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Post by deosrock Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:23 pm

-pasensyahan nyo na itong share ko..
--critics and sugestions are very much welcome...
---as usual, cad modeled, rendered in max+vray..

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Post by arkitrix Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:27 pm

nice design sir... sa BG lang siguro saturated tweak pa.. keep it up.. Very Happy
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Post by deosrock Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:58 pm

arkitrix wrote:nice design sir... sa BG lang siguro saturated tweak pa.. keep it up.. Very Happy

salamat sa pagpansin sir! try to improve some more!!!
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Post by bizkong Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:13 am

nice design and render sir deo!!!for me sa bg sky, adjust nalang yung levels sa PS ng konti.sa akin paningin lang po naman sir...approve!!!
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Post by bakugan Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:20 am

Nice render bro. Parang mababa yung header sa may carport IMHO lang. Thanks sa pagshare. 2thumbsup

Siguro sa camera angle lang yata bro kaya parang mababa tingnan yung header, so paki adjust nalang sa cam. ng kunti. hehe.


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Post by deosrock Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:24 am

bizkong wrote:nice design and render sir deo!!!for me sa bg sky, adjust nalang yung levels sa PS ng konti.sa akin paningin lang po naman sir...approve!!!

-noted po sir, thanx sa pagdaan.. mabuhay ka!
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Post by deosrock Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:25 am

bakugan wrote:Nice render bro. Parang mababa yung header sa may carport IMHO lang. Thanks sa pagshare. 2thumbsup

Siguro sa camera angle lang yata bro kaya parang mababa tingnan yung header, so paki adjust nalang sa cam. ng kunti. hehe.

--salamat sa pagpansin sir, i'll try to check...
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Post by arkiedmund Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:31 am

it's either your cars are out of scale or your header is too low. Check the actual dimensions of the cars, you can do that by asking google for the cars website.

Background is a bit dark for your scene, minor tweaks in post-processing will do the trick for that.

Other comments has been said

Cheers!
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Post by deosrock Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:56 am

arkiedmund wrote:it's either your cars are out of scale or your header is too low. Check the actual dimensions of the cars, you can do that by asking google for the cars website.

Background is a bit dark for your scene, minor tweaks in post-processing will do the trick for that.

Other comments has been said

Cheers!

-i-try ko pong i-check lahat sir, salamat sa walang sawang pagtulong...
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Post by Ar_Can_EVSU Sun Jan 17, 2010 2:38 am

great design!!!
minor comments lang... yong texturing ng sidewalk... yong ibang comments nasabi na... keep posting..
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Post by deosrock Sun Jan 17, 2010 3:02 am

Ar_Can_EVSU wrote:great design!!!
minor comments lang... yong texturing ng sidewalk... yong ibang comments nasabi na... keep posting..

-salamat sir for sharing some of your time!
--noted po lahat ng comment sir!!!
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Post by effreymm Sun Jan 17, 2010 3:10 am

Nice design sir. Add ng bump sa wall...
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Post by yrique Sun Jan 17, 2010 3:53 am

nice rendering po sir 2thumbsup
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Post by deosrock Sun Jan 17, 2010 3:56 am

effreymm wrote:Nice design sir. Add ng bump sa wall...

-salamat sir, may bump yan, pero konti yata....
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Post by deosrock Sun Jan 17, 2010 3:57 am

yrique wrote:nice rendering po sir 2thumbsup

-thanx for dropping by sir!
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Post by alwin Sun Jan 17, 2010 6:51 pm

nice! post more views!
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Post by manex Sun Jan 17, 2010 8:00 pm

nice design and concept sir... thumbsup
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Post by keitzkoy Sun Jan 17, 2010 11:25 pm

ayos sir, clean rendering.. 2thumbsup
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Post by scorpion21 Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:10 am

IMO parang bitin din sa length yung garage..check the spacing of your grooves/joints on the road...masinsin masyado,,,tanggalin muna lang yung 2 sa gitna to make it more realistic...HTH...
nice work in general bro,,,thanks for sharing
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Post by deosrock Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:16 am

alwin wrote:nice! post more views!

-thanx for drooping by sir! i'll try to set another angle...
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Post by deosrock Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:17 am

keitzkoy wrote:ayos sir, clean rendering.. 2thumbsup

--salamat sir...
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Post by deosrock Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:18 am

scorpion21 wrote:IMO parang bitin din sa length yung garage..check the spacing of your grooves/joints on the road...masinsin masyado,,,tanggalin muna lang yung 2 sa gitna to make it more realistic...HTH...
nice work in general bro,,,thanks for sharing

-thanx for sharing your ideas sir, i'll try to check everything...
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Post by marcelinoiii Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:30 am

ok nmn ang design sir, sa akin lang pwede pa pong ma-develop with proper scaling for a more proportioned elements. render malinis, panalo! Very Happy
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Post by deosrock Mon Jan 18, 2010 3:20 am

marcelinoiii wrote:ok nmn ang design sir, sa akin lang pwede pa pong ma-develop with proper scaling for a more proportioned elements. render malinis, panalo! Very Happy

---salamat sa comment sir! this will improve my craft more!
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Post by zildian_nico Mon Jan 18, 2010 3:14 pm

nice design and render sir.....pa rehistro niyo po ang kotse...hehehe....
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