First post but not my first time.

by Critique1407 Mon Mar 02, 2009 5:07 am

comments and critics naman diyan sir. Tsaka kahit negative. welcome d2 sa post ko. hehe

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by Mastersketzzz Mon Mar 02, 2009 5:13 am

welcome to CGP sir, A higher resolution might be better, rendering is good, better BG maybe and shadow will complete your composition, the rest..okay... post more and God Bless...

by jenaro Mon Mar 02, 2009 5:16 am

ok ito sir!comment ko lang ung map ng wood...ung sa ceiling at sa lower ceiling same lang sila ng laki?i dont know kung dahil sa cam o sa map...but un lang comment ko...overall ok na poh sya sir!welcome sa cgp!keep posting...

by Critique1407 Mon Mar 02, 2009 5:21 am

nakafield of view kasi ung view sir. kaya parang same lng ung map.

by aldrinv2 Mon Mar 02, 2009 5:57 am

Sir,
Imho na lang on space planning. Seat back nakadikit na sa table on the left. You can move itong chair (sets of 4+table) into the center. Not necessary sa angle mo makita lang ng subject mo. 2nd mapping on the ceiling you've used is for flooring. Better to use wood planks. Para kasing nagkapalit ang flooring and ceiling map mo. yong lang sir. Keep on posting.

by vamp_lestat Mon Mar 02, 2009 10:00 am

i agree with sir aldrin.. on space planning. anyways as for me.. your camera shot is a bit low... cant see whats happening on the rear part. all i see are the back of your chairs... other comments have been said.

by bokkins Mon Mar 02, 2009 2:22 pm

wood is too much sa ceiling. wood on the ceiling is low res, try to use a better one. meron sa www.arroway.de ng mas mgagandang maps. also, ung side ng second floor could be "not wood" para may break naman. tama si aldrinv2, try to change the congfig of the chairs and tables in the middle, diagonal is a good configuration. Good luck! thumbsup

by ERICK Mon Mar 02, 2009 5:36 pm

bokkins wrote:wood is too much sa ceiling. wood on the ceiling is low res, try to use a better one. meron sa www.arroway.de ng mas mgagandang maps. also, ung side ng second floor could be "not wood" para may break naman. tama si aldrinv2, try to change the congfig of the chairs and tables in the middle, diagonal is a good configuration. Good luck!

i agree... noticed some noise on the right side of your render... better high res bg... study anthropometrics...

by Critique1407 Tue Mar 03, 2009 7:24 am

Thank you sa comments sir. very appreciated po talaga. More critics pa sir. then pahelp din po s mga dapat gawin. Tips and tricks for good interior scene. I really need the guides of the CGPMasters. hehehe i'll post for other 3D's na inapply ung mga comment snyo sir. kahit violent payan. ok lng. hahaha
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by demonpepper Wed May 06, 2009 11:59 am

good render, i agree also with sir aldrin

by uwak Wed May 06, 2009 12:13 pm

IMHO:
1. Furniture layout issues.
2. Wood is too much.
3. floor tiles might help.
4. look for better background.
5. noise issues.

yun lamang po sir...keep it up!
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by pixelburn Wed May 06, 2009 12:13 pm

natawa ako sa title ng post nyo sir ah!!!!! may konting kilite!!! hehehe!!!

nice post sir!! aprub ang lighting nyo!!!! thumbsup

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