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Post by SPHERE Wed Dec 02, 2009 1:29 am

FOUR TOWERS
my first Post here in cgp and newbie in vray

pa cnc mga bros and sis...tnx

[img]Previous Works Apartment00[/img]

2 storey residence

[img]Previous Works Final1[/img]

early Bird

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Post by balongeisler Wed Dec 02, 2009 1:37 am

nice work dude. 2thumbsup
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Post by bizkong Wed Dec 02, 2009 1:46 am

welcome,nice one thumbsup
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Post by marcelinoiii Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:00 am

bro, nice render. very realistic. if I may just give a few notes and comment, I'm not sure if it's just my eye, but something is wrong with the model of the slab of the balconies, nadelete mo ata yun polygon sa bottom ng object. di din kasi makita yun thickness ng beams, kung yun nga yun. and last thing, yun mga dahon nakalutang ng konti... but the rendering is really nice and neat!!! 2thumbsup
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Post by tanting Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:15 am

nakarin ka pampanga pare..? atos ya ing gawa mo.
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Post by Tracer Wed Dec 02, 2009 3:39 am

nice work sir, taas mo lang ung subdivision 2thumbsup
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Post by jarul Wed Dec 02, 2009 5:35 am

welcome sir..
nice renderings..
some comments

1st img
- msyado nang nadistort ang view.
- mas ok cgro kung nakadsplace ug bricks..ang lapit na kac sa camera,,para makita ung edges..
- floating dahon

2nd img
- nice mood
- gutter and railing is way too relfctive..parang mirror na.
- laruin mo pa ung glass rflction
- colorbleeding
- walang ridge
- usog mo sa side ung white car.(and mali ung direction nya)
- msyadong sharp ung edge ng sidewalk
- noise.

3rd img
- ayusin ang sidewalk (sharp egde and mapping)
- sana dnretso nlng ung stoneworks sa side (sa 2nd floor)
- parang mataas masyado ung step sa porch
- noise
- ipasok mo nlng ung car sa carport..

thumbsup


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Post by pixelburn Wed Dec 02, 2009 5:41 am

very natural ung lighting mo.. mganda.... ung subdivs n lang siguro,, medyo mdami sir noise eh.. Very Happy pero astig p rin...
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Post by benj.arki Wed Dec 02, 2009 6:01 am

nice work sir . comment ko lng sa gutter mejo npasobra lng ung reflect? pati sa handrails. then konting noise. ung lng sir but the work is good. post more sir !
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Post by rangalua Wed Dec 02, 2009 6:46 am

Very nice design & visualization Sir, realistic Keep it Up & post more...
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Post by scorpion21 Wed Dec 02, 2009 7:07 am

i think nasabi na lahat....not a bad rendering for a newbie...good work...
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Post by scorpion21 Wed Dec 02, 2009 7:10 am

tanting wrote:nakarin ka pampanga pare..? atos ya ing gawa mo.
next time brod lagyan muna lang ng tagalog translation para naman maintindihan ng iba...

dakal a salamat ne....(Maraming salamat !)
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Post by patz_28 Wed Dec 02, 2009 7:31 pm

Galing sir..post more
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Post by ERICK Wed Dec 02, 2009 9:20 pm

jarul wrote:welcome sir..
nice renderings..
some comments

1st img
- msyado nang nadistort ang view.
- mas ok cgro kung nakadsplace ug bricks..ang lapit na kac sa camera,,para makita ung edges..
- floating dahon

2nd img
- nice mood
- gutter and railing is way too relfctive..parang mirror na.
- laruin mo pa ung glass rflction
- colorbleeding
- walang ridge
- usog mo sa side ung white car.(and mali ung direction nya)
- msyadong sharp ung edge ng sidewalk
- noise.

3rd img
- ayusin ang sidewalk (shatp egde ang mapping)
- sana dnretso nlng ung stoneworks sa side (sa 2nd floor)
- parang mataas masyado ung step sa porch
- noise
- ipasok mo nlng ung car sa carport..

thumbsup

hakot!!! hippie .... very well said master jesrael....
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Post by Jay2x Fri Dec 04, 2009 3:39 pm

nice welcome dude..
thumbsup nasabi na mga comments...well said ..sir jarul.
out of scale yung chair nagmukhang mataas takbang niya
contrast. medyo dark ang subject less detail.. practice pa sa lighting
matagal magload ang image mo sir.. mabibigat ang file size.. (menikal ku batal keni jo)

maganda mga compositions mo sir..
and for 1st time malayo pa ang mararating niyo.. .. mukhang hahabol kayo sa eb sir ah
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Post by SPHERE Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:28 am

balongeisler wrote:nice work dude. 2thumbsup

tnx 4 d comment sir... Very Happy
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Post by SPHERE Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:32 am

bizkong wrote:welcome,nice one thumbsup

thank for your warm welcome..
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Post by SPHERE Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:44 am

rangalua wrote:Very nice design & visualization Sir, realistic Keep it Up & post more...

thank you jo' until nxt tym...,glad you like it.,
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Post by SPHERE Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:47 am

benj.arki wrote:nice work sir . comment ko lng sa gutter mejo npasobra lng ung reflect? pati sa handrails. then konting noise. ung lng sir but the work is good. post more sir !

big thanks for the comment.,i'll keep it all.,until next time.,bye thumbsup
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Post by SPHERE Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:52 am

marcelinoiii wrote:bro, nice render. very realistic. if I may just give a few notes and comment, I'm not sure if it's just my eye, but something is wrong with the model of the slab of the balconies, nadelete mo ata yun polygon sa bottom ng object. di din kasi makita yun thickness ng beams, kung yun nga yun. and last thing, yun mga dahon nakalutang ng konti... but the rendering is really nice and neat!!! 2thumbsup

wow.,i never thought to receive this kind of comments.,big thanks sir..,noted lahat sir... 2thumbsup
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Post by SPHERE Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:56 am

tanting wrote:nakarin ka pampanga pare..? atos ya ing gawa mo.

kuya taga sta. lucia, sta. ana po ako...,pero maratun po ako sa beverly place..,ayus la ba koy?thanks koy...,kaw po san kayo maratun?
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Post by SPHERE Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:59 am

Tracer wrote:nice work sir, taas mo lang ung subdivision 2thumbsup

thanks sir...,noted po.,tc Very Happy


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Post by SPHERE Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:08 am

pixelburn wrote:very natural ung lighting mo.. mganda.... ung subdivs n lang siguro,, medyo mdami sir noise eh.. Very Happy pero astig p rin...


idol...,maraming salamat sa comment mo kuya..,nakita ko na lahat ng mga works mo idol,mgaganda lahat...until next tym kuya..,
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Post by SPHERE Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:11 am

scorpion21 wrote:i think nasabi na lahat....not a bad rendering for a newbie...good work...

thanks sir... Very Happy
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Post by mEejan Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:14 am

ui nice renders cabalen. ayos ang mga render mo, medyo noisy lang nang konti and dark shadows, mas ok kung malinaw at kita ang details ser.hehe. ok po. keep it up. Welcome keka Cabalen!ehe
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