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Jay2x
ERICK
patz_28
scorpion21
rangalua
benj.arki
pixelburn
jarul
Tracer
tanting
marcelinoiii
bizkong
balongeisler
SPHERE
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FOUR TOWERS
my first Post here in cgp and newbie in vray
pa cnc mga bros and sis...tnx
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2 storey residence
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early Bird
my first Post here in cgp and newbie in vray
pa cnc mga bros and sis...tnx
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2 storey residence
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early Bird
Last edited by SPHERE on Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:47 am; edited 3 times in total
SPHERE- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 54
Age : 38
Location : Pampanga
Registration date : 02/12/2009
Re: Previous Works
welcome,nice one
bizkong- CGP Guru
- Number of posts : 1583
Age : 73
Registration date : 15/10/2009
Re: Previous Works
bro, nice render. very realistic. if I may just give a few notes and comment, I'm not sure if it's just my eye, but something is wrong with the model of the slab of the balconies, nadelete mo ata yun polygon sa bottom ng object. di din kasi makita yun thickness ng beams, kung yun nga yun. and last thing, yun mga dahon nakalutang ng konti... but the rendering is really nice and neat!!!
marcelinoiii- CGP Guru
- Number of posts : 1125
Age : 42
Location : Singapore
Registration date : 29/07/2009
Re: Previous Works
nakarin ka pampanga pare..? atos ya ing gawa mo.
tanting- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 782
Location : Dubai_Tarlac_Pampanga
Registration date : 11/04/2009
Re: Previous Works
nice work sir, taas mo lang ung subdivision
Tracer- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 253
Age : 47
Location : UAE
Registration date : 08/09/2009
Re: Previous Works
welcome sir..
nice renderings..
some comments
1st img
- msyado nang nadistort ang view.
- mas ok cgro kung nakadsplace ug bricks..ang lapit na kac sa camera,,para makita ung edges..
- floating dahon
2nd img
- nice mood
- gutter and railing is way too relfctive..parang mirror na.
- laruin mo pa ung glass rflction
- colorbleeding
- walang ridge
- usog mo sa side ung white car.(and mali ung direction nya)
- msyadong sharp ung edge ng sidewalk
- noise.
3rd img
- ayusin ang sidewalk (sharp egde and mapping)
- sana dnretso nlng ung stoneworks sa side (sa 2nd floor)
- parang mataas masyado ung step sa porch
- noise
- ipasok mo nlng ung car sa carport..
nice renderings..
some comments
1st img
- msyado nang nadistort ang view.
- mas ok cgro kung nakadsplace ug bricks..ang lapit na kac sa camera,,para makita ung edges..
- floating dahon
2nd img
- nice mood
- gutter and railing is way too relfctive..parang mirror na.
- laruin mo pa ung glass rflction
- colorbleeding
- walang ridge
- usog mo sa side ung white car.(and mali ung direction nya)
- msyadong sharp ung edge ng sidewalk
- noise.
3rd img
- ayusin ang sidewalk (sharp egde and mapping)
- sana dnretso nlng ung stoneworks sa side (sa 2nd floor)
- parang mataas masyado ung step sa porch
- noise
- ipasok mo nlng ung car sa carport..
Last edited by jarul on Thu Dec 03, 2009 6:07 am; edited 2 times in total
Re: Previous Works
very natural ung lighting mo.. mganda.... ung subdivs n lang siguro,, medyo mdami sir noise eh.. pero astig p rin...
pixelburn- CGP Guru
- Number of posts : 1436
Age : 40
Location : Dubai, SAN PEDRO, LAGUNA, Brunei Darrusalam
Registration date : 09/04/2009
Re: Previous Works
nice work sir . comment ko lng sa gutter mejo npasobra lng ung reflect? pati sa handrails. then konting noise. ung lng sir but the work is good. post more sir !
benj.arki- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 810
Age : 35
Location : cavite
Registration date : 21/06/2009
Re: Previous Works
i think nasabi na lahat....not a bad rendering for a newbie...good work...
scorpion21- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 769
Age : 77
Location : PI
Registration date : 28/06/2009
Re: Previous Works
next time brod lagyan muna lang ng tagalog translation para naman maintindihan ng iba...tanting wrote:nakarin ka pampanga pare..? atos ya ing gawa mo.
dakal a salamat ne....(Maraming salamat !)
scorpion21- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 769
Age : 77
Location : PI
Registration date : 28/06/2009
Re: Previous Works
Galing sir..post more
patz_28- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 687
Age : 43
Location : VIGAN CITY - MAKATI
Registration date : 13/12/2008
Re: Previous Works
jarul wrote:welcome sir..
nice renderings..
some comments
1st img
- msyado nang nadistort ang view.
- mas ok cgro kung nakadsplace ug bricks..ang lapit na kac sa camera,,para makita ung edges..
