3 Storey Residence day and night view

hello to all!

This is my first post. Praktis praktis lng po, c&c's are very much welcome and appreciated para po madagdagaan ang kaalaman sa rendering. Done in 3ds max desgin 2009 with Vray 1.5 SP2 demo. Thanks!

DAY VIEW


NIGHT VIEW

nice rendering and design sir. . off lng ung malaki wall sa tabi. .

You are there, the modeling is fine.

My first suggestions are stay focus on day scene first, night scene is hard to learn. Do the camera corrections and crop your image, leave the important subjects of your scene. On the left, it has an empty space and nothing in there to show. Camera should be on eye level, that's the best way for presentation.

I notice those vines are flying, minimize your foliage.

All the best and keep us updated.

Welcome to CGP.

sir aldrin, welcome po sa cgp. not bad at all, lapit narin sir at maaachieve mo na yung gusto mong scene, tambay ka lang dito, daming points to learn from our masters. thanks for posting.

WOW GALING AS A BEGINNER KEEP IT UP BRO

una sir .. Camera view.. normal human eye view, for better presentation
at sa mga background, maganda, namerge or blended sa view, night scne kc sir medyo exagerated yung BG.. nice first post and welcome sa cgp sir

Invincible wrote:nice rendering and design sir. . off lng ung malaki wall sa tabi. .

thank u po sir...i'll check that

kurdaps! wrote:You are there, the modeling is fine.

My first suggestions are stay focus on day scene first, night scene is hard to learn. Do the camera corrections and crop your image, leave the important subjects of your scene. On the left, it has an empty space and nothing in there to show. Camera should be on eye level, that's the best way for presentation.

I notice those vines are flying, minimize your foliage.

All the best and keep us updated.

Welcome to CGP.

thanks sir kurdaps! i'll note these...thanks for sharing your ideas!

Sir,
Welcome dito sa forum.. You have the skills na.. try to explore muna ang day scene.. Position camera into different angle.. Malaman mo rin kung anong best perspective niya.. keep it up always..

malapit kana bro...kunting ayos pa sa materials kasi un ang nagpapaganda ng render..

-grass masyadong matingkad ang kulay at ung ibang foliages

the rest..ayos na

sir sa akin contrast lang ibaba mo,, sa grass din palitan mo,,, mas maganda man's eye view,, good luck,,

Sir,
very nice render & lighting,,ganda design sir..first post palang yan ha..abangan ko p yung mga susunod mo n ipopost sir,tnx for sharing..keep it up!

dre astig kala. posmor

welcome to cgp ser.... imho ser. masyado ata malalim ung camera.... and ung colors antapang tingnan... specially the grass... berdeng berde... nice lighting ser. agree with ser kurdaps comments! post more ser

Not a very good choice of camera angle. and some aa issue on the stainless rails. lighting is good, rendering is ok. work on the composition. good luck!

pre, pano ba yan mga ilang render mo nalang master narn tawag ko sau! nice design....

nasabi na po nila lahat!...practice lang ng practice!

post more!

thank you po mga master! npkalaking tulong po mga comments nyo para mdevelop ang mga katulad kong baguhan dito..

pareng agent7.. d nman, pareho lng tau..ok n skin ang 'pre'

bro nice to see you here in cgp .. camera correction lang din sakin bro gusto ko ung first image m.one thing ive noticed saturated lang ung mga leaves ng mga halaman m bro mas mganda cguro kung dark m sya ng kunti. anyway bro nice render.. godbless