slim barracks rise (studio unit)

hello po ule mga maestro

as usual, pacomment po ule para po magimprob

Some points to work on:

1. Images are overbright.
2. Mapping issues on wood material of your bed.
3. Carpet material needs improvement.
4. Wood floor lacks reflection and bumps, to make it look more realistic, specially since you did a very close camera capture.
5. Curtains look a bit stiff, or maybe it has something to do with your choice of materials.

You have a lot of potential, just some minor tweaks and I am sure you will be able to get it.

Cheers!

welcome sa cgp...carpet...anong nanyari sa displacement?iwas sunog sa susunod...ano ba ginamit mong rendering tool?practice lang sure yan mas lalong gaganda yan!

HI...ganda ng design mo sa interior...focus ka lang sa comments ni arkiedmud...next post mo...master ka na...

color correction lang bro and material selection..the rest ok na..post more

boss! ung brightness pa bawasan then ung carpet adjust mo kunti.
the rest ok na

medyo burnt nga talaga...saka yung carpet mo parang yelo na tulis tulis..adjust lang sa lighting....tweaks pa bosing!!keep posting

Sir,
The rest have been said. Imho additional na lang siguro mga casting ng shadows mo lang ang nakita ko wala. Keep on posting.

hi sir oseph.. comments been said sir.
in addition. try din tingin2x sa real photos..
para it would somehow inspire u the way u want sa visuals.- (there materials and lighting). ginagawa ko rin yan sir. para ma inspire din ako for my visual.


kip em coming sir...

sir.. sir arkiedmund have a very nice crit on ur work. one more thing po siguro... try not to loose the shadows... some objects sa visuals nyo.. looks floating.. if obserbahan ng mabuti... also u can try to put a reflection sa wood flooring nyo. kunting2x lang.. babaan nyo lang ung glossiness... carpet, really needs to be improve.

nasabi na nila lahat oseph.

trai and error lang bro, trial and error ...

gudluck

sir comments na sabi na
good luck

sakin sir displacement issues lang!!!!! pero lighting superb, keep on posting!!!

magaling ka na sir...medyo nahihirapan ka nga lang sa pag control ng ilaw mo lalo na ang vray sun mo sa labas...lagyan mo rin ng sunray bro para ok gawin mo lang s pshop..post more

hmmmm...burn out nga ung mga render mo....try mo kaya tsek ung default light baka nakalimutan mo off....minsan kasi nangyari sa akin yan... baka lang hehehe