aldrinv2: Lighting & Texture Competition (Private Modern Office)

Sir/ Ma'am,
Heto naman ang aking version. Private Office. c&c are welcome. God bless
a) Image 1

b)Image 2

c)Image 3

d)Image 4

okay to sir ha...like your lighting.

masyado lang atang modern ang chairs mo sir, mas okay ata kung medyo classic din...opinion lang yunh sir.

Thanks bro,
Correct ka dyan. medyo bulky if classic chair gamit ko limited space niya.

very nice sir also like the ambiance..eto na mga master tago na hehe

i agree with sir uwak sir maybe chair lang but still rock...good luck sir

ganda ng ligthing nito!

ung lamp lang na green dude medyo off lang....


good luck!

nice ambient..pero im not sure about the chair..imho.
pero preferences lng namn natin..

pero overall sir aldrin..looking good.

goodluck!

sir aldrin galing mo pala hehe.
gudluck

nice aldrin. a few points lang

1. the images look like they were stretched vertically. this is perhaps most of your proportions are all tall.
2. the lighting is deceiving. i would expect the light to come from the windows but it seems to be coming from the far end of the room. also you might want to consider turning on the chandelier - at the moment it is too dim and evenly lit.
3. i know this is not a modelling exercise but the scene is not unique because there are identifiable preset evermotion models in it.

good luck pre!

(ot: ill be in manila nxt week.. will u still be there?)

wow ser oks na oks ah galing din entry mo gudluck po ser GODBLESS

torvicz wrote:ganda ng ligthing nito!
ung lamp lang na green dude medyo off lang....
good luck!

Sir,
Correct ka dyan. WIP pa rin ito. Sige update ko lamp ko.
Thanks..

ortzak wrote:very nice sir also like the ambiance..eto na mga master tago na hehe

Sir,
Thanks sa pagbisita rito sa forum.. Well WIP pa rin ako rito. gathering pa ako c&c sa inyong lahat. And i will update it to re post my final render. thanks

cubi_o: wrote:nice ambient..pero im not sure about the chair..imho.
pero preferences lng namn natin..
pero overall sir aldrin..looking good.
goodluck!

Oo nga sir,
WIP pa rin ako rito with regards to the chair.. But i take your advice on it and try to update it and repost the final.. Thanks sir.

mushroom wrote:nice aldrin. a few points lang

1. the images look like they were stretched vertically. this is perhaps most of your proportions are all tall.
2. the lighting is deceiving. i would expect the light to come from the windows but it seems to be coming from the far end of the room. also you might want to consider turning on the chandelier - at the moment it is too dim and evenly lit.
3. i know this is not a modelling exercise but the scene is not unique because there are identifiable preset evermotion models in it.
good luck pre!
(ot: ill be in manila nxt week.. will u still be there?)

Sir parekoy..
Thanks sa mga pointers gathering ako right now ng mga c&c. I would appreciate this c&c mo and will try to consider this point. I will try to update all of the comments and repost the final one.

About sa pag-uwi mo dyan sa pinas. Sayang i just came back from a very short holiday this july pa uwi ko. Regards na lang..

meiahmaya wrote:wow ser oks na oks ah galing din entry mo gudluck po ser GODBLESS

sir,
Thanksa sa pagbisita rito.. Medyo marami rami na rin akong nakuhang c&c. WIP pa rin ito and as soon ma-uupdate ko uli ito for final post. Thanks.

darwinzzkie wrote:sir aldrin galing mo pala hehe.
gudluck

Sir,
Salamat sa pagbisita .. WIP pa rin marami pa rin akong babaguhin rito. Thanks..

hataw na ba ito sir.... nagandahan ako sa design and lighting.

i3dness wrote:hataw na ba ito sir.... nagandahan ako sa design and lighting.

Sir,
Thanks for dropping by. Gathering pa ako ng c&c to improve pa itong work ko. As of now WIP pa rin ako rito. Thanks sir.