proposed one storey office building in iloilo
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proposed one storey office building in iloilo
gud day po mga masters,share ko lang po tong fast render ko about my project.i would like to seek comments again from you...thanks po. [img][/img] [img][/img]
debbie ardagon- CGP Newbie
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Location : miagao,iloilo
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Re: proposed one storey office building in iloilo
ang ganda sir ah ano workflow mo sir?
jervinayad03- CGP Newbie
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Re: proposed one storey office building in iloilo
sobrang busy pards ng scene, try mo i-lessen, kasi nawawala yung focus sa structure mo. mas nafofocus sa tao, ibon at mga kotse. yung sky din medyo macontrast against sa structure mo. no need to light up since maaraw naman, just my opinion pre.
kensweb- CGP Apprentice
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Re: proposed one storey office building in iloilo
noted pards...by the way wf=sketchupPro8+PScs3
debbie ardagon- CGP Newbie
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Re: proposed one storey office building in iloilo
ask ko lng ano render engine nito?
rlaguerta- CGP Newbie
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debbie ardagon- CGP Newbie
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Location : miagao,iloilo
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Re: proposed one storey office building in iloilo
dont's
- too much leaves
- people keep it simple...may secu pa
- sky, check for reference...di naman ganyan ang sa reality...blue na blue and dapat pa gradient yan.....pa-puti sa malayo
- marami masyadong color and texture sa design mo...mukhang chop suey
- birds not a good idea
- cars not a good idea.
- lights(on) not a good idea
focus on your house not to the surrounding elements....
yung vertical v -column mo sa harap, kung hindi sya structurally able, aesthetically pangit sya..ang dami daming nakikita....
- too much leaves
- people keep it simple...may secu pa
- sky, check for reference...di naman ganyan ang sa reality...blue na blue and dapat pa gradient yan.....pa-puti sa malayo
- marami masyadong color and texture sa design mo...mukhang chop suey
- birds not a good idea
- cars not a good idea.
- lights(on) not a good idea
focus on your house not to the surrounding elements....
yung vertical v -column mo sa harap, kung hindi sya structurally able, aesthetically pangit sya..ang dami daming nakikita....
Norman- CGP Expert
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Re: proposed one storey office building in iloilo
thank you po master norman...noted lahat ng comments mo..improve ko pa sa mga next project presentations ko.
debbie ardagon- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 19
Age : 28
Location : miagao,iloilo
Registration date : 28/11/2013
Re: proposed one storey office building in iloilo
Nice concept Bro! to much palm tree in the front no need for that why? because its blocking your design remove those Damm birds Why? Its an Old School perception just make a simple Asphalt on the front Good Job! Mate
jg1124- CGP Newbie
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