1st Post po, gawa gawa lng. Nid ko po CC :)

New to vray po... Nid ng cc thanks

ayun nagpost na...
IMHO sir ha..
1st image muna,..... some part are over burn...the color also..adjust ur subdivs materials pra hndi grainy itaas mo ng konti,,,...pero ingat dahil matagal magrender yyan...
2nd image....nkalutang yta ung table mo sir...floor texure kuha k ng iba at adjust mo relfections mo...over bump ung kumot sir...
3rd image...wood tilings sir halata rin...backround mo mali ang horizon line at ung light sa labas dapat taas mo unti...d ko alam bakit may ila ung ilalim ng pillow mo sir...
but i like ur ies....
SU ka din b? post more to improve

work more sir sa texturing sir. ung lightings para sa akin pede na. proper texturing and camera angles. un lang dre. POSMOR

Sir Mc nice first post comments ko lang po:

1) sa first image po may over burn po kyo sa flooring, kaya agng effect po ay lumutang yung chair and lumubog yung wood flooring.
2) sa secong image po parang napakalaki ng mga seats, this is with reference to the door.
3) sa third image sir imho lang po parang kulang ang intensity ng light na pumapasok sa window.

Pero nice post po. post pa po kayo.

Thanks mga master, I'll Update po.

oi,,ngpost na din,taga davao na pod,,welcom bai.
comment po ako boss ah.

1st img - colorbleeding po,,very noisy,cam corection,pic frame looks nakalutang at hnd nakakabit sa wall,ang its too high,and the mapping din sa frame,,kc ung nkkta ko ay kung anoung picture ay yun din ang naapply sa frame..kindly chek,
blotches andoverburn areas,bg not so good,,hanap kang iba,ad pinlyt sa ceiling corners.

2nd img - camera is too high,,floor rflction looks water,,cam corection,,noisy parts,,hanapka ng ibang bed model,,marami naman dyan..table is floating..
ceil is too reflective..

3rd img - yepz,mapping dun sa wood,bg hnd ng fit, plschek horizon line,(kasaban dyud ka tura ana),hehe,,

lighting ay nandun na bossing,,,konting tweaks nlng..
kip posting bos,,lbas mo na lahat,,ang dami sa fs mo..hehe

nice start mcgoogles
comments haved been said already...
kya...
good luck syo!

not so bad sir para mga nagsstart pa lang sa software na ito. sundin mo sir yun mga suggestion nila, take it from the masters. continue to learn lang po sir, parehas tayu still need to learn a lot. its a never ending learning.

arki_vhin wrote:ayun nagpost na...
IMHO sir ha..
1st image muna,..... some part are over burn...the color also..adjust ur subdivs materials pra hndi grainy itaas mo ng konti,,,...pero ingat dahil matagal magrender yyan...
2nd image....nkalutang yta ung table mo sir...floor texure kuha k ng iba at adjust mo relfections mo...over bump ung kumot sir...
3rd image...wood tilings sir halata rin...backround mo mali ang horizon line at ung light sa labas dapat taas mo unti...d ko alam bakit may ila ung ilalim ng pillow mo sir...
but i like ur ies....
SU ka din b? post more to improve

1st iMage po SU yan, walang overidemtl kaya lakas ng color bleed
2nd and 3rd image po max na.
I'll try my best in my next render.. I uupdate ko lang po....

pakunat wrote:work more sir sa texturing sir. ung lightings para sa akin pede na. proper texturing and camera angles. un lang dre. POSMOR

Thanks po sa CC..

I-uupdate ko lang ang images...

gilbs wrote:not so bad sir para mga nagsstart pa lang sa software na ito. sundin mo sir yun mga suggestion nila, take it from the masters. continue to learn lang po sir, parehas tayu still need to learn a lot. its a never ending learning.

Opo... Kaya nga ang nice ng CGP community

demonpaper wrote:nice start mcgoogles
comments haved been said already...
kya...
good luck syo!

Yeah, I'll try my best in my next render...

Good Luck din sayo God Bless.

jarul wrote:oi,,ngpost na din,taga davao na pod,,welcom bai.
comment po ako boss ah.

1st img - colorbleeding po,,very noisy,cam corection,pic frame looks nakalutang at hnd nakakabit sa wall,ang its too high,and the mapping din sa frame,,kc ung nkkta ko ay kung anoung picture ay yun din ang naapply sa frame..kindly chek,
blotches andoverburn areas,bg not so good,,hanap kang iba,ad pinlyt sa ceiling corners.

2nd img - camera is too high,,floor rflction looks water,,cam corection,,noisy parts,,hanapka ng ibang bed model,,marami naman dyan..table is floating..
ceil is too reflective..

3rd img - yepz,mapping dun sa wood,bg hnd ng fit, plschek horizon line,(kasaban dyud ka tura ana),hehe,,

lighting ay nandun na bossing,,,konting tweaks nlng..
kip posting bos,,lbas mo na lahat,,ang dami sa fs mo..hehe

salamat master, I update ko lang po ang render..

Laking tulong nyo po... .Woo mabuhay mga taga-dabaw. haha

good one for a starter like you,comments are addresed already,keep on posting bro

sir nasabi na lahat...scale at control sa reflection lang sir!lahat naman nguumpisa dyan...same lang tayo ng sitwasyon...heheheehe

nice start!! i suggest na concentrate for now in texturing!!..camera correction also must need attention..lighting is there na so konting practice nlng!! keep posting!!