my first render in max
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my first render in max
by QuinsY Wed Mar 25, 2009 7:46 am
hi po, gud evening sir/ma'm... newbie lang po ako dito. .i heard a lot of things about cgpinoy. . na recruit po ako ng mga friends & classmates ko, and as i visited the site it was really amazing, fascinating, simply the best!!! 
this is my first render output. . hingi po sana ako ng tips & suggestions mga masters.. i know, i have a lot of things to learn and to explore. .c&c's are most welcome and appreciated to improve my work. .
cad08+max2008
this is my first render output. . hingi po sana ako ng tips & suggestions mga masters.. i know, i have a lot of things to learn and to explore. .c&c's are most welcome and appreciated to improve my work. .
cad08+max2008
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Re: my first render in max
by KONGRESMAN Wed Mar 25, 2009 7:55 am
nice render mam, pretty good for a start, post more!!!!!!!
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Re: my first render in max
by gamer_11 Wed Mar 25, 2009 7:59 am
welcome to cgp mam..marami ka matututunan dito...enewei nice post... post more!!!!
yun rak!!!!!!!!!!!
post more!!!!yun rak!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: my first render in max
by nheil29 Wed Mar 25, 2009 8:04 am
wwhhhhhaaaaaaoooooowwww.........
ok na2, nice one for a newbie.....
ok na2, nice one for a newbie.....
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Re: my first render in max
by pakunat Wed Mar 25, 2009 8:04 am
ok naman dre pra sa nag uumpisa. cguro change the camera angle. more depth sa lights and shadow. maganda kasi pag nightscene may mga ibang part na madilim. ung mga grains na yan taasan mo ung subdivs ng vray light mo mga 32. ung grout din malaki liitan mo lang sir. try mo rin palambutin pa ung bed. sa laminate na gamit mo.for me strong ung kulay masyadong reddish. ung drop ceileng dun sa banda roon may cove lights din ba un? mas ok pag plaster na rin un. masyadong maraming nagyayari na. un lang dre.POSMOR
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Re: my first render in max
by enjoy8OGART Wed Mar 25, 2009 8:10 am
ganda naman nito ung texture lng mam ng curtain parang weird lng tignan para sakin ska mas ok cguro kng may mga glass ung pichure framess sa taas ng bed para may mga reflection hehe kakadagdag din sa pagkaastig un
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Re: my first render in max
by QuinsY Wed Mar 25, 2009 8:11 am
pakunat wrote:ok naman dre pra sa nag uumpisa. cguro change the camera angle. more depth sa lights and shadow. maganda kasi pag nightscene may mga ibang part na madilim. ung mga grains na yan taasan mo ung subdivs ng vray light mo mga 32. ung grout din malaki liitan mo lang sir. try mo rin palambutin pa ung bed. sa laminate na gamit mo.for me strong ung kulay masyadong reddish. ung drop ceileng dun sa banda roon may cove lights din ba un? mas ok pag plaster na rin un. masyadong maraming nagyayari na. un lang dre.POSMOR
thanks po sir sa comments & tips. .sa sunod po n render ko i'll improve my work. .
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Re: my first render in max
by QuinsY Wed Mar 25, 2009 8:13 am
deng ke rui wrote:wowoy!!!!!!!!!!!
i think i know you. .ehehe. tanx po
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Re: my first render in max
by QuinsY Wed Mar 25, 2009 8:17 am
enjoy8OGART wrote:ganda naman nito ung texture lng mam ng curtain parang weird lng tignan para sakin ska mas ok cguro kng may mga glass ung pichure framess sa taas ng bed para may mga reflection hehe kakadagdag din sa pagkaastig un
thank you po sir sa comment, much appreciated. .
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Re: my first render in max
by QuinsY Wed Mar 25, 2009 8:20 am
nheil29 wrote:wwhhhhhaaaaaaoooooowwww.........
ok na2, nice one for a newbie.....
thank you!
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Re: my first render in max
by kyofuu Wed Mar 25, 2009 8:52 am
nice render maam for a newbie, imho lang po move forward lang konti yung chair sa baba ng mirror para kasing kinain ng wall? or sa camera lang siguro un? tapos maganda kung may ilaw din yung cove sa may ceiling sa taas ng door yung iba nasabi na nila. pero good start po ito, practice pa
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Re: my first render in max
by christine Wed Mar 25, 2009 9:01 am
wow this is really nice sis. really very good knowin this is your 1st output pa. also love your avatar 
tambay ka lang dito to learn more. and yeah.. CGP is simply the best 
tambay ka lang dito to learn more. and yeah.. CGP is simply the best 
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Re: my first render in max
by steff_09 Wed Mar 25, 2009 9:57 am
nice start mam..practice lng po..
maurag tlga mga tga bicol
maurag tlga mga tga bicol
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Re: my first render in max
by owenski Wed Mar 25, 2009 10:15 am
nice start ma'am...
critz ko....