- floating dahon
2nd img
- nice mood
- gutter and railing is way too relfctive..parang mirror na.
- laruin mo pa ung glass rflction
- colorbleeding
- walang ridge
- usog mo sa side ung white car.(and mali ung direction nya)
- msyadong sharp ung edge ng sidewalk
- noise.
3rd img
- ayusin ang sidewalk (shatp egde ang mapping)
- sana dnretso nlng ung stoneworks sa side (sa 2nd floor)
- parang mataas masyado ung step sa porch
- noise
- ipasok mo nlng ung car sa carport..
hakot!!! .... very well said master jesrael....
Re: Previous Works
nice welcome dude..
nasabi na mga comments...well said ..sir jarul.
out of scale yung chair nagmukhang mataas takbang niya
contrast. medyo dark ang subject less detail.. practice pa sa lighting
matagal magload ang image mo sir.. mabibigat ang file size.. (menikal ku batal keni jo)
maganda mga compositions mo sir..
and for 1st time malayo pa ang mararating niyo.. .. mukhang hahabol kayo sa eb sir ah
nasabi na mga comments...well said ..sir jarul.
out of scale yung chair nagmukhang mataas takbang niya
contrast. medyo dark ang subject less detail.. practice pa sa lighting
matagal magload ang image mo sir.. mabibigat ang file size.. (menikal ku batal keni jo)
maganda mga compositions mo sir..
and for 1st time malayo pa ang mararating niyo.. .. mukhang hahabol kayo sa eb sir ah
Jay2x- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 743
Age : 37
Location : Pampanga
Registration date : 09/11/2008
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balongeisler wrote:nice work dude.
tnx 4 d comment sir...
SPHERE- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 54
Age : 38
Location : Pampanga
Registration date : 02/12/2009
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bizkong wrote:welcome,nice one
thank for your warm welcome..
SPHERE- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 54
Age : 38
Location : Pampanga
Registration date : 02/12/2009
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rangalua wrote:Very nice design & visualization Sir, realistic Keep it Up & post more...
thank you jo' until nxt tym...,glad you like it.,
SPHERE- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 54
Age : 38
Location : Pampanga
Registration date : 02/12/2009
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benj.arki wrote:nice work sir . comment ko lng sa gutter mejo npasobra lng ung reflect? pati sa handrails. then konting noise. ung lng sir but the work is good. post more sir !
big thanks for the comment.,i'll keep it all.,until next time.,bye
SPHERE- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 54
Age : 38
Location : Pampanga
Registration date : 02/12/2009
Re: Previous Works
marcelinoiii wrote:bro, nice render. very realistic. if I may just give a few notes and comment, I'm not sure if it's just my eye, but something is wrong with the model of the slab of the balconies, nadelete mo ata yun polygon sa bottom ng object. di din kasi makita yun thickness ng beams, kung yun nga yun. and last thing, yun mga dahon nakalutang ng konti... but the rendering is really nice and neat!!!
wow.,i never thought to receive this kind of comments.,big thanks sir..,noted lahat sir...
SPHERE- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 54
Age : 38
Location : Pampanga
Registration date : 02/12/2009
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tanting wrote:nakarin ka pampanga pare..? atos ya ing gawa mo.
kuya taga sta. lucia, sta. ana po ako...,pero maratun po ako sa beverly place..,ayus la ba koy?thanks koy...,kaw po san kayo maratun?
SPHERE- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 54
Age : 38
Location : Pampanga
Registration date : 02/12/2009
Re: Previous Works
Tracer wrote:nice work sir, taas mo lang ung subdivision
thanks sir...,noted po.,tc
Last edited by SPHERE on Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:09 am; edited 2 times in total
SPHERE- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 54
Age : 38
Location : Pampanga
Registration date : 02/12/2009
Re: Previous Works
pixelburn wrote:very natural ung lighting mo.. mganda.... ung subdivs n lang siguro,, medyo mdami sir noise eh.. pero astig p rin...
idol...,maraming salamat sa comment mo kuya..,nakita ko na lahat ng mga works mo idol,mgaganda lahat...until next tym kuya..,
SPHERE- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 54
Age : 38
Location : Pampanga
Registration date : 02/12/2009
Re: Previous Works
scorpion21 wrote:i think nasabi na lahat....not a bad rendering for a newbie...good work...
thanks sir...
SPHERE- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 54
Age : 38
Location : Pampanga
Registration date : 02/12/2009
Re: Previous Works
ui nice renders cabalen. ayos ang mga render mo, medyo noisy lang nang konti and dark shadows, mas ok kung malinaw at kita ang details ser.hehe. ok po. keep it up. Welcome keka Cabalen!ehe
mEejan- CGP Guru
- Number of posts : 1149
Age : 33
Location : angeles city
Registration date : 30/05/2009
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