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Post by warrakz Tue Mar 03, 2009 11:19 am

Kmsta po sa inyong lhat i just wnt to share tung kktapos klng na proj. actually part sya ng isang villa ung iba on nsa designing stage plng sana mgustuhan nyo...of course cnc`s r always welcome po...thanks hippie



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Post by 3d_aDdiK Tue Mar 03, 2009 11:39 am

nice set of renders sir...

here are my comments :

1.design - maybe it would look nicer and more richer if you add marquetry and perhaps put some golds on you color pallete. it's too monocromatic for me. maybe changing the color of the fabric will also help.

2.rendering - it's clean..but for me, your chandeliers is a bit off (its a dayscene..but it seams that you lit it up with vraylight) correct me if im wrong. if you could also change the background..i see some old barnhouse behind the windows.

hope it helps... post more hippie
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Post by warrakz Tue Mar 03, 2009 11:51 am

3d_aDdiK wrote:nice set of renders sir...

here are my comments :

1.design - maybe it would look nicer and more richer if you add marquetry and perhaps put some golds on you color pallete. it's too monocromatic for me. maybe changing the color of the fabric will also help.

2.rendering - it's clean..but for me, your chandeliers is a bit off (its a dayscene..but it seams that you lit it up with vraylight) correct me if im wrong. if you could also change the background..i see some old barnhouse behind the windows.

hope it helps... post more hippie


Thanks...noted po lahat un sir... ung chandelier nga sir hndi kn naaplyan ng mat Very Happy my night scene kc yan sir Very Happy
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Post by meiahmaya Tue Mar 03, 2009 12:04 pm

lupet mo nman ser post more

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Post by alwin Tue Mar 03, 2009 2:23 pm

sir nice image! nice set of volume light! maganda siguro kung may liwanag na galing sa ilaw para may drama!
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Post by nyop Tue Mar 03, 2009 4:34 pm

good rendering, ceiling is too flat!!!
sana add kana design sa ceiling mo, parang na iwan cya. para magmatch un wall and ceiling
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Post by Butz_Arki Tue Mar 03, 2009 11:04 pm

ok nmn rendering mo bro!! agree ako sa comment ni pareng nyop..prng n out of place ung ceiling eh.pero design is good nmn...good job bro!!


madsnyop wrote:good rendering, ceiling is too flat!!!
sana add kana design sa ceiling mo, parang na iwan cya. para magmatch un wall and ceiling
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Post by jenaro Tue Mar 03, 2009 11:10 pm

ayos sir!panalo gawa nyo!sana ginawa nyong high ceiling para mas ok ung clearance ng chandelier,kunting retouch sa ceiling...sayang ung ganda ng chandelleir...ung chess board walang grid...minor lang naman un sir...pero ang galing ng gawa nyo...i like the chess board...it reminds ng panahon ko sa paglalaro ng chess... 2thumbsup pahabol lang sir...san uupo ung kalaban?hehehheehhehe
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Post by celes Tue Mar 03, 2009 11:14 pm

nice modelling. but there seems to be no lighting at all. everything looks flat. you need to add a few more light effects.
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Post by aldrinv2 Wed Mar 04, 2009 6:11 am

Sir,
imho lang just to break color scheme mo. You should add plants dito. Yong lang and hope makakita kami ng update nito. Keep on posting.
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Post by vamp_lestat Wed Mar 04, 2009 7:44 am

sir for me, just the background.. doesnt really match the mood of whats inside... imho lang ha... parang the interior is to sharp and the background is a bit "maputla"... maybe some photo editing of the background would do, before mo pasok sa rendering or nevertheless change mo nlng din sir. kasi nga me kubo.. other comments have been said. on rendering naman.. magaling sir... keep it up
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Post by reggie0711 Wed Mar 04, 2009 8:35 am

wow very classy... galing dn ng render...
ung bg lng saturated cya.. d bumabgy sa interior.. anu ung color black sa lbs? sa 1st image...
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Post by ronski_g Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:22 am

Hi there! Yes I agree with the comments on the ceiling. IMHO, the chandelier is not suitable for the room. Make the doors' finish the same na din with the walls and built in furnitures. Just make the background burnt to justify your room's illumination. Lastly, on the 3rd image, just place another set of your built in book racks display on the corner wall, as you can see, that'll give meaning to the overhead display rack above the door instead of leaving it hanging like that. That corner I think is overlooked anyways as far as space planning is concerned. Good modeling though, your almost there....
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Post by warrakz Wed Mar 04, 2009 10:43 am

meiahmaya wrote:lupet mo nman ser post more

pmnsan mnsan tsuma tsamba ng knti sir.. hippie thanks...
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Post by warrakz Wed Mar 04, 2009 10:45 am

alwin wrote:sir nice image! nice set of volume light! maganda siguro kung may liwanag na galing sa ilaw para may drama!

