Two Storey Residential!!!

Mga masters pa comment po ulit. latest update ko sa Two Storey na ginagawa ko... tried to incorporate some of the tips not all. Unti-unti lng. Pa C&C po ulit.

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Thanks a lot for the comments and suggestions!!!

oks na render mo bro..

eto comments ko:
-ung sidewalk gutter mo naputol ata?
-add ka pa ng displacement sa grass carpet
-ung shurbs cguro palitan mo ung simple lang..
-bump sa wall ng structure
- paki taas unti ung camera pra kita lahat..

the rest panalo na..

Sir,
Imho add ko na rin since wip pa ito.. shaders for the glass.. keep it up..

i have same comment with master_grayback..post more

nasabi na nila mga comments ko.... nice lighting bro!!!

dagdag lang po ako, yung camera angle po, sana kita ang buong structure.. yun alng po.. Update nyo po...

I think you have very good lighting bro.Cguro try to improve more sa shaders..Try to visit material section natin bro daming mga varieties ng material and shaders..Dito sa image mo improve mo lng yung glass shaders and yung wall and some other texture pa and of course try to adjust the cam para kita nga lahat.Again good lighting na bro.Maganda yung direction.Thats all bro..Keep it up..Goodluck and Keep posting..

nice rendering sir!!! pansin ko lang ung mga entourage nyo sir, may sobrang laki!! hehheeh!! at ung naputol po na sidewalk, un lang naman po ung sakin!!! very nice output!!!! ung lighting po ,ayus po sakin!!!! post pa po kayo!!!

ung comment ko sir eh. pra sa akin prang payat ung mga column. bitin tignan.the rest nasabi na

master_grayback wrote:oks na render mo bro..

eto comments ko:
-ung sidewalk gutter mo naputol ata?
-add ka pa ng displacement sa grass carpet
-ung shurbs cguro palitan mo ung simple lang..
-bump sa wall ng structure
- paki taas unti ung camera pra kita lahat..

the rest panalo na..

aldrinv2 wrote:Sir,
Imho add ko na rin since wip pa ito.. shaders for the glass.. keep it up..

uwak wrote:i have same comment with master_grayback..post more

JAKE wrote:nasabi na nila mga comments ko.... nice lighting bro!!!

mcgoogles wrote:dagdag lang po ako, yung camera angle po, sana kita ang buong structure.. yun alng po.. Update nyo po...

ARCHITHEKTHURA wrote:I think you have very good lighting bro.Cguro try to improve more sa shaders..Try to visit material section natin bro daming mga varieties ng material and shaders..Dito sa image mo improve mo lng yung glass shaders and yung wall and some other texture pa and of course try to adjust the cam para kita nga lahat.Again good lighting na bro.Maganda yung direction.Thats all bro..Keep it up..Goodluck and Keep posting..

some of the shaders posted sa material section po kasi tanggal na.

pixelburn wrote:nice rendering sir!!! pansin ko lang ung mga entourage nyo sir, may sobrang laki!! hehheeh!! at ung naputol po na sidewalk, un lang naman po ung sakin!!! very nice output!!!! ung lighting po ,ayus po sakin!!!! post pa po kayo!!!

pakunat wrote:ung comment ko sir eh. pra sa akin prang payat ung mga column. bitin tignan.the rest nasabi na

Copy po. thanks for the tips i'll try to do all comments as possible.

sir nice scene here, nasabi napo lahat nang comments, add ko nalang po yung sa eaves natin (termination between the gutter and ceiling eaves), keep on posting.

sir parang nakakalulula tingnan ung column ang canopy s porch area mo.. nde b masyado mataas tapos like sir pakunat sir mapayat kasi ung column...proportion mo lang ser.... and para mas bagay ung una vegetation s first image kesa s second image.... nice lighting sir... galeng....

I prefer the first image's lighting; maputla na on the second image mas may body ang una... A little more work on the entourage is needed... Work in groups...

the contrast and level of the first image is better. i think, the proportion of the entry roof need to be addressed. (look at the column and roof relationship). landscaping needs some attention too. perhaps dont clutter much your plants rather group the plants together... hindi lang basta basta i paste...

makulay ang buhay hehe galing

mammoo_03 wrote:sir nice scene here, nasabi napo lahat nang comments, add ko nalang po yung sa eaves natin (termination between the gutter and ceiling eaves), keep on posting.

Noted po try ko po incorporate lahat ng comments to improve the presentation! Maraming salamat po!

master_grayback wrote:oks na render mo bro..

eto comments ko:
-ung sidewalk gutter mo naputol ata?
-add ka pa ng displacement sa grass carpet
-ung shurbs cguro palitan mo ung simple lang..
-bump sa wall ng structure
- paki taas unti ung camera pra kita lahat..

the rest panalo na..

gutter po b talaga un ohh curb??.. medyo nalito lng...

jefferson01 wrote:

master_grayback wrote:oks na render mo bro..

eto comments ko:
-ung sidewalk gutter mo naputol ata?
-add ka pa ng displacement sa grass carpet
-ung shurbs cguro palitan mo ung simple lang..
-bump sa wall ng structure
- paki taas unti ung camera pra kita lahat..

the rest panalo na..

gutter po b talaga un ohh curb??.. medyo nalito lng...

curb po yon. medyo hindi ko lng naayos on my first post pasensya na po...

nomeradona wrote:the contrast and level of the first image is better. i think, the proportion of the entry roof need to be addressed. (look at the column and roof relationship). landscaping needs some attention too. perhaps dont clutter much your plants rather group the plants together... hindi lang basta basta i paste...

Salamat po sa comments... and thanks for the attention!!!

ok ang lighting at malinis ang render, isa lang ang napuna ko naglagay ka yata ng map sa reflection ng glass mo kasi pareparehas anfg reflection kahit saang angulo ang view mo specially sa front iba ang reflection ng window mo sa baba. post more sir .

very nice render..galing,,,

ok ito bro! konting tweak nlang sa colors..ok n 'to

Very nice bro... maraming view.