Commercial UPDATE

Mga master..post po ako ulit..hindi pa po ito approve sa owner..ngayong saturday pa kami mag kita..kung sa kali may comment kayo sa design much better po..maraming salamat po..Thank's to bossing Tan





sorry po sa mga noisy lalo na yung car na black..hindi pa po ito final..keep it up CGP






here's the update picz..Still not uproved..











O.T lang po medyo diko alam kung pano mag create ng new material halos lahat puno na po..kaya pa ulit ulit yung mga commercial sign



salamat po sa mga commento sayo nara

oi daming raket ah....
since hndi pa eto final..eto ung comments ko...

- ung point of view alanganin.ibahin mo lng...
- the 3d peeps looks weird....
- mapping sa ceiling and sa stones
- na stretch ung view
- blotches
- add signages..
- mas ok kung bldg nlng ang nasa glass rflctions.
- stone works pa rin po ba ung sa hall ways? umabot po kac sa ceiling ung stones...
- if i were you,,photomatch na to bossing...sarap tingnan nyan..heheh.

nice render..

ot..c arch tan imong bossing???

i agree with jarul at yung ceiling stone na umabot sa ceiling use multisub materials, imho lang mabuti pa alisin mo nalang yung mga peeps para fucos lahat sa design yung client mo! overall great render !

check lang ung tao bro...off scale ata ung railing hanggang puwit lng baka my mahulog..

or wag mo nlang lagyan ng tao para ma puna ung design..

kung nde pa po ito final, for sure malaki improvement nito kung gagawin mo ung mga comment nila sa itaas, anyway maganda ung design.. gud lak sa presentation nyo sa sabado,,, medyo puyatan ulit...

jarul wrote:oi daming raket ah....
since hndi pa eto final..eto ung comments ko...

- ung point of view alanganin.ibahin mo lng...
- the 3d peeps looks weird....
- mapping sa ceiling and sa stones
- na stretch ung view
- blotches
- add signages..
- mas ok kung bldg nlng ang nasa glass rflctions.
- stone works pa rin po ba ung sa hall ways? umabot po kac sa ceiling ung stones...
- if i were you,,photomatch na to bossing...sarap tingnan nyan..heheh.

nice render..

ot..c arch tan imong bossing???

opo master jarul update ko lang to..idol ko po kayo

alwin wrote:i agree with jarul at yung ceiling stone na umabot sa ceiling use multisub materials, imho lang mabuti pa alisin mo nalang yung mga peeps para fucos lahat sa design yung client mo! overall great render !

maraming salamat sir idol ko po kayo

comments by cgpeeps already points out important aspects. anyway, good points for me is lighting - soft lighting, you might want to improve it and other elements and design too is ok for me. keep it up sir.

ramzARKI wrote:check lang ung tao bro...off scale ata ung railing hanggang puwit lng baka my mahulog..

or wag mo nlang lagyan ng tao para ma puna ung design..

oo nga parang mahulog hehehe salamat po sir

pixelburn wrote:kung nde pa po ito final, for sure malaki improvement nito kung gagawin mo ung mga comment nila sa itaas, anyway maganda ung design.. gud lak sa presentation nyo sa sabado,,, medyo puyatan ulit...

oo nga sir..salamat sa pag comment sir..idol ko po kayo

dagdag lng po sa suggestions s design(architecturally)...kung ppwede add hierarchy sa ENTRANCE mo,halimbawa:
-thicker wall or extruded shed sa front;
-OTHER color pra may focal point;
-a different material cguro sir
... sana makatulong...peace

markuz23 wrote:dagdag lng po sa suggestions s design(architecturally)...kung ppwede add hierarchy sa ENTRANCE mo,halimbawa:
-thicker wall or extruded shed sa front;
-OTHER color pra may focal point;
-a different material cguro sir
... sana makatulong...peace

yes sir talagang nakatulong ka..noted..salamat sa pag comment sir

LadiesMan217 wrote:

markuz23 wrote:dagdag lng po sa suggestions s design(architecturally)...kung ppwede add hierarchy sa ENTRANCE mo,halimbawa:
-thicker wall or extruded shed sa front;
-OTHER color pra may focal point;
-a different material cguro sir
... sana makatulong...peace

yes sir talagang nakatulong ka..noted..salamat sa pag comment sir

no problemo!!share ko lng ung natutunan nmen sa theory of architecture... hehhehe..ung lng kse nttndaan ko..hahah!! BTW,goodluck boss!!!

sir ung stone brick mejo putol hmm try to adjut sa uvw map. and mas maganda cguro kung buoin mo n lng ung stone brick pati sa gilid nya pra ndi bitin. salamat sir sa pag post!