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Post by cadens21 Tue Mar 24, 2009 10:18 pm

Gud day mga CGP. Very bc kya ngyn uli naklibot. Pa c & c po ng matuto pa. [img]commercial residential Final_10[/img]
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Post by cadens21 Tue Mar 24, 2009 10:19 pm

Vray sun at vray cam. PS Max design 2009 vray sp2 demo
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Post by alwin Tue Mar 24, 2009 10:28 pm

nice rendering ended sir! imho lang : the grass lumagpas sa garage, no sidewalk, maybe the storefront glass needs to tweak meron naman glass settings kay master bokkins sa tut tingnan mo, yun lang sir at hintayin lang narin yung mga masters!
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Post by Butz_Arki Tue Mar 24, 2009 10:29 pm

wow!!sumisipa kna kabayan ha...ayuz tong exterior mo..cguro mas ok kung soft ang mga shadow mo..improve mo lng ng konti ang entourage mo..ska glass need to improve.keep posting!!
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Post by whey09 Tue Mar 24, 2009 10:56 pm

ayos ah,,,,cguro taasan mo yung subdivs ng vray sun mo para maging shadows,,(tama po ba mga masters?),,,nice start pre!
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Post by bokkins Tue Mar 24, 2009 11:02 pm

laki ng improvement sa dati mong gawa bro. ito na ba ang produkto ng bago mong pc? lakas ah.

comment ko lang is hinaan mo pa ng konti ang sikat ng araw. tapos buoin mo na ang kuha mo sa kotse. keep it up bro. 2thumbsup
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Post by gilbs Tue Mar 24, 2009 11:34 pm

nice design and render sir, tama si sir bokkins, masyado malakas and sikat ng araw.
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Post by patz_28 Tue Mar 24, 2009 11:47 pm

nice rendering sir! imho sir para sa akin dark po ata bg mo di po bumagay sa sikat ng araw..maganda na po sa akin to aprub!post pa
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Post by novice Wed Mar 25, 2009 1:08 am

cc ko lang, lower mo intensity ng sun ng konti, while add some details sa wall texture natin bossing. pati sky bg, masok siguro pag mdyo light kasi mlkas yung light natin galing sa sun. imho lang naman.

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Post by corpsegrinder Wed Mar 25, 2009 3:37 am

sa akin lng, cguro ok na ito kung merong mga glass materials and metal.. ung may part ng bldg na glossy.imho lng. nice render p rin.
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Post by vamp_lestat Wed Mar 25, 2009 11:38 am

just softn the shadows nga at ang lakas ng intensity ng araw mo sir. and if there is a way to lighten ur shadow a bit, try mo din un sir. di ko alam san un i toggle kasi. Very Happy
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Post by Noel_Diaz Wed Mar 25, 2009 1:05 pm

for me sir d render is already der,,, we just need to soften ur shadow just increase shadow subdivsn sa sun parameter,,, d sun intesity very high exposure ung level just bring down a little bit para relax tingnan... about d design is very nice....on txture konting pihit na lng kuha nyo na sir,,, keep it up sir!!! 2thumbsup
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Post by darwinzzkie Wed Mar 25, 2009 1:16 pm

ganda ng banat mo sa design.
glass lang pre kungting tweak gayahin mo yung glass
ni sir bokkins sa tuts.
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Post by cadens21 Wed Mar 25, 2009 10:22 pm

Slamat po sa maga comment,

@ sir bokkins eto n yung produkto ng pc. Update ko pa ito hehehe.
Lhat ito sa tutorials lahat d2 sa cgp. Tnx sir bokkins.
Sa glass di ko alam bakit nagtiles ang reflection ng sky. style ni sir jeff ang glass.

Inadjust ko sa PS ang brightness, madilim sa pagprint.

Slamat sa dalaw
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Post by 3dact Wed Mar 25, 2009 10:29 pm

ang galing naman ng design nio kababayan, parang modern minimalist (not sure).. nasabi na po nila adjustments.. keep on posting thumbsup

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Post by uwak Wed Mar 25, 2009 10:40 pm

i like the architectural design.... thumbsup

maybe you just need to soften your setting....medyo bright lang ng konte sakin..

konteng tweaks nalang to sir..... thumbsup

good job!
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Post by arkiedmund Wed Mar 25, 2009 10:55 pm

ok to, malinis....

- Hinaan ang intensity ng sikat ng araw.
- Glass needs tweaking.
- One of the human entourage looks like it is floating.
- Add sidewalk between the grass and the road.
- General illumination of image is a bit harsh...palambutin mo bro...ang sakit sa mata...to remedy it, refer to comment numebr 1.

good job! thumbsup
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Post by 3dpjumong2007 Wed Mar 25, 2009 11:29 pm

pssst ! galing na ahh !gamit ka na lng cut out trees sa likuran mo bro , tama nga sila sa lights matapang pa sya masyado tsaka plain pa mga maps lagyan mo bump maps para mas lutang pa... pero galing na talaga nito..extreme na ba ?
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Post by oDi120522 Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:55 am

ayus ser... nasabi na nila comments.... post more!!! thumbsup
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Post by pakunat Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:56 am

sir kaunting desaturate. pero pede na eto dre. pera na ito. the rest is ok POSMOR
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Post by reggie0711 Thu Mar 26, 2009 4:06 am

oo sir tma.. lighting nlng ang adjust.. pede n rn skn toh... 2thumbsup
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Post by cadens21 Sat Mar 28, 2009 10:35 am

Tnx sir reggie , sir odi, sir pakunat. tnx sa comment. hehehehe

@ 3dpjumong , hindi po. nangangapa po ako hehehe.

@ whey. pre salmt sa plugins. at libraries hehe
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