Exterior Night Scene practice

first night render ko po,,priority ko dito is yung lighting set up kaya pag pasensyahan nyo na ang ibang factors,,anyway,,mas mahirap pala ang night render,,heheheh,,

suggestions and comments are welcome,,

not bad sir, na low res lang ata sir, i guess konting tweak nalang po sa photoshop eh, ayos na ayos na ito. thanks for sharing sir whey09. post pa po.

For first time render nicely done. keep it up!

Hmmmm... first time?

here are a few tips that defies whether its your first time or second or third...

Framing: you need to work on the framing. with a subject of proportion perhaps you may look into adjusting your frame ratio? What im look at, on my screen is a house right smack in the middle of the frame. Expand the frame and show more frame.

Lighting: for a night shot is not bad... if we consider this house in the middle of nowhere. However i'm not so sure why you wanted to present you subject as dark as it is, as more of an early night and yet no moon kind of scene. The roof is so detailed (from the silhouette) and yet try to hide it... why waste the effort? show it off, it doesn't do justice. Again the comment on the environment plays here. Perhaps a little dusk sun? that would even make it more dramatic isn't it?

Materials: erm... lets see the amended frame 1st...

add some trees sir and elements on the ground.nice one here sir..post more!

all comments are noted,,,thanks for the visit!!!,,

PATURO NAMAN PO NG STEP BY STEP KUNG PAPANO GUMAWA NG TAMANG EXTERIOR SCENE PARA VRAY FOR SKETCHUP!...

THANK!

very nice bro.......

maglagay ka lng cguro ng focus kung saan mas maliwanag ung ilaw.......

very nice sir,,, nasabi na mga comments,,, tao na lang buhay na buhay na ito,,, keep it up sir!!!

I_am_BARNEY! wrote:Hmmmm... first time?

here are a few tips that defies whether its your first time or second or third...

Framing: you need to work on the framing. with a subject of proportion perhaps you may look into adjusting your frame ratio? What im look at, on my screen is a house right smack in the middle of the frame. Expand the frame and show more frame.

Lighting: for a night shot is not bad... if we consider this house in the middle of nowhere. However i'm not so sure why you wanted to present you subject as dark as it is, as more of an early night and yet no moon kind of scene. The roof is so detailed (from the silhouette) and yet try to hide it... why waste the effort? show it off, it doesn't do justice. Again the comment on the environment plays here. Perhaps a little dusk sun? that would even make it more dramatic isn't it?

Materials: erm... lets see the amended frame 1st...

--- I LIKE you Barney... Oi Whey... Valid points raised... Address... Atin yang lulutung night scene i Arki_thine panayan me...

eduardo wrote:PATURO NAMAN PO NG STEP BY STEP KUNG PAPANO GUMAWA NG TAMANG EXTERIOR SCENE PARA VRAY FOR SKETCHUP!...

THANK!

Wrong section Sir Eduardo...

like it!...just put more on the background...

@ sir cloud - ganyan nga gusto kong comment para matuto,,first time din ba ni tin ng night scene?

@ sir noel - thanks sa pagbisita cabalen

@ sir uwak - thanks sir!,,day scene render kasi dati ito, pinalitan ko lang ang mood, kaya lighting setup nalang ginalaw ko,

eduardo wrote:PATURO NAMAN PO NG STEP BY STEP KUNG PAPANO GUMAWA NG TAMANG EXTERIOR SCENE PARA VRAY FOR SKETCHUP!...

THANK!

i dont think na merong tama or mali... may maganda at pangit lang. I don't think meron ding step by step kung papano magkaroon ng taste. pag me alam ka, post mo kaagad ha?

mga idol galing niyo naman pwede po paturo sa vray

AYos Dito.

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Hinalukay ang gawa mo bro.