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villa
hello sir and maam, i would like to share our new project, its a contemporary minimalist villa, i hope you like it c&c are more than welcome
russky- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 46
Age : 47
Location : uae
Registration date : 07/02/2009
Re: villa
galing ser pang magazine na to post more
meiahmaya- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 767
Location : SINGAPORE
Registration date : 25/10/2008
Re: villa
looks really good, if i were to comment, composition of the 1st and last image can be improved.
1st - the distorted car is distracting, i know you used a wide angle lens to capture this but you need to do something about the car, either remove it or move it further away from the camera so that it does not create that odd lower left corner.
4th - the angles of the perspective are a bit too even, making the image have lesser impact than the 2nd or 3rd images (which are really well composed). what i mean by this is that the angle of the white perimeter around the facade is almost the same. this is sort of the same as taking a picture of a corner of a building with both side even
for those starting 3D, look at these images, you can learn a lot from these if you analyze it. and notice he kept the vertical lines perfectly vertical for all shots (which is good, in most cases).
LWF
1st - the distorted car is distracting, i know you used a wide angle lens to capture this but you need to do something about the car, either remove it or move it further away from the camera so that it does not create that odd lower left corner.
4th - the angles of the perspective are a bit too even, making the image have lesser impact than the 2nd or 3rd images (which are really well composed). what i mean by this is that the angle of the white perimeter around the facade is almost the same. this is sort of the same as taking a picture of a corner of a building with both side even
for those starting 3D, look at these images, you can learn a lot from these if you analyze it. and notice he kept the vertical lines perfectly vertical for all shots (which is good, in most cases).
LWF
LWF- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 92
Age : 49
Location : 17th Ave.
Registration date : 12/12/2008
Re: villa
Same comment as sir LWF regarding the car..Which is slightly distorted on that view. I also noticed on the 1st image, the tree on the foreground. IMHO, the tree trunk is a bit too reflective, which gives away the almost realistic rendered that you did. If not for that tree trunk, anyone can mistake this for a photo.
I love your sky background, is that a bitmap image? Maybe I can have one of those...just PM me for contact details..
Thanks
I love your sky background, is that a bitmap image? Maybe I can have one of those...just PM me for contact details..
Thanks
arkiedmund- Manager
- Number of posts : 3956
Age : 51
Location : Cavite
Registration date : 19/09/2008
Re: villa
superb rendering from u sir.. the masters have great observation sa gawa mo. emphasize, sayang ung distorted car... wen i first look at the images, na pa wow ako, honestly.... but wen i scroll down, first noticed talga ung car. anyways u did a great lighting here... also would like to commend the interior details u made. just enough so that it would not look bare from the exterior shots.
vamp_lestat- CGP Guru
- Number of posts : 1930
Age : 41
Location : Davao City, Philippines
Registration date : 27/11/2008
Re: villa
sir great design and rendering.. I am a big fan of modern design sir.. all the images are great sir..
sir patingin din po ng interior kung may time.. hehe
sir patingin din po ng interior kung may time.. hehe
Re: villa
Sir,
Galing nitong work mo pang-evermotion ang dating niya. Love ko yong 3rd image. Lighting mo rin tamang-tama sa scene mo. Keep on posting
Galing nitong work mo pang-evermotion ang dating niya. Love ko yong 3rd image. Lighting mo rin tamang-tama sa scene mo. Keep on posting
Re: villa
nice feeling when i look at those images.....
AUSTRIA- CGP Le Corbusier
- Number of posts : 2422
Age : 45
Location : Abu Dhabi UAE
Registration date : 19/09/2008
Re: villa
ok na ok ang rendering, ok na rin yung background sky mo kesa dun sa dati na pinakita mo sakin. dun naman sa trees sa 1st & 2nd image, tama sila nagmukhang metal yung trunks ng trees mo. adjust mo na lang siguro sa materials ng tree mo.
arcelm_m- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 26
Age : 55
Location : dubai,uae
Registration date : 15/12/2008
thank you
salamat sa mga coment nyo mga sir at maam, noted po lahat yan, thank you ulit sainyong lahat...........
russky- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 46
Age : 47
Location : uae
Registration date : 07/02/2009
Re: villa
parang ayaw kna mg-post di2..hehehe...lovely po 2 sir!!!keep it up!!
taga_probins- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 210
Age : 43
Location : VAULT 101
Registration date : 26/02/2009
Re: villa
angas mo sir....MAMAW k pagdating sa rendering,....
arki_vhin- CGP Dabarkads
- Number of posts : 2172
Age : 38
Location : batang caloocan, tinapon sa SG
Registration date : 21/09/2008
Re: villa
ganda lahat ng images dabest. ung material lng ng tree parang metal. ganda tlaga ng 3rd image, ganda ng efect ng sun sa glass.
corpsegrinder- CGP Guru
- Number of posts : 1423
Age : 39
Location : Zamboanga City
Registration date : 12/02/2009
Re: villa
salamat at nagustuhan nyo mga sir, taga_probins,sir pakunat(sir yan kasi yung napili nung client eh pero mali lang siguro yung tiling) pero salamat din syo sir, arki_vhin,sir corpsegrinder ,(yung trunk ng tree sir di kona kasi pinalitan yung material ng evermotion kaya di ko na din napansin, salamat din syo sir, noted na yan,) salamat ulit more power.........
russky- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 46
Age : 47
Location : uae
Registration date : 07/02/2009
Re: villa
galing bro... looks real...un nga lng car sa 1st image na distort pero the rest lufet...
warrakz- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 139
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 18/01/2009
Re: villa
nice sir ok to!
alwin- CGP Expert
- Number of posts : 2176
Age : 51
Location : basurero sa cebu
Registration date : 22/01/2009
Re: villa
concept, design and rendering... astig ung tubig
Stryker- The Architect
- Number of posts : 1875
Age : 46
Location : Tagaytay City
Registration date : 12/12/2008
Re: villa
galing ng rendering !!!!
super....
camera lng po medyo distort ang image di ko sure
kng sadyang ganoon lng...
ngunit gnunpaman.. gling talaga.
realistic..
solid
super....
camera lng po medyo distort ang image di ko sure
kng sadyang ganoon lng...
ngunit gnunpaman.. gling talaga.
realistic..
solid
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