bungalow

hi poh sa lahat ng members ng cgp

papost poh first render ko poh sa vray try lang poh

cad 08+3dmax9+ps2 pa comment poh mga master para poh sa improvement

tnx godbless

Here are some pointers:

1. Try to use Vray Sun...
2. Add textures on the objects, not just only default colors...
3. Check your bump on Materials..on the road that is too much.

Please if you can post your settings to check.....

By the way, the lighting is fine...but you can improve it as suggested try to use Vray Sun.

Welcome to CGP darrelljay..

tnx sir try ko poh ipost

godspeed

kurdaps! wrote:Here are some pointers:

1. Try to use Vray Sun...
2. Add textures on the objects, not just only default colors...
3. Check your bump on Materials..on the road that is too much.

Please if you can post your settings to check.....

By the way, the lighting is fine...but you can improve it as suggested try to use Vray Sun.

Welcome to CGP darrelljay..

sir vray sun na poh ang gamit ko
ito poh ung parameters nya

turibidity...3.0
ozone.......0.35
intensity...0.05
size multiplier..0.1
shadow subdiv...10
shadow bias....0.2
photo emit radius...5000.0

tnx poh ulit

nice start bro..yung mapping lang ng mats..and yung iba is too flat for me..try to add some displacement or bump maybe..lalo na dun sa brick mat mo..and yung BG mo is parang di bagay...check mo yung sa left side..sa may palm tree ba yan...parang nagoverlap yung environment...sana makatulong..

yu rak bro!!!!

ditto on ser kurdaps

nice start..follow master kurdaps & your render will be ok...

darrelljay wrote:

kurdaps! wrote:Here are some pointers:

1. Try to use Vray Sun...
2. Add textures on the objects, not just only default colors...
3. Check your bump on Materials..on the road that is too much.

Please if you can post your settings to check.....

By the way, the lighting is fine...but you can improve it as suggested try to use Vray Sun.

Welcome to CGP darrelljay..

sir vray sun na poh ang gamit ko
ito poh ung parameters nya

turibidity...3.0
ozone.......0.35
intensity...0.05
size multiplier..0.1
shadow subdiv...10
shadow bias....0.2
photo emit radius...5000.0

tnx poh ulit

OK.

Try this one..

turibidity...3.0
ozone.......0.35
intensity...0.02
size multiplier..0.03
shadow subdiv...25
shadow bias....0
photo emit radius...5000.0

heloo po sir! tama c sir kurdaps..follow his comments and suggestions niya.. it helps u a lot!
ang sa akin naman sir:

1. ang mapping ng background mo..pls check po.
2. ang shadow ng palm tree sa foreground, medyo nka-annoying..konting tweaks sa area shadows..
3. ang post sa corner ng property line, iba ung diffuse compare sa iba..

un lg po sir.. keep up the good work

nice rendering bro, welcome here, post mo yung settings mo para maanalyze nila ng maayos, advice ko lang give more effort on your material settings, at saka naka on ba environment light mo?, i noticed the foreground shadow is way too dark, keep posting

gamer_11 wrote:nice start bro..yung mapping lang ng mats..and yung iba is too flat for me..try to add some displacement or bump maybe..lalo na dun sa brick mat mo..and yung BG mo is parang di bagay...check mo yung sa left side..sa may palm tree ba yan...parang nagoverlap yung environment...sana makatulong..

yu rak bro!!!!

tnx po sir di ko na napansin cnxa na poh salamat poh sa comment

ERICK wrote:ditto on ser kurdaps

tnk u poh sir erick

Butz_Arki wrote:nice start..follow master kurdaps & your render will be ok...

tnk u poh din sir ....

godspeed

taga_probins wrote:heloo po sir! tama c sir kurdaps..follow his comments and suggestions niya.. it helps u a lot!
ang sa akin naman sir:

