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Post by eisa Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:43 am

practice lang po... constructive comments and critiques nman dyan =)


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Post by dickie_ilagan Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:02 am

Too clean and contrast it with some greenie plants randomly... Very Happy Smile
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Post by ERICK Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:25 pm

it seems u have an IES casting on the wall but no pinlight above? must be careful with this... the carpet is too thick for me IMHO... and you should increase your displacement a bit on this... anyways nice environment lighting you got here cheers inuman na
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Post by Butz_Arki Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:38 pm

i agree with erik..but nice render
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Post by cloud20 Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:51 pm

excellent, sir/mam eisa... i would have to disagree with sir dickie; "greenie plants" would only mar the otherwise exquisite cleanliness of the overall theme, IMHO...
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Post by novice Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:08 pm

your render is good ma'm/sir. smooth and minimalist design. great! keep it up! thumbsup

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Post by raven Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:49 pm

ELO SIR!!NICE OUTPUT SIR!! GNDA PO NG AMBIENCE MLMIG PO S MATA!!POST MORE SIR.. thumbsup
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Post by jay3design Tue Oct 14, 2008 9:32 pm

nice render malinis keep it up post pa thumbsup
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Post by nomeradona Tue Oct 14, 2008 10:34 pm

beautiful and simple. i love the neutral tone, but it need a splash of color (kaunti lang siguro)
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Post by nyop Tue Oct 14, 2008 11:35 pm

simple and naturalistic men Very Happy
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Post by cubi_o: Tue Oct 14, 2008 11:44 pm

hi sir...nice lighting...cgro add mo pa ng konting mga abobots sa scene.

i like the design...simple.

kip em coming!!! welcome to CGP ma'am/sir!!!!!!! Crazy_Lion
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Post by owenski Wed Oct 15, 2008 12:18 am

nice set, clean.... 2thumbsup
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Post by arki_vhin Wed Oct 15, 2008 1:01 am

wow...asrtig design ha...ok n yan...monochromatic style ang dating
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Post by kurdaps! Wed Oct 15, 2008 1:36 am

Simple yet effective...love that carpet. What a Face
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Post by zildjian Wed Oct 15, 2008 2:22 am

you need to rearrange the furnitures,they're too far away from each other..and considering its orientation and distance from the television..but the rendering is good to go..
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Post by Guest Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:16 am

very minimalist... pero nde po ba masyadong plain yata ung drop ceiling nyo? un lang po comment ko... enjoy ur stay here in cgp. Very Happy

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Post by Guest Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:21 am

Great renders Eisa..SImple pero rock..cguro add na lng po ng curtains or blinds sa mga window and sliding doors..Yun lng po.Keep posting po and Keep it up !!! thumbsup

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Post by eisa Thu Oct 16, 2008 4:19 am

thank you all guys sa mga comments and critiques nyo...

sa uulitin hippie

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Post by jds Thu Oct 16, 2008 6:49 am

thicknesslng ng carpet sir pero astig ganda po design
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Post by master_grayback Sat Oct 18, 2008 7:24 am

sir chris ayos na ung render mo..cguro gawin mo medyo yellowish ung mga ilaw mo pra may kunting contrast... thumbsup plus ung add mo ung comment ng iba..panalo na yan!! hehehe post pa!
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