"Modern Houses on Slope"

mga sir popost po ako ulit sana magustuhan nyo, mga theoretical designs po ulit. any comments are very much welcome sir
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heres my NEo-Vernacular interpretation...
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and heres my Modern-Organic interpretation...
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salamat in advance sa pagchek mga sir

ayos to sir ah!!! ung puno sa 2nd image right prang nputol sa taas? bt ok ung mga work mo sir

As I can see here:

-mapping issues on wood shaders
-image is a bit saturated
-tweak on the entourage, specially the plants sa may garage, make them randomly scaled and rotated....

Good work...

benj.arki wrote:ayos to sir ah!!! ung puno sa 2nd image right prang nputol sa taas? bt ok ung mga work mo sir

noted sir benj, nataasan ko po ata, hehehe. sori sir hindi ko na mauupdate ung 2nd image, inabot po kc ng 32 hours ang rendering nun salamat po sa pagchek sir.

arkiedmund wrote:As I can see here:

-mapping issues on wood shaders
-image is a bit saturated
-tweak on the entourage, specially the plants sa may garage, make them randomly scaled and rotated....

Good work...

wow, salamat po sa pagdaan master , hindi ko pa po kc alam gamitn ang UVW mapping sa second image sir, kahiya. pero alam ko na po ngaun inaply ko sa first image. haaay, dami ko pa dpat matutunan.
chek ko po monitor ko, iba ang display nung laptop na un sir. salamat sa comments sir.

ayos sir., suggest ko lang., zoom out mo yung cam mo., para makita ang kabu.an yung bldg.. IMHO lang., keep it up...

tian-tian wrote:ayos sir., suggest ko lang., zoom out mo yung cam mo., para makita ang kabu.an yung bldg.. IMHO lang., keep it up...

noted sir, palakasin ko muna RAm ng laptop para makahandle ng medyo malakaing file salamat sa pagdaan sir ang dami kong nakikitang malulupit na mga post ngaun, kakahiya tuloy, hahaha.

KEEP ON practicing pa...ok ang scene mo bro..konting zoom-out nga lang sa camera...keep it up bro!!nice work!

I will let the others comment on the other aspects but here's one thing that most of the people here miss:

The car looks more expensive than the house we all need to focus on.

Staging. This is very important. If you aren't able to match the elements in your image - you will not be able to make your audience believe in what they see. The mind will automatically dispose off the illussion because one element does not sit well with the other. In the same way that if I have a palasyo somewhere in Forbes and all I have in the front parking is a traysikel or padyak.

If I would have money to buy an expensive porsche, I would make sure that I am rich enough to have a grand looking house and a garage to go with it.

So if I am going to stick to a house design like the one above - I would probably make my audince focus on to it by showing the good life in it's real sense. I would probably park a car that does not take so much attention than it actually deserves.

Not a traysikel. Not a Porsche. Just a car.

nice sir cguro sa composition lang po try nyo na ilayo konti ung camera.................

nice sir...mas like ko yung second image!

nice render bro,,, nasabi napo mga comments,,, keep it up bro!!!

Agree with sir vertex comments... to add give attention to materials you used... color, texture, mapping etc...
But it's a good effort

v_wrangler wrote:I will let the others comment on the other aspects but here's one thing that most of the people here miss:

The car looks more expensive than the house we all need to focus on.

Staging. This is very important. If you aren't able to match the elements in your image - you will not be able to make your audience believe in what they see. The mind will automatically dispose off the illussion because one element does not sit well with the other. In the same way that if I have a palasyo somewhere in Forbes and all I have in the front parking is a traysikel or padyak.

If I would have money to buy an expensive porsche, I would make sure that I am rich enough to have a grand looking house and a garage to go with it.

So if I am going to stick to a house design like the one above - I would probably make my audince focus on to it by showing the good life in it's real sense. I would probably park a car that does not take so much attention than it actually deserves.

Not a traysikel. Not a Porsche. Just a car.

AMEN to that, grand master Vertex...

Butz_Arki wrote:KEEP ON practicing pa...ok ang scene mo bro..konting zoom-out nga lang sa camera...keep it up bro!!nice work!

yes sir, praktis lng ng praktis para matututo, tsaka pacomment ng pacomment para malaman kung anu iimprove.. un ang gusto ko dito, marami constructive criticsms.

sir sinabi na nila lahat..keep it up po sir! post more

v_wrangler wrote:I will let the others comment on the other aspects but here's one thing that most of the people here miss:

The car looks more expensive than the house we all need to focus on.

Staging. This is very important. If you aren't able to match the elements in your image - you will not be able to make your audience believe in what they see. The mind will automatically dispose off the illussion because one element does not sit well with the other. In the same way that if I have a palasyo somewhere in Forbes and all I have in the front parking is a traysikel or padyak.

If I would have money to buy an expensive porsche, I would make sure that I am rich enough to have a grand looking house and a garage to go with it.

So if I am going to stick to a house design like the one above - I would probably make my audince focus on to it by showing the good life in it's real sense. I would probably park a car that does not take so much attention than it actually deserves.

Not a traysikel. Not a Porsche. Just a car.

salamat master wrangler sa pagdaan, isa po kau sa matagal ko ng inaantay tama muka ngang masmahal pa kotse, sa tingin ko din po may mali sa composition pero biased lng ako sa judgement ko sa gawa ko. ngaun alam ko na. salamat po sa comments, pero sana ipoint out nyo po sana lahat, nabitin po ako, parang marami pang kailangan iimprove sa style/gawa ko..

denz_arki2008 wrote:nice sir cguro sa composition lang po try nyo na ilayo konti ung camera.................

noted sir, ill be working on it the next practice, pagaralan kong maigi composition salamt sa pagchek sir ah.

ishae_clanx wrote:nice sir...mas like ko yung second image!

salamat sir, cge praktis praktis pa ko..

Noel_Diaz wrote:nice render bro,,, nasabi napo mga comments,,, keep it up bro!!!

salamat sir noel sa pagchek.. praktis mode ulit ako para matuto.