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magpaparamdam po ulit, just wanna share my latest render done in cad 2009 ,3ds max 2009 + vray 1.5 sp2 and cs3
C and C's are welcome and more power cgp ang idea po ng design ng bahay was gathered from the web
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ayus tumira narin ng exterior,,,sensya na ngayon ko lang nakita,,,danda ng setting

astig bro though hindi yata oks ung placement ng satellite dish. it is more appropriate kung dun sa garage roof inilagay or sa main roof medyo likod.

the background/sky is bare imho.

nevertheless malupit na rendering na to

ayos ayos....ganda ganda...medyo bitin lang sa lutong....

malupet ang entourage...anda rin ng texturing....

Nice render. A little bit of fine tuning on the modeling lang.

My C&C:

1. The gutter at the apex doesn't seem to join properly
2. Curb is chamfered, you might want to quarter round the profile
3. I can't see your roof properly above the porch. Is that a highlight or a blank area?
4. Scattered leave does not have texture
5. Mailbox is a bit too obvious too be just a simple geometry
6. You can readjust your tiling on the concrete.
7. The Blue roof is a bit off. Can be desaturated or chose another color that will suite the overall design.

I think that's all. Keep it up bro. Cheers!

Muggz wrote:ayus tumira narin ng exterior,,,sensya na ngayon ko lang nakita,,,danda ng setting

thanks bro.minsan ka na lang ata mag online ah. ehheehe

A.K.A. wrote:astig bro though hindi yata oks ung placement ng satellite dish. it is more appropriate kung dun sa garage roof inilagay or sa main roof medyo likod.

the background/sky is bare imho.

nevertheless malupit na rendering na to

thank sir A.K.A background sky po is default vray sky wala kasi po kasi akong magandang sky collection specially for sunset.
i've tried it but sablay pa din hehehe kaya i just prefer to use the default vray sky

kinej wrote:ayos ayos....ganda ganda...medyo bitin lang sa lutong....


malupet ang entourage...anda rin ng texturing....

thanks bro,ill try to improve it next time

chobs wrote:Nice render. A little bit of fine tuning on the modeling lang.

My C&C:

1. The gutter at the apex doesn't seem to join properly
2. Curb is chamfered, you might want to quarter round the profile
3. I can't see your roof properly above the porch. Is that a highlight or a blank area?
4. Scattered leave does not have texture
5. Mailbox is a bit too obvious too be just a simple geometry
6. You can readjust your tiling on the concrete.
7. The Blue roof is a bit off. Can be desaturated or chose another color that will suite the overall design.

I think that's all. Keep it up bro. Cheers!

i also thought of putting a rounded profile for my curb, but I've also seen some curbs who has a chamfered profile that's why prefer to use that one. I also doubt the slope of the roof in my porch the one you've seen is highlighted part of the roof.
thanks sir chobs for the comment this will help me a lot

once again i really thank you all for the c&cs this is really what i need to improve my skills. more power to all.

kalako picture very nice render,,, superb sir!!! keep it up sir!!!

galing sir!!!! swak na swak sa akin!!

Noel_Diaz wrote:kalako picture very nice render,,, superb sir!!! keep it up sir!!!

bizkong wrote:galing sir!!!! swak na swak sa akin!!

thanks mga sirs

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Muggz wrote:ayus tumira narin ng exterior,,,sensya na ngayon ko lang nakita,,,danda ng setting

thanks bro.minsan ka na lang ata mag online ah. ehheehe
oo nga bisyo na nagagawa ng mafia wars sa buhay ko,,,tsk