Cubiculum[Bedroom]

Share ko lang po mga sir, Done in 3dsmax 2012, vray, cs6,
Pahingi po ako ng CNC for my improvement, Please po
Thank you mga sir in advance,
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1sr View


2nd View


3rd view

Nice Design & Render sir.. Ganda ng Mood sir.

great design!

junieranoa wrote:Nice Design & Render sir.. Ganda ng Mood sir.

Thank you Sir , much appreciated, salamat po sa pagdaan

rodbrenz wrote:great design!

Maraming salamat sir

imho sir
medyo saturated and napalakas yung ilaw para sakin sir
bed sheet improve pa dyan din ako nahihirapan, sa 2nd image kasi halata na lumutang and may pumaloob na part sa bed kaya parang punit
bed bump parang styro na siya
carpet ayusin pa siguro liitan mo yung needle tapos konting comb pa and make it shiny konti pa yung mat
konting bump din sa floor

very nice design & render sir...
-like ko din yung mood ng scene mo...
*comment ko, yung blanket lang kelangan ng re-work sharp masyado tingnan... try mo bro MD (Marvelous Designer) for cloth siya.. mas realistic tingnan mas maganda...
* check / refine some of your material settings...
thanks for sharing...
ito sana makatulong
trial version http://www.marvelousdesigner.com/Marvelous/downloads.aspx
http://www.ronenbekerman.com/3d-cloth-modeling-with-marvelous-designer/

akoy wrote:imho sir
medyo saturated and napalakas yung ilaw para sakin sir
bed sheet improve pa dyan din ako nahihirapan, sa 2nd image kasi halata na lumutang and may pumaloob na part sa bed kaya parang punit
bed bump parang styro na siya
carpet ayusin pa siguro liitan mo yung needle tapos konting comb pa and make it shiny konti pa yung mat
konting bump din sa floor

bro try mo gumamit MD (Marvelous Designer) for cloth designer... close to reality output nya..
try mo ito trial version nila http://www.marvelousdesigner.com/Marvelous/downloads.aspx
http://www.ronenbekerman.com/3d-cloth-modeling-with-marvelous-designer/

akoy wrote:imho sir
medyo saturated and napalakas yung ilaw para sakin sir
bed sheet improve pa dyan din ako nahihirapan, sa 2nd image kasi halata na lumutang and may pumaloob na part sa bed kaya parang punit
bed bump parang styro na siya
carpet ayusin pa siguro liitan mo yung needle tapos konting comb pa and make it shiny konti pa yung mat
konting bump din sa floor

Maraming salamat sir "Akoy", noted lahat sir, i helps a lot,
Thank you sir for taking attention and time on my post, very appreciated po,
salamat po ulit sir ,

Rheinfell wrote:very nice design & render sir...
-like ko din yung mood ng scene mo...
*comment ko, yung blanket lang kelangan ng re-work sharp masyado tingnan... try mo bro MD (Marvelous Designer) for cloth siya.. mas realistic tingnan mas maganda...
* check / refine some of your material settings...
thanks for sharing...
ito sana makatulong
trial version http://www.marvelousdesigner.com/Marvelous/downloads.aspx
http://www.ronenbekerman.com/3d-cloth-modeling-with-marvelous-designer/

Thank you very much sir, noted din lahat sir, for my next rendering,
yes sir, beginner stage palang ako sa Marvelous,nagsisimula palang ako sir manuod ng mga tutoirials,
at napakagandang application,
salamat sir for the link, specialy sa second one,
maraming salamat ulit sir

russelyacat wrote:

akoy wrote:imho sir
medyo saturated and napalakas yung ilaw para sakin sir
bed sheet improve pa dyan din ako nahihirapan, sa 2nd image kasi halata na lumutang and may pumaloob na part sa bed kaya parang punit
bed bump parang styro na siya
carpet ayusin pa siguro liitan mo yung needle tapos konting comb pa and make it shiny konti pa yung mat
konting bump din sa floor

Maraming salamat sir "Akoy", noted lahat sir, i helps a lot,
Thank you sir for taking attention and time on my post, very appreciated po,
salamat po ulit sir ,

no problem bro hehe!

Ang linis bro. effect ba yan parang my fog sa loob o napalakas lang ang levels?

add ko lang ung bg bro sa 1st and 2nd image iba na ung angle ng camera ung bg ganun pa rin, i think may problema sa material ng curtain or nagoverlap ung shear sa black out,

effreymm wrote:Ang linis bro. effect ba yan parang my fog sa loob o napalakas lang ang levels?

Maraming salamat sir,
yung parang fog effect sir, galing ata ng curtain, nahirapan na ako sir alisin sa photoshop,
salamat sir sa pag sulyap

qcksilver wrote:add ko lang ung bg bro sa 1st and 2nd image iba na ung angle ng camera ung bg ganun pa rin, i think may problema sa material ng curtain or nagoverlap ung shear sa black out,

Salamat sir qcksilver, ou nga sir, i still having a hard time, sa pag lagay ng bg, specially sa may curtain,
pwede ba kayo sir magbigay ng tutorial on putting realistic bg behind translusent curtain, or kung sino po ang may tutorial, ikatutuwa po naming lahat at napakalaking tulong sa akin ,
Maraming salamat sir sa pag daan,

nice render..galing mo na talaga kabayan..yung cloth lang ng bedsheet parang plastic and some contrast siguro sa materials..neutral kasi lahat.. keep it up kid!

ortzak wrote:nice render..galing mo na talaga kabayan..yung cloth lang ng bedsheet parang plastic and some contrast siguro sa materials..neutral kasi lahat.. keep it up kid!

maraming salamat po sir Edward, i consider you as one of my mentor
Noted po sir, Thank you
salamat sa pag daan

work more on your fabric models and textures. lighting is fine but could be better.

pícaro3d wrote:work more on your fabric models and textures. lighting is fine but could be better.

thank you sir , Noted po lahat, maraming salamat