two storey residential bldg.

share kulang ulit mga master... xenxa na isang view lang siningit kulang sa work...
comments and critics are welcome for improvement

wf : 3dsmax 2011 + vray 1.5 + cs5

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nice design sir masyadong colorful lang yung scene (composition), maraming umaagaw ng attention remove mo na lang siguro yung motor at yung pink na color na halaman (palitan mo nalang ng iba) masyado kasi matingkad.
*glass material pwede pa ma-improve..
*bluesh mo siguro yung sky or palitan mo either HDRI or vraysky.. give some contrast sa building & background...
*about sa design naman, better pang accent mo na lang yung ashlar, pwede na din replace mo ng white color (IMHO) sa may left side. TFS

noted po......salamat master sa pagdaan.....

Rheinfell wrote:nice design sir masyadong colorful lang yung scene (composition), maraming umaagaw ng attention remove mo na lang siguro yung motor at yung pink na color na halaman (palitan mo nalang ng iba) masyado kasi matingkad.
*glass material pwede pa ma-improve..
*bluesh mo siguro yung sky or palitan mo either HDRI or vraysky.. give some contrast sa building & background...
*about sa design naman, better pang accent mo na lang yung ashlar, pwede na din replace mo ng white color (IMHO) sa may left side. TFS