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ronski_g
reggie0711
vamp_lestat
aldrinv2
celes
jenaro
Butz_Arki
nyop
alwin
meiahmaya
3d_aDdiK
warrakz
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Library
Kmsta po sa inyong lhat i just wnt to share tung kktapos klng na proj. actually part sya ng isang villa ung iba on nsa designing stage plng sana mgustuhan nyo...of course cnc`s r always welcome po...thanks
warrakz- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 139
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 18/01/2009
Re: Library
nice set of renders sir...
here are my comments :
1.design - maybe it would look nicer and more richer if you add marquetry and perhaps put some golds on you color pallete. it's too monocromatic for me. maybe changing the color of the fabric will also help.
2.rendering - it's clean..but for me, your chandeliers is a bit off (its a dayscene..but it seams that you lit it up with vraylight) correct me if im wrong. if you could also change the background..i see some old barnhouse behind the windows.
hope it helps... post more
here are my comments :
1.design - maybe it would look nicer and more richer if you add marquetry and perhaps put some golds on you color pallete. it's too monocromatic for me. maybe changing the color of the fabric will also help.
2.rendering - it's clean..but for me, your chandeliers is a bit off (its a dayscene..but it seams that you lit it up with vraylight) correct me if im wrong. if you could also change the background..i see some old barnhouse behind the windows.
hope it helps... post more
3d_aDdiK- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 40
Age : 42
Location : abu dhabi, uae
Registration date : 03/03/2009
Re: Library
3d_aDdiK wrote:nice set of renders sir...
here are my comments :
1.design - maybe it would look nicer and more richer if you add marquetry and perhaps put some golds on you color pallete. it's too monocromatic for me. maybe changing the color of the fabric will also help.
2.rendering - it's clean..but for me, your chandeliers is a bit off (its a dayscene..but it seams that you lit it up with vraylight) correct me if im wrong. if you could also change the background..i see some old barnhouse behind the windows.
hope it helps... post more
Thanks...noted po lahat un sir... ung chandelier nga sir hndi kn naaplyan ng mat my night scene kc yan sir
warrakz- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 139
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 18/01/2009
Re: Library
lupet mo nman ser post more
meiahmaya- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 767
Location : SINGAPORE
Registration date : 25/10/2008
Re: Library
sir nice image! nice set of volume light! maganda siguro kung may liwanag na galing sa ilaw para may drama!
alwin- CGP Expert
- Number of posts : 2176
Age : 51
Location : basurero sa cebu
Registration date : 22/01/2009
Re: Library
good rendering, ceiling is too flat!!!
sana add kana design sa ceiling mo, parang na iwan cya. para magmatch un wall and ceiling
sana add kana design sa ceiling mo, parang na iwan cya. para magmatch un wall and ceiling
Re: Library
ok nmn rendering mo bro!! agree ako sa comment ni pareng nyop..prng n out of place ung ceiling eh.pero design is good nmn...good job bro!!
madsnyop wrote:good rendering, ceiling is too flat!!!
sana add kana design sa ceiling mo, parang na iwan cya. para magmatch un wall and ceiling
Re: Library
ayos sir!panalo gawa nyo!sana ginawa nyong high ceiling para mas ok ung clearance ng chandelier,kunting retouch sa ceiling...sayang ung ganda ng chandelleir...ung chess board walang grid...minor lang naman un sir...pero ang galing ng gawa nyo...i like the chess board...it reminds ng panahon ko sa paglalaro ng chess... pahabol lang sir...san uupo ung kalaban?hehehheehhehe
jenaro- Peter Pran
- Number of posts : 3132
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 22/01/2009
Re: Library
nice modelling. but there seems to be no lighting at all. everything looks flat. you need to add a few more light effects.
celes- Pogi
- Number of posts : 2958
Age : 52
Location : Singapore
Registration date : 25/11/2008
Re: Library
Sir,
imho lang just to break color scheme mo. You should add plants dito. Yong lang and hope makakita kami ng update nito. Keep on posting.
imho lang just to break color scheme mo. You should add plants dito. Yong lang and hope makakita kami ng update nito. Keep on posting.
Re: Library
sir for me, just the background.. doesnt really match the mood of whats inside... imho lang ha... parang the interior is to sharp and the background is a bit "maputla"... maybe some photo editing of the background would do, before mo pasok sa rendering or nevertheless change mo nlng din sir. kasi nga me kubo.. other comments have been said. on rendering naman.. magaling sir... keep it up
vamp_lestat- CGP Guru
- Number of posts : 1930
Age : 41
Location : Davao City, Philippines
Registration date : 27/11/2008
Re: Library
wow very classy... galing dn ng render...
ung bg lng saturated cya.. d bumabgy sa interior.. anu ung color black sa lbs? sa 1st image...
ung bg lng saturated cya.. d bumabgy sa interior.. anu ung color black sa lbs? sa 1st image...
reggie0711- CGP Guru
- Number of posts : 1680
Age : 42
Location : palaboy laboy sa singapore
Registration date : 31/10/2008
Re: Library
Hi there! Yes I agree with the comments on the ceiling. IMHO, the chandelier is not suitable for the room. Make the doors' finish the same na din with the walls and built in furnitures. Just make the background burnt to justify your room's illumination. Lastly, on the 3rd image, just place another set of your built in book racks display on the corner wall, as you can see, that'll give meaning to the overhead display rack above the door instead of leaving it hanging like that. That corner I think is overlooked anyways as far as space planning is concerned. Good modeling though, your almost there....
