4 Storey Building

by whey09 Mon Sep 28, 2009 6:59 pm

share ulit ako ng latest work ko po,,,proposed office project po ng office namin ito,,,its located in C.M. Recto,,,the design not final yet kasi may issues pa sa lot,,,all is done by me, from design to render,,,,c & c's are welcome po, modelled and reendered in max 2009, + PS.

pagpsensyahan nyo na po kung kulang sa tao,,,hehehe

4 Storey Building FORPOSTING-3

by Crainelee Mon Sep 28, 2009 7:45 pm

nice presentation u have bro. approved 2thumbsup

by nomeradona Mon Sep 28, 2009 7:58 pm

nice focus to the main subject. kahit parang kulang pero ang gandang tingnan dahil unified ang composition.

by 3dpjumong2007 Mon Sep 28, 2009 8:29 pm

apply mo blur bro sa cars sa ps para mas astig pa.. para sa akin naman mas prefer ko may lighting from outside source na mejo bright for presentation like this , ryt now kasi mejo malungkot sya imho , but the point is delivered ,ok na to .try mo pa isang pihit ng lighting mo , im sure may iba pa..nice design bro.. 2thumbsup

by cgil Mon Sep 28, 2009 10:54 pm

NICE RENDER... PARA S AKIN MAS OKEY KUNG NAKA OPACITY YUNG BLOCKS BOTH SIDES! PARA MAS MAGANDA ANG FOCUS... MOVE PA ANG KAMERA NEAR THE BUILDING AND APPLY THE RULE OF THIRDS... MAS GAGANDA PA ITO!!!SAKA YUNG WINDOW REFLECTION.. KEEP IT UP.. ROCK N ROLL!

by archi_ram Mon Sep 28, 2009 11:36 pm

nice...adjust mo pa yung glass reflection 2thumbsup

by whey09 Mon Sep 28, 2009 11:47 pm

@ sir crainlee, nomer - thanks po sa pagdaan!

@ sir jumong - try ko po mga suggestions mo,,thanks!

@ sir cgil - thanks po sa mga comments!,,,actually po sir,,3/4 lang ng lot ang ginamit ko muna kasi may issues pa nga sa lot, pag naresolve na yun,, gagamitin ko na ang whole lot,,kaya meron maliit na structure sa left side, hanggang dun ang lot,,,kaya naka center ang render ko sa whole lot

@ sir archi_ram - thanks po sa pagdaan!