SALAS - UPDATED

My life today's work keeps improving each day with 3ds
c & c are all welcome..!!!

improving nga bro, nakikita kong nakuha mo na ang ibang elements. some points lang where you could work on.
1. ilaw coming from the outside has to be adjusted. hinaan lang ng konti. and also try to add lights sa loob. ies will work best.
2. materials on ur pillows and sofa can be better.
3. book texture will give more life to the books.
4. camera correction.
5. lava lamp could be improved
6. bumps on the flooring.

rest is getting better. laki na ng difference since you first started. keep it up bro. i know how much dedication you've devoted into learning max. and you're just doing great.

i agree completely with bokkins bro. kaunting kaunti sigasig pa bro. in the end you will see.

comment ko lang un lighting sa background...parang too much yata IMHO, di na kc makita un details ng windows...same with the materials and shaders na rin......God Bless!!!

bokkins wrote:improving nga bro, nakikita kong nakuha mo na ang ibang elements. some points lang where you could work on.
1. ilaw coming from the outside has to be adjusted. hinaan lang ng konti. and also try to add lights sa loob. ies will work best.
2. materials on ur pillows and sofa can be better.
3. book texture will give more life to the books.
4. camera correction.
5. lava lamp could be improved
6. bumps on the flooring.

rest is getting better. laki na ng difference since you first started. keep it up bro. i know how much dedication you've devoted into learning max. and you're just doing great.

all noted... back lit have been edited in PS at tinaas ko talaga ang light exposure coming in the room at naapektuhan ang pillows and sofa casting high specularity on surface, leather materials were applied to them, thats why... at first, books intention are all white but decided later to have them with four color variations as with no labels all... kung baga, indi sa kanya ang object of focus at indi agaw pansin... camera POV has been adjusted since my room scene is small to cover shot angle... kaya yun muna ginawa ko and decided to post it , at tweak for more thanks bro

nice render sir deckie, same sa comment nila sir. kunting hagod pa sir makukuha mo rin yan hehehe...

bos dickie...gling n ng gawa mo h..konting pihit n nga lng..gling mo n..thnaks nga pla for inspiring me..

i agree with them ser... post pa ser!!!

i think the glow effect outside doesnt jive with d brigthness inside, and ur lava lamp maybe u can illuminate for good effect,texture of ur books to make natural. IMHO lng sir, the rest ok.

Nice one sir Dick.Nasabi na po yung comment,konting work out na lng po to cguro sir and good to go na.Keep it up po and keep posting..

nice rendering sir dickie

ayos ka tlga sir... post pa ng mga praktis nyo

jay3design wrote:nice render sir deckie, same sa comment nila sir. kunting hagod pa sir makukuha mo rin yan hehehe...

noted

butzoy wrote:bos dickie...gling n ng gawa mo h..konting pihit n nga lng..gling mo n..thnaks nga pla for inspiring me..

ayos lang yun anytime you need advise and help... d2 lang

updated picture... anyway sana magustuhan na nio ito

dickie_ilagan wrote:updated picture... anyway sana magustuhan na nio ito

a lot better than e first one,some minor tweaks lang ,lightfixture mas maganda kung illuminated,spotlight over e artworks dont seem to hav shadow on,adding a little bit of detail on e books would b good,a bit of reflection on e black loose furniture add flavour and lastly e grout for e floor tiles would look better if its tighter

oo bro mas maganda lighting nya. so siguro work on texture na lang, makukuha mo rin yan.

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dickie_ilagan wrote:updated picture... anyway sana magustuhan na nio ito

a lot better than e first one,some minor tweaks lang ,lightfixture mas maganda kung illuminated,spotlight over e artworks dont seem to hav shadow on,adding a little bit of detail on e books would b good,a bit of reflection on e black loose furniture add flavour and lastly e grout for e floor tiles would look better if its tighter

actually, may mga issues ako on some areas like shadow, ies and more... anyway this is not the proper thread but i isasampa ko rin sa cgp court hehehehehehe... para ma brainstorm... thanks for dropping in

mas ok na yung updated image sir dickie...comments have been said by the masters...kaya, di na rin ako mag-co-comment.

ARCHITHEKTHURA wrote:Nice one sir Dick.Nasabi na po yung comment,konting work out na lng po to cguro sir and good to go na.Keep it up po and keep posting..

thanks for dorpping

jomzkie23 wrote:nice rendering sir dickie

salamat po

pakunat wrote:ayos ka tlga sir... post pa ng mga praktis nyo

pag nakabisado ko ito 3ds, 'tol.. malapit na..!!
pasahan mo rin ako ng cg kalakal nio....

lava lamp is perfect!
-camera correction
-books pa din. agaw eksena kasi.
-plants
-reflection sa black side table.
that's it. malaking improvement tong update mo bro. kee it up.

sir dickie laki ng pagbabago hehehe.... nice one sir, kunting work out pa sir okay na okay na yng practice mo gudluck sir sisiw lng yan sayo

bokkins wrote:lava lamp is perfect!
-camera correction
-books pa din. agaw eksena kasi.
-plants
-reflection sa black side table.
that's it. malaking improvement tong update mo bro. kee it up.

bro, meron ka bang suggestions sa camera correction you are pointing out... pwede naman iadjust ko...