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CGP masters and pips!!! critiques and comments nman po ulit...
Change mood; practice ko lang po night scene, hirap ako dyan eh...

Thank's to all...




CGP masters and pips!!! critiques and comments nman po ulit...
thank's po sa c&c nyo sa previous posts ko.

ayos to tol. masyadong makinang lang yung floor.

nomeradona wrote:ayos to tol. masyadong makinang lang yung floor.

duda nga din ko dyan...
salamat sa pag puna, sa uulitin...

nice lighting..... mejo grainy or noisy lang ung scene sir.

work on grainy noises keep updating ....

sir chris kilala ko ung circles na yan ah?hehehe
comment ko lang
1.ung floor mataas na masyado ung reflection, nag mukhang marble,

2.sa taas ng shelf ng tv marami abubot dun namn sa baba ng tv wla nakalagay, maganda cguro kung meron din abubot

3. ung african vase out of proportion ata?
4. u need to work more on the carpet, ano ba yan sir vray fur?
5. medyo noisy nga sir...try mo babaan ung noise thereshold.

the rest oks na...galing na natin!! sir ah hehehe praktis ng pratis.

SunDance wrote:nice lighting..... mejo grainy or noisy lang ung scene sir.

thanks sa feedback... madalian na sir mag uuwian na kse... .oo5 setting sa noise.
salamat ulit

master_grayback wrote:sir chris kilala ko ung circles na yan ah?hehehe
comment ko lang
1.ung floor mataas na masyado ung reflection, nag mukhang marble,

2.sa taas ng shelf ng tv marami abubot dun namn sa baba ng tv wla nakalagay, maganda cguro kung meron din abubot

3. ung african vase out of proportion ata?
4. u need to work more on the carpet, ano ba yan sir vray fur?
5. medyo noisy nga sir...try mo babaan ung noise thereshold.

the rest oks na...galing na natin!! sir ah hehehe praktis ng pratis.

bossing! eto sa'yo...

1. napansin ko nga din... newbie eh!!!
2. meron sana yan sir, nkalimutan e unhide.
3. not sure about this one... sa tingin ko drums yun eh.
4. vray fur nga... panget eh kaya nilayo ko yung cam... (tip nman dyan, seryoso)
5. sa susunod na lang...

maraming salamat idol

ok to bosing..mtaas lng reflection..mas ok cgro kung mas mababa ng knti pr mas realistic..sk medyo noisy sya...un lng. works more on carpet,,,keep posting .

nice lighting same comment sa kanila keep it up bro

sir if i were you i will not put the lady's slippers there. and instead of using artifacts in the shelf i would suggest that you put books and a beautiful painting behind the sofa. put also a vcd or dvd player on the console...imho lang sir. in that way eventhough its grainy it would look very smart and fantastic.. and try to put 62,62,62 on your floor reflection and .85 on the glossiness. i hope that will help... hoping for the best sir.... post more...

pakunat wrote:sir if i were you i will not put the lady's slippers there. and instead of using artifacts in the shelf i would suggest that you put books and a beautiful painting behind the sofa. put also a vcd or dvd player on the console...imho lang sir. in that way eventhough its grainy it would look very smart and fantastic.. and try to put 62,62,62 on your floor reflection and .85 on the glossiness. i hope that will help... hoping for the best sir.... post more...

salamat ulit sa pagpuna... try ko e render sa setting mo.

enkyu

change mood masters n pips, pa c&c nman...
mejo hirap sa night scene eh...

enkyu

all comments had been said.

Hi bro! Basically all I could say is malapit ka na sa much better presentation. In terms of rendition, you just needed some settings to crank up, most of which are SUBDIVISIONS both sa materials and lighting. Design wise, the intent of capturing the right overall scene is also "getting there". It just needed some more treatment as well as the right furnitures.