ronski_g- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 359
Age : 52
Location : Philippines - Hong Kong
Registration date : 25/09/2008
Re: Library
meiahmaya wrote:lupet mo nman ser post more
pmnsan mnsan tsuma tsamba ng knti sir.. thanks...
warrakz- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 139
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 18/01/2009
Re: Library
alwin wrote:sir nice image! nice set of volume light! maganda siguro kung may liwanag na galing sa ilaw para may drama!
salamat sir bale ung volume light daya lng sa PS un sir la time para tweak eh...try k cguro sa night scene nito thanks bro...
warrakz- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 139
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 18/01/2009
Re: Library
madsnyop wrote:good rendering, ceiling is too flat!!!
sana add kana design sa ceiling mo, parang na iwan cya. para magmatch un wall and ceiling
ah bale ung ceiling sir dko lm kng existing na kc ung main unit and cabinets pati nrn wall cladding lng smin pero tama kyo sir dapat meron nga...salamat sir
warrakz- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 139
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 18/01/2009
Re: Library
[quote="Butz_Arki"]ok nmn rendering mo bro!! agree ako sa comment ni pareng nyop..prng n out of place ung ceiling eh.pero design is good nmn...good job bro!!
Kaya nga sir eh noted po lhat to thanks sir
Kaya nga sir eh noted po lhat to thanks sir
warrakz- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 139
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 18/01/2009
Re: Library
jenaro wrote:ayos sir!panalo gawa nyo!sana ginawa nyong high ceiling para mas ok ung clearance ng chandelier,kunting retouch sa ceiling...sayang ung ganda ng chandelleir...ung chess board walang grid...minor lang naman un sir...pero ang galing ng gawa nyo...i like the chess board...it reminds ng panahon ko sa paglalaro ng chess... pahabol lang sir...san uupo ung kalaban?hehehheehhehe
Bro kmsta?...ung sa board sir pwede tansyahan nlng nwla ung grid ...oo nga pala mhhrapan ung klaban wla upuan he he..
salamt sa daan bro...
warrakz- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 139
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 18/01/2009
Re: Library
mushroom wrote:nice modelling. but there seems to be no lighting at all. everything looks flat. you need to add a few more light effects.
medyo ngkulang nga yta ng lightings sir bale sa night scene ko napakita sir try ko post ung shot night scene nya sir...thanks for dropping by sir...
warrakz- CGP Newbie
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Location : sharjah
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Re: Library
Good job on this one bro. mga masusugest ko lang are:
1. Brighten out background.
2. Use vray material override on you wooden materials, ang lakas kasi manghawa sa ceiling.
3. Lagyan mo ng globe para perfect. hehe.
Good luck on this one bro, Looking good overall!
1. Brighten out background.
2. Use vray material override on you wooden materials, ang lakas kasi manghawa sa ceiling.
3. Lagyan mo ng globe para perfect. hehe.
Good luck on this one bro, Looking good overall!
Re: Library
aldrinv2 wrote:Sir,
imho lang just to break color scheme mo. You should add plants dito. Yong lang and hope makakita kami ng update nito. Keep on posting.
Sir kmsta po dyan sa abu dhabi? sna june dyan nrin ako he he...noted to sir post ko ung update nito sir pati night scene...thanks sir
warrakz- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 139
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 18/01/2009
Re: Library
vamp_lestat wrote:sir for me, just the background.. doesnt really match the mood of whats inside... imho lang ha... parang the interior is to sharp and the background is a bit "maputla"... maybe some photo editing of the background would do, before mo pasok sa rendering or nevertheless change mo nlng din sir. kasi nga me kubo.. other comments have been said. on rendering naman.. magaling sir... keep it up
Kmsta po sir?... note po lhat yan.. slamt sa pagbisita sir
warrakz- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 139
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 18/01/2009
Re: Library
reggie0711 wrote:wow very classy... galing dn ng render...
ung bg lng saturated cya.. d bumabgy sa interior.. anu ung color black sa lbs? sa 1st image...
Kmsta Idol galing ng mga past posting m sir ...dklng makita ung iba...noted sir...bale parang balcon sya hndi nlng natpos sir...thanks for dropping by sir
warrakz- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 139
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 18/01/2009
Re: Library
ronski_g wrote:Hi there! Yes I agree with the comments on the ceiling. IMHO, the chandelier is not suitable for the room. Make the doors' finish the same na din with the walls and built in furnitures. Just make the background burnt to justify your room's illumination. Lastly, on the 3rd image, just place another set of your built in book racks display on the corner wall, as you can see, that'll give meaning to the overhead display rack above the door instead of leaving it hanging like that. That corner I think is overlooked anyways as far as space planning is concerned. Good modeling though, your almost there....
Thank you sir noted to lahat... thanks for dropping by sir
warrakz- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 139
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 18/01/2009
Re: Library
bokkins wrote:Good job on this one bro. mga masusugest ko lang are:
1. Brighten out background.
2. Use vray material override on you wooden materials, ang lakas kasi manghawa sa ceiling.
3. Lagyan mo ng globe para perfect. hehe.
Good luck on this one bro, Looking good overall!
Noted po eto sir bokkins slamat nkadaan kayo... ung globe nagunaw n yta sir he he next time po sir thanks...
warrakz- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 139
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 18/01/2009
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