vacation

I dreamt of having a kind of lifestyle and never came to reality... but instead, brought it out into my 3D vizualization...
(No post-photoshop work) Hope you like it....!!!

Crits and comments are all welcome....

sir ang gling nito h..lamig s mata.. wl ako maicomment sayo kc mgling k..turuan mo nga ako sir.nkita mo nmn cguro mga gawa ko..puro scanline..i know nmn vray but not to much..gsto ko n tlga mgshift.. nkkainspire vray users n mggling eh..ztub_1891@yahoo.com..email ko sir.. tnx

i know that this is your first time on max&vray.. but for a start, this is too far good behind every newbie on the field... just make a tweak here and there and you will get the most realistic render you'll ever see... if you need help just pm me...

camera angle siguro bro. medyo hindi kumbinsido sa akin lang ah.

nice render sir keep it up

Malaki ang potential ng scene mo bro. comments ko lang dito:
1. wood flooring, liitan mo pa ung mga planks.
2. more light should go in since all sides ung windows/door mo. lagyan mo ng mga nakavertical na vraylights malapit sa window para pandagdag sa illumination.
3. scale down the lampshade.
4. brighten your background para summer looking.
5. lower mo pa ng konti ung railings. 0.9-1.0meter ung normal
6. lower mo ung camera to eye level or lower pa. 1.2-1.6meter from the floor.
7. adjust mo pa ng konti sa photoshop. usually mas gaganda pa pag may post production.

good luck bro. gumagaling ka na sa max ah. keep it up!

butzoy wrote:sir ang gling nito h..lamig s mata.. wl ako maicomment sayo kc mgling k..turuan mo nga ako sir.nkita mo nmn cguro mga gawa ko..puro scanline..i know nmn vray but not to much..gsto ko n tlga mgshift.. nkkainspire vray users n mggling eh..ztub_1891@yahoo.com..email ko sir.. tnx

bro, madali naman matuto ng vray setup, kung ako nga natuto... lightwave3d artist ako at last month lang ako ng umpisang maghandson ng 3dsmax. why not ikaw, 3dsmax user talaga.... db??? interest at motivation lang makukuha mo rin...

ERICK wrote:i know that this is your first time on max&vray.. but for a start, this is too far good behind every newbie on the field... just make a tweak here and there and you will get the most realistic render you'll ever see... if you need help just pm me...

ok bro noted...

nomeradona wrote:camera angle siguro bro. medyo hindi kumbinsido sa akin lang ah.

ok update ko.... soon

bokkins wrote:Malaki ang potential ng scene mo bro. comments ko lang dito:
1. wood flooring, liitan mo pa ung mga planks.
2. more light should go in since all sides ung windows/door mo. lagyan mo ng mga nakavertical na vraylights malapit sa window para pandagdag sa illumination.
3. scale down the lampshade.
4. brighten your background para summer looking.
5. lower mo pa ng konti ung railings. 0.9-1.0meter ung normal
6. lower mo ung camera to eye level or lower pa. 1.2-1.6meter from the floor.
7. adjust mo pa ng konti sa photoshop. usually mas gaganda pa pag may post production.

good luck bro. gumagaling ka na sa max ah. keep it up!

ok adjustments noted... pointer no.2 meron nang vray sa tapat ng window mahina lang nilagay ko kaya indi obvious pero adjust ko pa rin.... thanks

SIR dickie_ilagan...nice works po!...carpet po ba ung nasa center nya?...kung carpet po iyon vray displacement nalang po...un lang at ung ibang suggestion nasabi na...

hi sir!!! ganda nng scene setup nyo... comments had been said..

i like the composition and materials.....

some room for improvement...
they've mentioned all the crits and comments.
but since you are new in 3dsmax, this is a very good start!
post more dude!

btw, funny looking sofa you got there dude!
parang mukha na naka-smile...hehe...napansin ko lng.

mystique wrote:SIR dickie_ilagan...nice works po!...carpet po ba ung nasa center nya?...kung carpet po iyon vray displacement nalang po...un lang at ung ibang suggestion nasabi na...

ok thanks for dropping

cubi_o: wrote:hi sir!!! ganda nng scene setup nyo... comments had been said..

i like the composition and materials.....

I'll surely update this lalo novice lang ako sa 3dsmax

torvicz wrote:some room for improvement...
they've mentioned all the crits and comments.
but since you are new in 3dsmax, this is a very good start!
post more dude!

btw, funny looking sofa you got there dude!
parang mukha na naka-smile...hehe...napansin ko lng.

Thanks for dropping in... nang gagamay pa po sa 3ds max..!!!

I thought no one will ever recognized...that hidden smile (actually my first hand model with 3ds), a sign of hope and happiness
and im enjoying 3ds....

godbless...

Here's a quick update... Keep me improving...




and a little crazy shoot angle....

galing bro. this is way way better than the old one. everything has change. astig. Next step mo dito is to strengthen your materials skill. para mas maenhance pa ang image. na to. keep it up!

things you could also try:
1. transfer the sun to the left so that ung ray nya makikitang pumapasok sa scene. ok na kahit walang curtain. para summer talaga ang dating.
2. change the background.
3. lower pa ung camera to 0.9 para mas dramatic.
4. if you're using standard camera, right-click mo then "apply camera correction modifier" para ma straighten up ang mga vertical lines.
5. check this articles about splotches, meron pa konti dun sa beam.
- http://www.metinseven.com/article_vray_splotches.htm
- http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=207639

good luck bro! gumagaling ka na talaga, di na maawat. nice carpet by the way!

bokkins wrote:galing bro. this is way way better than the old one. everything has change. astig. Next step mo dito is to strengthen your materials skill. para mas maenhance pa ang image. na to. keep it up!

things you could also try:
1. transfer the sun to the left so that ung ray nya makikitang pumapasok sa scene. ok na kahit walang curtain. para summer talaga ang dating.
2. change the background.
3. lower pa ung camera to 0.9 para mas dramatic.
4. if you're using standard camera, right-click mo then "apply camera correction modifier" para ma straighten up ang mga vertical lines.
5. check this articles about splotches, meron pa konti dun sa beam.
- http://www.metinseven.com/article_vray_splotches.htm
- http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=207639

good luck bro! gumagaling ka na talaga, di na maawat. nice carpet by the way!

thanks for that supportive informations... you made me gain some 3ds artistic quality output... i'll try make things happen.. by the way, the theme doesn't mean a summer looking type...just a typical vacation site.... alam mo na probono lang ito as personal project. hehehehehehehe... keep cool dude....

all points covered by masterguru bokkins... my two cents: a little more definition or "body" to the whole scene... right now its coming off as blurry... nice work though...

cloud20 wrote:all points covered by masterguru bokkins... my two cents: a little more definition or "body" to the whole scene... right now its coming off as blurry... nice work though...

salamat po

mas ok ang updated ser... comments been said by sir bokkins... just try to incorporate that... oks.. cheers

ERICK wrote:mas ok ang updated ser... comments been said by sir bokkins... just try to incorporate that... oks.. cheers

ok thanks po ang serbisyong totoo, kapamilya......

Nice render sir Dickie...Hmmm nasabi na ata lahat ni Sir Boks e.Sipag kseng mag comment nyan ni sir Boks e which is good and very informative..Good start po sir..Keep posting po..Goodluck po..Regards na din kay future Kumare.Hahahaaha..

ei sir dickie// nice render.. pwedeeeeeeeeee/ , ,ehehe.. na comment na nila lahat di ako tinirhan. . few more renders,, isa ka na rin sa mga monsters. / ehe