1. ang mapping ng background mo..pls check po.
2. ang shadow ng palm tree sa foreground, medyo nka-annoying..konting tweaks sa area shadows..
3. ang post sa corner ng property line, iba ung diffuse compare sa iba..

un lg po sir.. keep up the good work

tnx u poh try ko poh nxt post ko marami poh salamat sa comment ninyo
godspeed

namby_pamby wrote:nice rendering bro, welcome here, post mo yung settings mo para maanalyze nila ng maayos, advice ko lang give more effort on your material settings, at saka naka on ba environment light mo?, i noticed the foreground shadow is way too dark, keep posting

mraming salamat poh sir di poh sya naka on try ko poh

tnx ulit

kurdaps! wrote:

darrelljay wrote:

kurdaps! wrote:Here are some pointers:

1. Try to use Vray Sun...
2. Add textures on the objects, not just only default colors...
3. Check your bump on Materials..on the road that is too much.

Please if you can post your settings to check.....

By the way, the lighting is fine...but you can improve it as suggested try to use Vray Sun.

Welcome to CGP darrelljay..

sir vray sun na poh ang gamit ko
ito poh ung parameters nya

turibidity...3.0
ozone.......0.35
intensity...0.05
size multiplier..0.1
shadow subdiv...10
shadow bias....0.2
photo emit radius...5000.0

tnx poh ulit

OK.

Try this one..

turibidity...3.0
ozone.......0.35
intensity...0.02
size multiplier..0.03
shadow subdiv...25
shadow bias....0
photo emit radius...5000.0

tnx poh ulit sir

noted lahat ng sinabi ninyo

will wait for the update sir... madami pointers si sir kurdaps...

reggie0711 wrote:will wait for the update sir... madami pointers si sir kurdaps...

tnx u poh sir.....update ko nlang poh

godspeed

wag mong kalimutan yung G.I.

kahit default lang muna pwede na basta may G.I.
parang alang G.I. yung render mo e.

sa indirect illumination.check mo to for starter http://www.republicofcode.com/tutorials/3ds/vray_global_illumination/

goodluck

artedesenyo wrote:wag mong kalimutan yung G.I.

kahit default lang muna pwede na basta may G.I.
parang alang G.I. yung render mo e.

sa indirect illumination.check mo to for starter http://www.republicofcode.com/tutorials/3ds/vray_global_illumination/

goodluck

tnx sir check ko nlng poh 2 update ko poh ito para maimprove
tnx ulit
godspeed

first post.. hmmm.... some tweakings to be made.. first off is master kurdaps crits... sundan mo lang po un sir.

to add on it... here's mine... ur shadows are too dark. try to be conservative on the scale of your entourage, ie the trees. glass mat, try to visit our free materials sa site. meron tau magandang glass mat dun by master architekthura. and camera shot.... f wala ka namn papakita sa adjacent property, wag mo na isali sa camera mo... also too much clouds on your background. un na po muna.

Sir
Try ninyo lang to update itong post from c&c ng mga masters. Tapos pa-post ule. But render wise very clean. Keep on posting.

vamp_lestat wrote:first post.. hmmm.... some tweakings to be made.. first off is master kurdaps crits... sundan mo lang po un sir.

to add on it... here's mine... ur shadows are too dark. try to be conservative on the scale of your entourage, ie the trees. glass mat, try to visit our free materials sa site. meron tau magandang glass mat dun by master architekthura. and camera shot.... f wala ka namn papakita sa adjacent property, wag mo na isali sa camera mo... also too much clouds on your background. un na po muna.

sa RESOURCES poh ba un material site sir??
ang nkita ko po dun ung ke master bokkins ung ng post
tnk u poh sir sa comment

try ko poh update to sir godspeed

aldrinv2 wrote:Sir
Try ninyo lang to update itong post from c&c ng mga masters. Tapos pa-post ule. But render wise very clean. Keep on posting.

tnx poh sir post ko poh ung update nito para poh maimprove

godbless

nice design, but rendering need more improvements
good luck!!!
kay mo yan!!!
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