modern house

gud day cgpips.....

pa cc po,,modern house in SU+vray
background done in PS at iba pang abobots....

dude nice work...

have some issues though with the mapping of your stones..
you may put bump to give it some depth. you may improve your grass
also by adding displacement...scene looks too bright, can't see much of shadows making the scene flat...

I know you can improve this one...

i like the design bro...keep it up!

PM me bro, if you need a tutorial for displacement na bigay din sakin ng ating mga kaibigan dito sa CGPinoy.

torvicz wrote:dude nice work...

have some issues though with the mapping of your stones..
you may put bump to give it some depth. you may improve your grass
also by adding displacement...scene looks too bright, can't see much of shadows making the scene flat...

I know you can improve this one...

hehe tama ka bro sa stone nga ako nahirapan kac ang map image nyan masaydo maliit kya pag map makita mo talaga diperincya,,
at.... nka bump nayan hehe...(d klaro sori) kac pag gamit ko ng dsplace naga crash.. again & again... & i always get "bug splat" on my face heheeee

too bad, you may increase the bump value..see if it'll do the trick...good luck!

sir, IMHO... mejo off yung picket fence... mas maganda siguro kung same character din syta ng buiLding...

render Lng ng render!!!

kaLbo wrote:sir, IMHO... mejo off yung picket fence... mas maganda siguro kung same character din syta ng buiLding...

render Lng ng render!!!

hehe.... nice eyes bro...sabi kna nga may makakita dn... template na kac dikit dikit kna lang...madalian kac no tym na pagawa nga model.... tnx bro....

Nice Design, Nice Lighting!
i agree with the comments bro...

keep working and tweaking pa brother
concentrate on your textures yan,
ang magbibigay buhay sa output mo...!!!
tip lang...

cheers

bro
comment lang ako

ok ang massing ng structure pati design
pero sa combination mo ng color scheme at texture hindi bagay sa design bro
yung cherry wood kung papalitan mo ng dark wenge para modern di ba yung cherry wood kasi pang mga classic design yan
yung bato bato palitan mo ng travertine marble para walang noise, para minimal ang lines alang masyadong curve na line
lastly tangalin mo na yung brown paint lahat white paint na lang
accent mo na yung dark wenge na wood.
para maging modern nga.

good luck bro.

bro, check mo to sa www.arroway.de , makakatulong to sa stone mo. libre yung mga smaller images nila.

http://www.arroway-textures.de/en/products/stone-1/contents

meron din sila wood. makakatulong sa mga kulang mo na textures.

www.got3d.com naman sa grass.

You have got the talent, kulang lang ung right tools. good luck bro!

OT: ganda ng car mo.

i agree with the comments posted here bro, off yung wood color,,,as well as the plants,,saturated lang talaga di gaano nagbeblend sa scene mu,,and i think the car is kinda small para sa akin....design is good,,,just keep in touch ditu and u'll improve a lot...

wow modern na modern sir,,, ur render is very good,,,but some mat ay kulang po ng bump at ung kahoy saturated ung kulay un lng naman bro,,, just keep in touch at marami pong maba2it dito handang magbigay ng tutorial...

nice design sir,, may be camera correct lang sir mas ok,, try lang po

bumps,displacement lang ayos ka na!perfect na! keep it up sir!

nheil share ko lang a few pointers

1. camera angle - aside from camera correction, just make sure the source and targets are the same z - level. para direcho ung verticals.
2. stonework - mas maganda kung me slight bump or displacement.
3. stones - they look like marshmallows sir, siguro apply ka lang ng a few stone textures.
4. ung texture ng grass looks like felt, again, suggestion ko apply a better grass texture.
5. framing ng compositions.. make sure na me enough sky para maibalance ung scene.
6. car materials can still be improved.

materials (textures and shader properties) all need to be improved. try testing out materials one at a time.

also keep your verticals perfectly vertical (use camera correction modifier). look at professional architectural photography and you will notice that aside from special camera angles, all verticals are vertical (is siopa here?)

LWF

nice concept... gusto ko mga gnyng modern architecture... cgro ung grass lng skn... displacement will do.... crazy cut stones hmm... medyo flat ang dating... nice car thou... whats with the yellow stone... hehe!! medyo off eh.. palitan mu nlng ng natural na mapping

mga sir... tnx talaga...hehehe... i reli like the comments....

about the grass... nd ko kac ma displce kaya g bump kna lng kaya mukha lng cya felt hehehehe.... tnx sir mushroom for the IMHO

and the camera.. slope kac yung lupa gusto owner na parang nakatingala cya sa bahay nya

master bokkins tnx sa link ha.....
thnk u so much....

mga masters try ko update a new one, and try two apply all the CC...
pwo i dought kung ma apply ko ang displce,,kac naga crush kac software ko pag may displce ako apply... maybe PS ko nalng dayain...heheheeee

master bokkins... godsend ka talaga... ur like an angel na binagsak sa lupa para sa min..... heheeeeeeee