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arkiedmund wrote:Aba bago to, international na...

Here are the points to work on:

1. Mapping issues on your round columns, and it seems to be segmented.
2. One of the cornice molding on 2nd image seems to be short, better extend it to the wall.
3. Lighting can be tweaked some more, to add more punch to your scene. If this was done using vray sun and vray camera, then this still has a lot of room for improvement. Those tools are cool, but are a bit steep on the learning curve. I would suggest sticking to standard lighting and camera systems, until you get a handle on the overall feel of your image before moving on to those tools.
4. Kerb or sidewalk across your building is missing.
5. Work on you r entourage (trees, people, cars). I guess there should be ample vegetation on this one, and populate it with people, you can do that on your image editing software, instead of rendering in together with your scene.

Malayo na ang narating mo general jumong, konting hagod pa, I am sure, mas mag-i-improve ka pa.

alwin wrote:master jumong kumana kana naman! nice sir! minor comments lang sir is to add more abubots to look more drama in your scene maganda siguro sir yung sa EArchEx na mga grass i save as mat lib mo then i apply mo dyan cgurado ganda lalo yan!

vamp_lestat wrote:sir... i guess.. sir arkiedmund have a very good cnc's on you...as for me just to add on it.. just try to add displacement on the grass that are near to your camera.. u will really see the difference and appreciate it... keep em postin...

uwak wrote:comments have been said, additional lang po....put a sidewalk as termination between the road and the grass...yun lamang po.

nice lighting.

keep it up!

darwinzzkie wrote:pwede! nasabi na po nla lahat.
masasabi ko lang hindi ka lang pampamilya pang international pa.

cubi_o: wrote:sir jums... comments been said sir..
talagang iba na ang kalidad nyo sir...


i like ur presentation and render sir.

kip em coming!

denz_arki2008 wrote:ok to sir jumong........
ok na ung contrast ng gawa nyo........

more power.....

kietsmark wrote:hmmmnnn... heneral jumong astig talaga kayo sa gilid hehehe
here are my comments though...

- napansin ko sa mga post mo na exterior pare-pareho pa rin ang outputs... lalo na ang displacement problems at saka mapping. naiisip ko dahil cguro sa laging nagmamadaling matapos para sa iba pang gilid. can you post kahit isang work lang na hindi rush? pero kung sobrang busy talaga oks lang namn bro. para kasing balewala ung mga comment bro kung hindi rin naman i-aapply kasi nga lagi namang rush at wala ng time na pagandahin. honestly speaking, ang dating ng output is tinapos lang talaga i hope you get what i am trying to say bro.

- sobrang nakakatuwa na makita ang improvement mo bro pero parang tumigil yata at a certain level. i know you can do better than this... imho lang, cguro try to find a way na hindi mukhang rush ang output kahit madalian.

hope makatulong bro...

silvercrown wrote:hirap talagang i-populate kung masyadong malawak ang foreground master jums! suggestion is crop some areas of your foreground, then add plant to frame it... again ang galing ng powers mo, US na to bro!