7th storey commercial bldg.

mga master pa share po.... latest rendered design... comments and critics are free for more improvements.... TIA

WF : 3dsmax 2012 + vray 2.40.03 + photoshop + lr

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Nice. Try to model the Aluminum Composite Panel, sobrang laki not unless concrete with groove yan. Remove the "moulding" at the staircase para magmukhang modern at all. Add more background ( buildings ) nagmukhang lonely planet kasi siya for a commercial use paar realistic ang dating bro. Again, try to rotate some tress para hinde magmukhang pare-pareho ang tubo and more light sa leaves material. I dont see any relationship doon sa sunshade or sunscreen sa main building, IMO sana inalis mo na lang, parang inilagay lang kasi sa building. Gawin mong mas busy pa ang scene para mas lively tingnan at mas convincing bro.

level up na pareng jeff ah.. good job!

ganda ng lighting bro!

bench wrote:Nice. Try to model the Aluminum Composite Panel, sobrang laki not unless concrete with groove yan. Remove the "moulding" at the staircase para magmukhang modern at all. Add more background ( buildings ) nagmukhang lonely planet kasi siya for a commercial use paar realistic ang dating bro. Again, try to rotate some tress para hinde magmukhang pare-pareho ang tubo and more light sa leaves material. I dont see any relationship doon sa sunshade or sunscreen sa main building, IMO sana inalis mo na lang, parang inilagay lang kasi sa building. Gawin mong mas busy pa ang scene para mas lively tingnan at mas convincing bro.

noted po sir bench......salamat sa pagsilip at pagdaan....... god bless

Rogan wrote:level up na pareng jeff ah.. good job!

salamat pareng waray......

reimhedz wrote:ganda ng lighting bro!

salamat sa pagsilip at pagdaan sir reimhedz......