Part 06 SU VRay renderings

by Karenica Sat Mar 28, 2009 4:27 pm

Proposed Low-Cost Condominium
1-Bedroom Unit
Part 06 SU VRay renderings 1brlowcostcondo

2-Bedroom Unit
Part 06 SU VRay renderings 2bedroom

3-Bedroom Unit
Part 06 SU VRay renderings 3bedroom

by alwin Sat Mar 28, 2009 6:14 pm

ganda nito mam> or sir? ahhh basta nice image!!

by nomeradona Sat Mar 28, 2009 7:04 pm

ok karenica ang dami ah. parang nagbabad ka talaga sa SU vray

by Jameskee Sat Mar 28, 2009 7:28 pm

hmmm. camera correction,,and noise issue.. thats it.. tambay lang madam...
you will learn alot here.. keep on posting 2thumbsup

by aldrinv2 Sun Mar 29, 2009 1:37 am

Ma'am,
Imho na little tweak pa you've got it na. Also a little burn last image. Keep on posting.

by darwinzzkie Sun Mar 29, 2009 1:42 am

few tweaks pa po maam.
second image too noisy.
sa first image sometimes that effect doesn't fit the image.
its good pero ibagay na lang po natin.
IMHO lang po.

so far doing good.

by arki_vhin Sun Mar 29, 2009 1:45 am

ayos nman mga modeling and render...
sa first image po prang na smoge sa ps ang effect...nasira....
ung iba nsabi na...
IMHO lang yun

by bokkins Sun Mar 29, 2009 2:12 am

1. hindi maganda ang effects mo sa 1st image. unnecessary na actually. try to present your subject in a plane and simple way. you're actually losing details in there.

2. signature is too big. liitan mo lang. agaw pansin na hindi na napapansin ang render mo.

3. apply camera correction para maging straight ang mga verticals mo.

so far yun lang nakikita ko para maimprove. meron kang style dito sa mga renders mo, I think kailangan mo lang iimprove yun. good luck! Smile

by vamp_lestat Sun Mar 29, 2009 10:10 am

maganda ung rendering on the 2nd and 3rd image. but then again as what master bokkins told.. ang laki ng signature mo po maam... carpet.. try to work on it. masyadong mataas lang ang angle. aus though sa composition.