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Post by ME_nesperos_27 Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:43 am

just wanna share my previous works,,CcS are welcome..thanks mga masters!

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Post by bokkins Thu Feb 19, 2009 8:45 am

Second ang 3rd images are stunning! realistic ang dating. Welcome to cgp bro. Magaganda tong gawa mo, classy.

May mga suggestions lang ako para lalo pang mapaganda yung output mo.
1. Composition - sa architectural presentation, mas ok pag kita ang buong bahay. maganda ang pagkapresent mo dito, pro lumalabas na kulang ang information. Although pwede din itong iconsider na spot perspectives.
2. Garage clearance is a bit low, Taas mo pa cguro ng konti. They might not own a family van as of the moment, pro baka in the near future, maisipan nila, di na magkasya.
3. Stone on the first image has obvious repetitions, try to randomize it or use another map. check mo sa www.arroway.de for free maps.

Yun lang naman so far ang napansin ko. Rest is very well done. Hope you enjoy your stay here. Keep it up! 2thumbsup
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Post by arkiedmund Thu Feb 19, 2009 8:52 am

Welcome to CGPinoy...same comments as sir bokkins....the skill is there, you just have to tweak it a little bit more...
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Post by silvercrown Thu Feb 19, 2009 8:57 am

Nice Houses bro! thumbsup
Yung door sa 1st image, if you could change it into Deco Glass Panel Door? or at least match the design with your window...
Nice grass! add more bump sa stone and and randomize it...
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Post by Jay2x Thu Feb 19, 2009 11:08 am

yoH !! realism chills me to the bone the 2nd and 3rd image rocks!
the 1st one maps seems to be repetitive i can see the tiling .. yun lang po
welcome sayo bro 2thumbsup
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Post by LWF Thu Feb 19, 2009 1:41 pm

RATING based on a 100pt sore system that I am testing out to make it easier for people who are busy and don't have much rime to leave a comment that at least shows what area of the rendering is good or not so good.

100pts breakdown

20% = modeling (M)
25% = texturing and materials (T)
25% = lighting (L)
10% = entourage (E)
10% = compositon and story (CS)
10% = x-factor or overall wow effect (X)

Multiply this total by the degree of difficulty (0.9 being the simplest model and 1.0 being the hardest/more complex scenes)

So for this rendering:

M = 20
T = 22
L = 19
E = 10
C = 3
X = 6
SUB-TOTAL = 80
Degree of Difficulty = .97
TOTAL SCORE = 77.6

0 - 25 pts = very poor
26 - 50 pts = poor
51 - 65 pts = average
66 - 80 pts = good
81 - 90 pts = very good
91 - 100 pts = excellent


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Post by alwin Thu Feb 19, 2009 2:04 pm

kunting tweak na lang on your images sapul mo na yun hehe!
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Post by ME_nesperos_27 Thu Feb 19, 2009 4:10 pm

silvercrown wrote:Nice Houses bro! thumbsup
Yung door sa 1st image, if you could change it into Deco Glass Panel Door? or at least match the design with your window...
Nice grass! add more bump sa stone and and randomize it...
actually sir the first image is not my design, my instructor just let me do the rendering and modeling that's is why i am so limited with the design and the repetitive mapping,,,noted po un sir..thanks for the tips thumbsup
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Post by ME_nesperos_27 Thu Feb 19, 2009 4:13 pm

bokkins wrote:Second ang 3rd images are stunning! realistic ang dating. Welcome to cgp bro. Magaganda tong gawa mo, classy.

May mga suggestions lang ako para lalo pang mapaganda yung output mo.
1. Composition - sa architectural presentation, mas ok pag kita ang buong bahay. maganda ang pagkapresent mo dito, pro lumalabas na kulang ang information. Although pwede din itong iconsider na spot perspectives.
2. Garage clearance is a bit low, Taas mo pa cguro ng konti. They might not own a family van as of the moment, pro baka in the near future, maisipan nila, di na magkasya.
3. Stone on the first image has obvious repetitions, try to randomize it or use another map. check mo sa www.arroway.de for free maps.

