typical sya konte drama lang...okey na .

sir thanks po sa comments =) cge po revised ko po uli to...

here's the revised again masters =) comments are welcome for improvement tnx =)