salamat sir bale ung volume light daya lng sa PS un sir la time para tweak eh...try k cguro sa night scene nito thanks bro... hippie
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Post by warrakz Wed Mar 04, 2009 10:47 am

madsnyop wrote:good rendering, ceiling is too flat!!!
sana add kana design sa ceiling mo, parang na iwan cya. para magmatch un wall and ceiling

ah bale ung ceiling sir dko lm kng existing na kc ung main unit and cabinets pati nrn wall cladding lng smin pero tama kyo sir Very Happy dapat meron nga...salamat sir hippie
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Post by warrakz Wed Mar 04, 2009 10:50 am

[quote="Butz_Arki"]ok nmn rendering mo bro!! agree ako sa comment ni pareng nyop..prng n out of place ung ceiling eh.pero design is good nmn...good job bro!!


Kaya nga sir eh noted po lhat to thanks sir hippie
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Post by warrakz Wed Mar 04, 2009 10:52 am

jenaro wrote:ayos sir!panalo gawa nyo!sana ginawa nyong high ceiling para mas ok ung clearance ng chandelier,kunting retouch sa ceiling...sayang ung ganda ng chandelleir...ung chess board walang grid...minor lang naman un sir...pero ang galing ng gawa nyo...i like the chess board...it reminds ng panahon ko sa paglalaro ng chess... 2thumbsup pahabol lang sir...san uupo ung kalaban?hehehheehhehe

Bro kmsta?...ung sa board sir pwede tansyahan nlng Very Happy nwla ung grid Very Happy ...oo nga pala mhhrapan ung klaban wla upuan he he..
salamt sa daan bro... hippie
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Post by warrakz Wed Mar 04, 2009 10:56 am

mushroom wrote:nice modelling. but there seems to be no lighting at all. everything looks flat. you need to add a few more light effects.

medyo ngkulang nga yta ng lightings sir bale sa night scene ko napakita sir try ko post ung shot night scene nya sir...thanks for dropping by sir... hippie
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Post by bokkins Wed Mar 04, 2009 10:56 am

Good job on this one bro. mga masusugest ko lang are:
1. Brighten out background.
2. Use vray material override on you wooden materials, ang lakas kasi manghawa sa ceiling.
3. Lagyan mo ng globe para perfect. hehe.
Good luck on this one bro, Looking good overall!
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Post by warrakz Wed Mar 04, 2009 10:59 am

aldrinv2 wrote:Sir,
imho lang just to break color scheme mo. You should add plants dito. Yong lang and hope makakita kami ng update nito. Keep on posting.

Sir kmsta po dyan sa abu dhabi? sna june dyan nrin ako he he...noted to sir post ko ung update nito sir pati night scene...thanks sir hippie
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Post by warrakz Wed Mar 04, 2009 11:00 am

vamp_lestat wrote:sir for me, just the background.. doesnt really match the mood of whats inside... imho lang ha... parang the interior is to sharp and the background is a bit "maputla"... maybe some photo editing of the background would do, before mo pasok sa rendering or nevertheless change mo nlng din sir. kasi nga me kubo.. other comments have been said. on rendering naman.. magaling sir... keep it up

Kmsta po sir?... Very Happy note po lhat yan.. slamt sa pagbisita sir hippie
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Post by warrakz Wed Mar 04, 2009 11:03 am

reggie0711 wrote:wow very classy... galing dn ng render...
ung bg lng saturated cya.. d bumabgy sa interior.. anu ung color black sa lbs? sa 1st image...


Kmsta Idol galing ng mga past posting m sir thumbsup ...dklng makita ung iba...noted sir...bale parang balcon sya hndi nlng natpos sir...thanks for dropping by sir hippie
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Post by warrakz Wed Mar 04, 2009 11:06 am

ronski_g wrote:Hi there! Yes I agree with the comments on the ceiling. IMHO, the chandelier is not suitable for the room. Make the doors' finish the same na din with the walls and built in furnitures. Just make the background burnt to justify your room's illumination. Lastly, on the 3rd image, just place another set of your built in book racks display on the corner wall, as you can see, that'll give meaning to the overhead display rack above the door instead of leaving it hanging like that. That corner I think is overlooked anyways as far as space planning is concerned. Good modeling though, your almost there....


Thank you sir noted to lahat... Very Happy thanks for dropping by sir hippie
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Post by warrakz Wed Mar 04, 2009 11:08 am

bokkins wrote:Good job on this one bro. mga masusugest ko lang are:
1. Brighten out background.
2. Use vray material override on you wooden materials, ang lakas kasi manghawa sa ceiling.
3. Lagyan mo ng globe para perfect. hehe.
Good luck on this one bro, Looking good overall!
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Noted po eto sir bokkins slamat nkadaan kayo... Very Happy ung globe nagunaw n yta sir Very Happy he he next time po sir thanks... hippie
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