Yun lang naman so far ang napansin ko. Rest is very well done. Hope you enjoy your stay here. Keep it up! 2thumbsup
thanks po sir bokkins,, ill try to make my work better in my nxt post.. Wink
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Post by ME_nesperos_27 Thu Feb 19, 2009 4:14 pm

arkiedmund wrote:Welcome to CGPinoy...same comments as sir bokkins....the skill is there, you just have to tweak it a little bit more...
slamat po sa pgdaan.. Laughing
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Post by ME_nesperos_27 Thu Feb 19, 2009 4:15 pm

Jay2x wrote:yoH !! realism chills me to the bone the 2nd and 3rd image rocks!
the 1st one maps seems to be repetitive i can see the tiling .. yun lang po
welcome sayo bro 2thumbsup
thanks for the warm welcome sir buttrock
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Post by ME_nesperos_27 Thu Feb 19, 2009 4:20 pm

LWF wrote:RATING based on a 100pt sore system that I am testing out to make it easier for people who are busy and don't have much rime to leave a comment that at least shows what area of the rendering is good or not so good.

100pts breakdown

20% = modeling (M)
25% = texturing and materials (T)
25% = lighting (L)
10% = entourage (E)
10% = compositon and story (CS)
10% = x-factor or overall wow effect (X)

Multiply this total by the degree of difficulty (0.9 being the simplest model and 1.0 being the hardest/more complex scenes)

So for this rendering:

M = 20
T = 22
L = 19
E = 10
C = 3
X = 6
SUB-TOTAL = 80
Degree of Difficulty = .97
TOTAL SCORE = 77.6

0 - 25 pts = very poor
26 - 50 pts = poor
51 - 65 pts = average
66 - 80 pts = good
81 - 90 pts = very good
91 - 100 pts = excellent
ill try to make
^^...ok sir thumbsup
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Post by jarul Thu Feb 19, 2009 6:20 pm

wow,,totohanan na to....
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Post by nomeradona Thu Feb 19, 2009 6:44 pm

LWF wrote:RATING based on a 100pt sore system that I am testing out to make it easier for people who are busy and don't have much rime to leave a comment that at least shows what area of the rendering is good or not so good.

100pts breakdown

20% = modeling (M)
25% = texturing and materials (T)
25% = lighting (L)
10% = entourage (E)
10% = compositon and story (CS)
10% = x-factor or overall wow effect (X)

Multiply this total by the degree of difficulty (0.9 being the simplest model and 1.0 being the hardest/more complex scenes)

So for this rendering:

M = 20
T = 22
L = 19
E = 10
C = 3
X = 6
SUB-TOTAL = 80
Degree of Difficulty = .97
TOTAL SCORE = 77.6

0 - 25 pts = very poor
26 - 50 pts = poor
51 - 65 pts = average
66 - 80 pts = good
81 - 90 pts = very good
91 - 100 pts = excellent

Wow may assessment criteria pa.. gawa kaya tayo ng rubric.
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Post by ME_nesperos_27 Fri Feb 20, 2009 4:59 am

jarul wrote:wow,,totohanan na to....

ngek hehe..kita ku po mga post nu..hihi galing nu po pla..maam?sir?
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Post by reggie0711 Fri Feb 20, 2009 8:22 am

galing ng roof sir.. 2thumbsup
nice medi design.. thumbsup ayos...
nasabi na nla mga comments
medyo pixelated lng... low res lng b toh...
anyways galing ng mga lighting mo d2..
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Post by darwinzzkie Sat Feb 21, 2009 4:11 am

welcome bro. sabi na eh, d mo hihindian imbitasyon ko sau sa CGP.
wala kapa rin kupas master ace
post more ung sakin under construction pa eh, doublethu:
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Post by vamp_lestat Sat Feb 21, 2009 5:48 pm

aus na aus... 2nd and 3rd image for me are the best.. they look so real to me... galing2x.. post more sir.. and welcome here sa cgp.
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Post by ME_nesperos_27 Wed Feb 25, 2009 1:24 am

reggie0711 wrote:galing ng roof sir.. 2thumbsup
nice medi design.. thumbsup ayos...
nasabi na nla mga comments
medyo pixelated lng... low res lng b toh...
anyways galing ng mga lighting mo d2..
yep sir low reso lng gmit ku dito mahina pa ksi pc ku ei..hihi..sir un pla hinihingi ku..wait ku po ha? thanks! peace man
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