shot of the pool
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nomeradona
v_wrangler
arki_vhin
Tracer
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shot of the pool
This is my 1st post, i hope you like it, thanks , comments and suggestions are free. hehehe
Tracer- CGP Apprentice
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Location : UAE
Registration date : 08/09/2009
Re: shot of the pool
nice one sir...ganda ng mood
comment lang po sa water....parang hindi pang pool ang water..parang pang river kasi masyadong reflective...di ba ang pool medjo kita ang tiles sa ilalalim? so gawin mong off white ang refraction color mo sir..
then may mga white sa second image...dahil sa ilaw yata...
add materials narin sa mga ladder ng pool parang flat white color kasi...
yun lang po.
comment lang po sa water....parang hindi pang pool ang water..parang pang river kasi masyadong reflective...di ba ang pool medjo kita ang tiles sa ilalalim? so gawin mong off white ang refraction color mo sir..
then may mga white sa second image...dahil sa ilaw yata...
add materials narin sa mga ladder ng pool parang flat white color kasi...
yun lang po.
arki_vhin- CGP Dabarkads
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Location : batang caloocan, tinapon sa SG
Registration date : 21/09/2008
Re: shot of the pool
arki_vhin wrote:nice one sir...ganda ng mood
comment lang po sa water....parang hindi pang pool ang water..parang pang river kasi masyadong reflective...di ba ang pool medjo kita ang tiles sa ilalalim? so gawin mong off white ang refraction color mo sir..
then may mga white sa second image...dahil sa ilaw yata...
add materials narin sa mga ladder ng pool parang flat white color kasi...
yun lang po.
Ok, Maraming salamat sir, ung mga white dahil sa ilaw, naputol nga ung image nung naupload ko e
Tracer- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 253
Age : 47
Location : UAE
Registration date : 08/09/2009
Re: shot of the pool
Tracer wrote:arki_vhin wrote:nice one sir...ganda ng mood
comment lang po sa water....parang hindi pang pool ang water..parang pang river kasi masyadong reflective...di ba ang pool medjo kita ang tiles sa ilalalim? so gawin mong off white ang refraction color mo sir..
then may mga white sa second image...dahil sa ilaw yata...
add materials narin sa mga ladder ng pool parang flat white color kasi...
yun lang po.
Ok, Maraming salamat sir, ung mga white dahil sa ilaw, naputol nga ung image nung naupload ko e
pansin ko nga....limit your image in 800 pix that is the rule para di maputol ang image...
arki_vhin- CGP Dabarkads
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Re: shot of the pool
Its like LWF gone haywire. I'm not sure about your contrasts - something seems to be wrong...
Re: shot of the pool
first of all welcome bro.. good attempt for your first post.
you might want to ereconsider the background lang, para hindi gaanong monotonous. and i guess a good background can be a unifying factor even. the way i see it, the horizon is even above that fence. so something should be behind that at hindi lang sky..
you might want to ereconsider the background lang, para hindi gaanong monotonous. and i guess a good background can be a unifying factor even. the way i see it, the horizon is even above that fence. so something should be behind that at hindi lang sky..
Re: shot of the pool
v_wrangler wrote:Its like LWF gone haywire. I'm not sure about your contrasts - something seems to be wrong...
thansk sir, maybe i will work on the contrast or lightness a little bit more
Tracer- CGP Apprentice
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Location : UAE
Registration date : 08/09/2009
Re: shot of the pool
nomeradona wrote:first of all welcome bro.. good attempt for your first post.
you might want to ereconsider the background lang, para hindi gaanong monotonous. and i guess a good background can be a unifying factor even. the way i see it, the horizon is even above that fence. so something should be behind that at hindi lang sky..
maraming salamat sir, pool deck po sya so nilagay ko lang background is a simple sky but i will do that also
Tracer- CGP Apprentice
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Location : UAE
Registration date : 08/09/2009
Re: shot of the pool
cute nung 2nd image...
jolicoeur030488- CGP Apprentice
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Re: shot of the pool
jolicoeur030488 wrote:cute nung 2nd image...
salamat sir
Tracer- CGP Apprentice
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Re: shot of the pool
nice shot....keep it up
exodus- CGP Apprentice
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Re: shot of the pool
The water for me is not an issue. I would suggest to take it from the other side wherein you'll see the building or adjacent achitecture and see how they blend together including the softscape design. That I think, would be more appreciated by your client and would give them a stronger idea.
Re: shot of the pool
For me sir try to explore more views then choose the better one. agree ako kay sir vhin and sir edge. Do what they say so i will make your work better.
Neil Joshua Rosario- CGP Guru
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