Mix Used Building (exterior-scanline)

i just want to post po my latest propose project in Angeles City, Pampanga. A rural bank will occupy the ground floor, office spaces for the second floor and dormitory for third and fourth floor.

Model and render in VIZ 2004 + PS + PP

I used texture sky daylight for my lighting,,,low settings for materials and not too much detail on it because im using only a single core with a 512 RAM. Anyway,,,c & c's are very much welcome!

ampf!!! ibuo mona kc ung quad mo eh tol... ..nice one whey!!! post pa tol!!! ...oist dami mona project painom ka pg uwi nmin ha...hihihihihiii...

My advice is time u should shift from scanline to vray,to improve more on better presentation. Try to experiment other option of building color for comparison. make lively your presentation by adding people to scale the height of bldg. add good reflection of window glass.

I hope I gave u a constructive advice.

@odi - nyahhhh,,basta malapit nalang mabuo quad ko,,,thanks sa pagdaan,,,,cge papainom ako sa pag uwi mo at walang uuwing di lasing

@i3dness - thanks po sa constructive advice, i will shift na po sa vray soon,,hinihintay nalang mabuo new rig ko,,,i want try tlaga other colors pero i will stick muna sa corporate colors(blue & gray) ng owner(Unity bank),,tatanungin ko muna owner if ok lang gumamit ng other colors,,,i will improve the composition pag may extra time,,medyo busy lang dito sa office,,

same as above... bro sabihin mo sa mga rural bank na yan na wag tumakbo ha. yung bacolor rural bank yun bank holiday daw hangga mgayon nakasara pa.

whey ot ede sikasu...
hmmmm scanline...
---as it is ok naman, play on the shadows a bit more para more depth... completely forgot how to since matagal na ako di nags-scanline pero i'm sure alam mo kung papano...
---my personal basic rule sa commercial type renders; populate... make it appear humming with activity...
---too much foreground flora for me...
---upgrade to max+vray...

damo whey...

@ sir nomer - 23 branches na ata yan sa pampanga and still expanding kaya malayong tumakbo yan. thanks sa pagdaan

@ sir cloud - uling scanline yamu kaya ali de sikasu,,hehehe,,anyway thanks sa personal advice,,,i will update it soon

scanline grabe those were the pahirapan days,,,

i see that you have enhance it with ps sir, unlike yesterday it was overbright especially the foreground,

-i like the massing and design of the edifice,
-lagyan mo naman ng glass sir with matching mga kapitbahay na din para di siya magmukhang isolated,,,
-people po sir in need po siya,,,

nice image sir! yung glass tweak kaya, na intriga ako sa tree na nasa right side kasi kung i trace mo nasa shoulder mismo nang road ang bagsak nang puno nya!
anyway overall great & nice render BTW

sir.. ok namn po ung render.. viz pa.... my comment would be on the cut and paste of the entourage... medyo.. a bit off... kulang lang po siguro sa landscaping arrangement. and shadow as well.. pansin ko lang ung right tree.... it seems na sa road na tumubo on that height... un lang po sir...

big improvement whey compared dun sa una mong pinost.

Here are my suggestions for projects like this based sa ginawa ko na builidng before.
1. fake the buildings sa side. mas ok ang output pag may katabi syang buildings din. kahit super faded na. unlike sa bare lang at magisa lang sya.
2. use fuscia, bright green on the windows. para madali syang iselect sa photoshop at palitan mo ng reflected glass after. It's a china technique and it's very effective.

Comment ko naman is darken mo lang ang grass or lessen mo ang saturation.

I believe that this is a rushed project. Very effiecient ang paggamit mo ng scanline dito and thanks for sharing sa process. You did a very good job. keep it up bro!