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Re: exteriors
Second ang 3rd images are stunning! realistic ang dating. Welcome to cgp bro. Magaganda tong gawa mo, classy.
May mga suggestions lang ako para lalo pang mapaganda yung output mo.
1. Composition - sa architectural presentation, mas ok pag kita ang buong bahay. maganda ang pagkapresent mo dito, pro lumalabas na kulang ang information. Although pwede din itong iconsider na spot perspectives.
2. Garage clearance is a bit low, Taas mo pa cguro ng konti. They might not own a family van as of the moment, pro baka in the near future, maisipan nila, di na magkasya.
3. Stone on the first image has obvious repetitions, try to randomize it or use another map. check mo sa www.arroway.de for free maps.
Yun lang naman so far ang napansin ko. Rest is very well done. Hope you enjoy your stay here. Keep it up!
May mga suggestions lang ako para lalo pang mapaganda yung output mo.
1. Composition - sa architectural presentation, mas ok pag kita ang buong bahay. maganda ang pagkapresent mo dito, pro lumalabas na kulang ang information. Although pwede din itong iconsider na spot perspectives.
2. Garage clearance is a bit low, Taas mo pa cguro ng konti. They might not own a family van as of the moment, pro baka in the near future, maisipan nila, di na magkasya.
3. Stone on the first image has obvious repetitions, try to randomize it or use another map. check mo sa www.arroway.de for free maps.
Yun lang naman so far ang napansin ko. Rest is very well done. Hope you enjoy your stay here. Keep it up!
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Welcome to CGPinoy...same comments as sir bokkins....the skill is there, you just have to tweak it a little bit more...
arkiedmund- Manager
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Age : 51
Location : Cavite
Registration date : 19/09/2008
Re: exteriors
Nice Houses bro!
Yung door sa 1st image, if you could change it into Deco Glass Panel Door? or at least match the design with your window...
Nice grass! add more bump sa stone and and randomize it...
Yung door sa 1st image, if you could change it into Deco Glass Panel Door? or at least match the design with your window...
Nice grass! add more bump sa stone and and randomize it...
silvercrown- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 981
Age : 49
Location : Toronto, Mandaue, Polomolok
Registration date : 05/11/2008
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yoH !! realism chills me to the bone the 2nd and 3rd image rocks!
the 1st one maps seems to be repetitive i can see the tiling .. yun lang po
welcome sayo bro
the 1st one maps seems to be repetitive i can see the tiling .. yun lang po
welcome sayo bro
Jay2x- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 743
Age : 37
Location : Pampanga
Registration date : 09/11/2008
Re: exteriors
RATING based on a 100pt sore system that I am testing out to make it easier for people who are busy and don't have much rime to leave a comment that at least shows what area of the rendering is good or not so good.
100pts breakdown
20% = modeling (M)
25% = texturing and materials (T)
25% = lighting (L)
10% = entourage (E)
10% = compositon and story (CS)
10% = x-factor or overall wow effect (X)
Multiply this total by the degree of difficulty (0.9 being the simplest model and 1.0 being the hardest/more complex scenes)
So for this rendering:
M = 20
T = 22
L = 19
E = 10
C = 3
X = 6
SUB-TOTAL = 80
Degree of Difficulty = .97
TOTAL SCORE = 77.6
0 - 25 pts = very poor
26 - 50 pts = poor
51 - 65 pts = average
66 - 80 pts = good
81 - 90 pts = very good
91 - 100 pts = excellent
100pts breakdown
20% = modeling (M)
25% = texturing and materials (T)
25% = lighting (L)
10% = entourage (E)
10% = compositon and story (CS)
10% = x-factor or overall wow effect (X)
Multiply this total by the degree of difficulty (0.9 being the simplest model and 1.0 being the hardest/more complex scenes)
So for this rendering:
M = 20
T = 22
L = 19
E = 10
C = 3
X = 6
SUB-TOTAL = 80
Degree of Difficulty = .97
TOTAL SCORE = 77.6
0 - 25 pts = very poor
26 - 50 pts = poor
51 - 65 pts = average
66 - 80 pts = good
81 - 90 pts = very good
91 - 100 pts = excellent
Last edited by LWF on Thu Feb 19, 2009 3:36 pm; edited 2 times in total
LWF- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 92
Age : 49
Location : 17th Ave.
Registration date : 12/12/2008
Re: exteriors
kunting tweak na lang on your images sapul mo na yun hehe!
alwin- CGP Expert
- Number of posts : 2176
Age : 51
Location : basurero sa cebu
Registration date : 22/01/2009
Re: exteriors
actually sir the first image is not my design, my instructor just let me do the rendering and modeling that's is why i am so limited with the design and the repetitive mapping,,,noted po un sir..thanks for the tipssilvercrown wrote:Nice Houses bro!
Yung door sa 1st image, if you could change it into Deco Glass Panel Door? or at least match the design with your window...
Nice grass! add more bump sa stone and and randomize it...