1. i was wondering kung para saan ung "window" sa may seats.. glass po ba yan na kita ung nsa loob? if oo, mas maganda sya pra sakin kung kahit konte kita ung sa kabilang side..
2. some noise issues sa walls sa may ilaw sa headboard...
3. ung ilaw sa may door sa kaliwa... san ung source? hinde ba kita sa scene? medyo off lng tignan kasi...
4. tiles...IMHO, it would look much better kung mas maliliit ung grout.. msyado malaki for me...
5. picture frames... mas maganda ma'am kung may glass cover ung pictures...
6. bed & bed sheets... add cguro ng konting texture, bumps maybe, para mas magmukhang cloth...
no more...
post more..
critz ko....
1. i was wondering kung para saan ung "window" sa may seats.. glass po ba yan na kita ung nsa loob? if oo, mas maganda sya pra sakin kung kahit konte kita ung sa kabilang side..
2. some noise issues sa walls sa may ilaw sa headboard...
3. ung ilaw sa may door sa kaliwa... san ung source? hinde ba kita sa scene? medyo off lng tignan kasi...
4. tiles...IMHO, it would look much better kung mas maliliit ung grout.. msyado malaki for me...
5. picture frames... mas maganda ma'am kung may glass cover ung pictures...
6. bed & bed sheets... add cguro ng konting texture, bumps maybe, para mas magmukhang cloth...
no more...
post more..
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Re: my first render in max
by owenski Wed Mar 25, 2009 10:16 am
deng ke rui wrote:wowoy!!!!!!!!!!!
yah, pamilyar din ako sa name na to....
B? ikaw b yan??
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Re: my first render in max
by reggie0711 Wed Mar 25, 2009 10:51 am
nice render sir/mam.... color bleed lng pra skn.. and maybe add some more lighting... un lng... ayos for a first render.. kung nkta nio lng ang una kong render sa max.. hehehe!!!
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Re: my first render in max
by darwinzzkie Wed Mar 25, 2009 10:56 am
not bad great start maam!
just the lamp shade put illuminating material and fix the ies.
just the lamp shade put illuminating material and fix the ies.
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Re: my first render in max
by vamp_lestat Wed Mar 25, 2009 11:06 am
great for your first post maam ba o sir? anyways, kuha mo na ung render setting. siguro on lighting nlng. adjust mo lang ung mga intensity and drama nung lighting mo. also suggestion is to add a lighting fixture sa lalagyan mo ng ilaw ( ung makikita lang). like for example, me pina - ilaw ka dun sa may entry. from the looks of it, ung ilaw galing sa ceiling. pero wala nmang fixture. a lil details like that. and ung lampshade mo din. meron tau tuts nyan dito sa cgp on how to light a lamp from sir arkiedmund. try to check it out.
OT. pretty avatar.
anyways, kuha mo na ung render setting. siguro on lighting nlng. adjust mo lang ung mga intensity and drama nung lighting mo. also suggestion is to add a lighting fixture sa lalagyan mo ng ilaw ( ung makikita lang). like for example, me pina - ilaw ka dun sa may entry. from the looks of it, ung ilaw galing sa ceiling. pero wala nmang fixture. a lil details like that. and ung lampshade mo din. meron tau tuts nyan dito sa cgp on how to light a lamp from sir arkiedmund. try to check it out. OT. pretty avatar.
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Re: my first render in max
by arkimead_21 Sat Mar 28, 2009 5:09 am
waw!!!!
ng post n!!!!!!!!
gratss po sa 1st post nyu ma...
keep posting for more improvement tinuturuan nila tau........
ng post n!!!!!!!!
gratss po sa 1st post nyu ma...
keep posting for more improvement tinuturuan nila tau........
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Re: my first render in max
by aldrinv2 Mon Mar 30, 2009 3:57 am
Ma'am,
welcome po dito sa forum.. Almost everything nasabi ng mga masters.. imho na lang kung mirror yong above the chair. Add reflection lang.. If niche naman lagyan mo ng object.. Yong lang and keep on posting.
welcome po dito sa forum.. Almost everything nasabi ng mga masters.. imho na lang kung mirror yong above the chair. Add reflection lang.. If niche naman lagyan mo ng object.. Yong lang and keep on posting.
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Re: my first render in max
by ru33er_duCK!e Tue Mar 31, 2009 11:45 pm
Good start po ito maam . . . napansin ko lang po may light po kayo sa may head board that looks like a flourescent light bulb and alam naman po natin na ang 8 watts na flourescent can already illuminate the whole room unless may diffuser sya. sa case n ito cguro half portion ng bed dapat maliwanag na maliwanag n which i think ay ayaw mong mangyari . . . imho lang po why not change it to a different kind of light na softer ang illumination. Yun lang po nice rendering po. Sana i could see more of this.
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Re: my first render in max
by Butz_Arki Wed Apr 01, 2009 12:50 am
welcome sa cgp...ok nmn ang render mo..just follow pakunat suggestion.. keep posting nlng!!
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