Re: exteriors
thanks po sir bokkins,, ill try to make my work better in my nxt post..bokkins wrote:Second ang 3rd images are stunning! realistic ang dating. Welcome to cgp bro. Magaganda tong gawa mo, classy.
May mga suggestions lang ako para lalo pang mapaganda yung output mo.
1. Composition - sa architectural presentation, mas ok pag kita ang buong bahay. maganda ang pagkapresent mo dito, pro lumalabas na kulang ang information. Although pwede din itong iconsider na spot perspectives.
2. Garage clearance is a bit low, Taas mo pa cguro ng konti. They might not own a family van as of the moment, pro baka in the near future, maisipan nila, di na magkasya.
3. Stone on the first image has obvious repetitions, try to randomize it or use another map. check mo sa www.arroway.de for free maps.
Yun lang naman so far ang napansin ko. Rest is very well done. Hope you enjoy your stay here. Keep it up!
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slamat po sa pgdaan..arkiedmund wrote:Welcome to CGPinoy...same comments as sir bokkins....the skill is there, you just have to tweak it a little bit more...
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thanks for the warm welcome sirJay2x wrote:yoH !! realism chills me to the bone the 2nd and 3rd image rocks!
the 1st one maps seems to be repetitive i can see the tiling .. yun lang po
welcome sayo bro
Re: exteriors
ill try to makeLWF wrote:RATING based on a 100pt sore system that I am testing out to make it easier for people who are busy and don't have much rime to leave a comment that at least shows what area of the rendering is good or not so good.
100pts breakdown
20% = modeling (M)
25% = texturing and materials (T)
25% = lighting (L)
10% = entourage (E)
10% = compositon and story (CS)
10% = x-factor or overall wow effect (X)
Multiply this total by the degree of difficulty (0.9 being the simplest model and 1.0 being the hardest/more complex scenes)
So for this rendering:
M = 20
T = 22
L = 19
E = 10
C = 3
X = 6
SUB-TOTAL = 80
Degree of Difficulty = .97
TOTAL SCORE = 77.6
0 - 25 pts = very poor
26 - 50 pts = poor
51 - 65 pts = average
66 - 80 pts = good
81 - 90 pts = very good
91 - 100 pts = excellent
^^...ok sir
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LWF wrote:RATING based on a 100pt sore system that I am testing out to make it easier for people who are busy and don't have much rime to leave a comment that at least shows what area of the rendering is good or not so good.
100pts breakdown
20% = modeling (M)
25% = texturing and materials (T)
25% = lighting (L)
10% = entourage (E)
10% = compositon and story (CS)
10% = x-factor or overall wow effect (X)
Multiply this total by the degree of difficulty (0.9 being the simplest model and 1.0 being the hardest/more complex scenes)
So for this rendering:
M = 20
T = 22
L = 19
E = 10
C = 3
X = 6
SUB-TOTAL = 80
Degree of Difficulty = .97
TOTAL SCORE = 77.6
0 - 25 pts = very poor
26 - 50 pts = poor
51 - 65 pts = average
66 - 80 pts = good
81 - 90 pts = very good
91 - 100 pts = excellent
Wow may assessment criteria pa.. gawa kaya tayo ng rubric.
Re: exteriors
jarul wrote:wow,,totohanan na to....
ngek hehe..kita ku po mga post nu..hihi galing nu po pla..maam?sir?
Re: exteriors
galing ng roof sir..
nice medi design.. ayos...
nasabi na nla mga comments
medyo pixelated lng... low res lng b toh...
anyways galing ng mga lighting mo d2..
nice medi design.. ayos...
nasabi na nla mga comments
medyo pixelated lng... low res lng b toh...
anyways galing ng mga lighting mo d2..
reggie0711- CGP Guru
- Number of posts : 1680
Age : 42
Location : palaboy laboy sa singapore
Registration date : 31/10/2008
Re: exteriors
welcome bro. sabi na eh, d mo hihindian imbitasyon ko sau sa CGP.
wala kapa rin kupas master ace
post more ung sakin under construction pa eh, doublethu:
wala kapa rin kupas master ace
post more ung sakin under construction pa eh, doublethu:
darwinzzkie- Guwapingz
- Number of posts : 649
Age : 38
Location : Manila, Aguilar Pangasinan
Registration date : 18/02/2009
Re: exteriors
aus na aus... 2nd and 3rd image for me are the best.. they look so real to me... galing2x.. post more sir.. and welcome here sa cgp.
vamp_lestat- CGP Guru
- Number of posts : 1930
Age : 41
Location : Davao City, Philippines
Registration date : 27/11/2008
Re: exteriors
yep sir low reso lng gmit ku dito mahina pa ksi pc ku ei..hihi..sir un pla hinihingi ku..wait ku po ha? thanks!reggie0711 wrote:galing ng roof sir..
nice medi design.. ayos...
nasabi na nla mga comments
medyo pixelated lng... low res lng b toh...
anyways galing ng mga lighting mo d2..
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